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samairaa gupta

@iraa_parsh

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#291

Res!!
Mission Accomplished!!
Yayyy!!!
Edited:
Awww...you dedicated to me and here I'm am unresing at the last!!!
Sowwwieee :(

Ohk so Part13:
It started with lil seriousness then it got funny!!!!!! Bwahahaha!!!! xD 🤣
I loved that Vidushi-Sanyu-Randhir part at the beginning ...was LMAO
🤣 🤣 🤣

Then the confession!!!!
Brilliantly penned!!!!
That was really touching!!
After all he got to know about Aryan. Thank god!!
Actually thank you!!

Part14: I loved this update.
Each part of this update was flawless and emotive!!
The pain and the regression of Randhir you described was commendable!!!!
Written with utter perfection!!!
I loved both the parts!!!!

Update the next part soon.
Will unres on time.
I promise!!xD
Love ya
Samaira
PS- My cmmnt is not what it shud have been for an awesome update like this. Sorry for that!
PPS- blame the CVs for my late Unres ..not me 🤣 yea bit of my laziness too xD🤣

Edited by iraa_parsh - 11 years ago

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh
Res!!
Mission Accomplished!!
Yayyy!!!

And the balance in this world is restored 😆

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DreamyReader

@DreamyReader

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#293

Res!!

Unres~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Hey!!!

I am extremely sorry for the delay!!

Ummm no excuses!!

I was just being lazy!!!😕

I am so glad that you gave us double updates!!! Yay!!!!⭐️

"What the f**k guys! What the hell are you waiting for?!!?!? I am about to push out a pumpkin sized baby through a pea-sized whole!!!!!! Will you both get moving??!??!!" yelled Vidhushi bringing Sanyukta out of her trance, while Randhir was stuck at the word "pea-sized"

"Aaarrrggg!!! Parth I am going to kill you the next time you even come near with those seductive intentions!! You wait and watch!" Vidhushi moaned, her contractions getting more and more painful by the passing minute.

@bold-these lines cracked me up!!!!😆

Both the updates were amazing!!!

It is one of my favourite FF!!!

I wish I could write like you!!!😊

I am eagerly waiting for the next update!!

Thanks for the PM!'

Kaetki❤️

Edited by lastsong - 11 years ago

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Nia | Rii

@anyania

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#294

res..unresing. .
yeah! he got to know truth...
now what will happen?
I really want to see a father-son bonding..it will be so cute na..
eagerly waiting for the next part. .
update soon.waiting. .

Edited by anyania - 11 years ago

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#295

Oh God! SO many RESes already! :(

Pari!! We were chatting SO much on WA and you couldn't tell me that