ARSHI FF: PAYBACK ~ THREAD 4 ~ Part 23 (11/04)

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ayesha998

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Posted: 11 years ago

#311

This part is damm good
Loved it
Hope to read many more as such.

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ZakiZ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#312

this caring Arnav is so... i cant find a word... perfect, i guess... he is perfect.. all the tension between the two is very very interesting.. these last 2 updates were quite hot!!! wonderfully written... i m waiting n waiting for next part..

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maanmeet1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#313

Splendid it was

One of the best updts so far

The talk and opening up...really nice

Nk showed him a mirror and which was required

Khushi's thinking desires and all...unfulfilled...feel for her

I don't feel anything for prachi...

Liking Arnav's care but he has to do a lot more

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mbbsrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#314

Ohhh totally unexpected update..

Especially after reading the teaser..

Anyways it was really good..loved it...

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#315

fabulous part

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Sarah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#316

Amazing and superb update,

It is sweet of Arnav to ring NK on behalf of Khushi but the stuff NK said was true and Arnav should feel bad as Khushi was never at fault but still got punished.

Wow khushi's request to Arnav certainly left him stunned but I'm glad they shared the brief gentle kiss and did not go further.

So Arnav does actually want Khushi to stay with after the baby is born and also wants to marry her again, I think he needs to speak to her soon and confess his true feelings as Khushi needs assurance as well as promises for a future together.

Awww love the fact Arnav danced with Khushi that was just so sweet and adorable,

I loved the update, it was a brilliant read.

Thanks for the PM xx