FF: Winter Chills, part 15 page 54 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: shalini_shakti

Awesome pari..!!!
Poor sanyu she all broken...!!!!:(:(
Hmm... It was very small update..
Wanna big one next tym plz..
Update next part ASAP...!!
Will be eagerly waiting..:):)
Love
Shalini



I promise that she will be back to her strong self in the next part... Even I don't always want to make her cry 😉

Small update because my lec had finished and then I had a lab to go to... SO yeah, hopefully a longer update on tues!

Thank for commenting hun😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: angel.thomas

First of all thank you for having pity on your readers like me by updating before Tuesday🤗. This pace does not seem slow, its perfect.😊 (Although I am desperate to know the reason why Randhir left Sanyukta and also Randhir to know about Aryan😉)


hahahah! Actually I read your comment on the last part and was like maybe I will try to write something... And then boom, I just couldn't stop myself

All in good time... Patience ka fruit meetha hota hai😆 (my hindi is really bad😆)... Anyways, Thank You for the comment😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Done! Replied to everyone'c comments and Damn! Guys you all are way tooo sweet!

Also, a big Thank you to those who always like the updates... Thank You!

And even a bigger bigger Thank You to those who always leave behind a lovely comment for me to read ... Thank Youuu!

😃 🤗 ❤️

Pari 😎

PS: next update on tuesday... AND, say good-bye to the emotional Sanyukta... We will start seeing the fire-brand back in part 5 😉
Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
wow dear this one is awesome ...but feeling sad for sanyu

sanyu is really broken from heart...

i dont what randhir had done...but surly so bad
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

wow dear this one is awesome ...but feeling sad for sanyu

sanyu is really broken from heart...

i dont what randhir had done...but surly so bad


All shall be revealed in good time ( I sound like a gyaani baba😆)

I really want to make sure that this is the last time there will be painful tears coming from her eyes... I pinki promise😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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srry dear i was not able to reply to ur post...
this was one was as usual superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks a lot for the p.m

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: niranjanastar

srry dear i was not able to reply to ur post...
this was one was as usual superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks a lot for the p.m


No problem honey! No need to say sorry silly!!!! You can comment whenever you want 😃

Naaaw.. Thank You for the lovely comment deary 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What up SHians?! (urr, the roof gurl)... Okay, so that was a lame one, sorry guys... Hope you all are doing well... Also, I was planning this "SS" yesterday, and I managed to get up to part 13 as a minimum... So, guys let me know if that should be adequate or not?


Also, there will be mistakes, as I haven't proof read and wrote this part in a rushed rushed manner


And if anyone watched Iss Pyaar ko Kya Naam Doon (I think I saw someone blushing out there😉) well the song is from there... Happy Readings!

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Part 5:


After leaving from her office, Sanyukta goes to the doctors to get her wound dressed...


*While driving on the roads*


Today's breakdown was unnecessary Sanyukta... So, he turned up at your office as part of the business deal... There is no need to tell Parth and Vidhushi^ about this incident... I need to block myself from having emotional breakdowns... He does not affect in any way. Period!


" Tu hi bata mere maula... Tu hi bata mere rabba...

Tu hi bata mere maula... Tu hi bata mere rabba...

Fasle milo ke hai, Dono hai alag hi disha... Kabhi yeh mile payenge... Nahin kisi ko hai pata...

Nahin kisi ko hai pata..."


After having had her stitches and her left hand bandaged Sanyukta drives to her and Aryan's modest home... This is where all her memories of him reside... Aryan was born here and had spent all his childhood here...


After knowing she was pregnant with Randhir's child, Sanyukta had promised herself to dedicate all of her remaining breaths to the life that was growing inside her... She knew that she had to keep herself up again and just go with the rollercoaster that is called life!


She had built her empire by herself, all for her child... Even being pregnant with HER child, she still managed to run, attend and organise site inspections, meetings and presentations... She had made a reputation for being a hard-working, dedicated, organised tigress... And I am not going to let a heart-break get in the way... Mr Shekhawat, the tigress is back!


Since Aryan was leaving for boarding school today, Sanyukta had to make sure all his things ready to be packed... It was a ritual for them to pack for school together... Just as she had finished organising his stuff, Aryan ran up to his Sanyu to give her a big hug...


"Oh hello baby!" winced Sanyukta, as Aryan had accidently squeezed her left hand... However with a bright smile on her face, both the mother and her son got to pack his stuff...


Knowing the ritual, Vidhushi had dropped off Aryan and did now sitting in the lounge know that the mother-son needed some privacy... Feeling the cravings for cake, Vidhushi knew Sanyukta always had chocolate cake in the fridge, Vidhushi sat herself with a plate full of cake in front of the TV watching SRK do his signature pose (Lol, my mom is watching DDLJ guys😆)


"Sanyu, did I tell you that Steve's father had gifted him a car for his birthday! He asked him about daddy, and I told me him that my mother is my father... He seemed confused, but the matron smiled at my answer" said Aryan in a matter-of-a-fact way...


Knowing her son's knack for "interesting" answers, Sanyukta just smiled at her son's innocence...


"Well Aryan, did I tell you I saw something wrapped in gold gift paper in the corner for you... I was going to open it for you, but I thought you should open it yourself... Go" said Sanyukta as she motioned Aryan to the corner in his room... Knowing her son's fetish for Iron Man, Sanyukta had ordered an Iron Man mask before hand...


"Wow! Mom you are the best!!!!" said an overly-excited Aryan who was thrilled to finally have this mask, for which he was persuading his mom for over two months now...


Seeing Aryan's happiness was enough to make Sanyukta forget about everything that had happened between her and Randhir... His happiness was infectious and made Sanyukta forget all her miseries, struggles and stresses in life... After all, she had only lived for Aryan all these years...


"Okay Aryan! But now listen to me, remember to-" ~Before Sanyukta could finish her sentence, Aryan had interrupted her, while Sanyukta smiled listening to her own list~


"Yes Sanyu... I will:

1) 1) Brush my teeth in the morning and night.

2) 2) Eat all meals without any fuss, even if it is bhindi (yuck)

3) 3) I will not correct my teacher, even if they are wrong

4) 4) I will TRY to not to argue with anyone

5) 5) I will call you every week

6) 6) I will do all my homework

7) ...


~Before Aryan could finish the list his mother had prepared for me~, "He has heard that list a thousand times by now Sanyu"... Vidhushi had now joined them with her plate of cake and teary eyes saying how SRK is the most emotive and gorgeously dimpled man alive... (yes guys, his dimples are worth dying for)

"Let's go Aryan, time for your bus..." said Sanyukta chaining up her luggage... She dragged his suitcase and bag, while Aryan was still playing with his mask and excitedly talking about meeting his best friend Andrew...

Sanyukta dropped off Aryan at the assigned bus stop (school buses guys), and gave him a tight hug and a wet kiss on his cheek, which Aryan cheekily wiped off mouthing "MOM"

*After dropping off Aryan, Vidhushi and Sanyukta are in the car*

Sanyukta's phone beeps, with a text message from Randhir...


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And what did he say!??! Well, even I don't know... Guess we shall find out tomorrow...

Okay guys so, Vidhushi really (clue REALLY) irritated me in Monday's ep... I was like, "this gurl is such a pain in the ass...🤬" But I really didn't want to change the Vidhushi in this SS, so I let it be... Please leave in your comments (the good, bad and the ugly) and likes...

Love you all!

Pari 🤗


PS: Guys, this is probably the worst part to this FF... I don't know, I feel like it is 🤔... I shall try better in the next part 😃.. Promise! aab eggs throw kaar sakte ho guys😆

Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyy update 😊
plz cont soon waitng
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was soo good! ure a superb writer.. so upd tomorow?

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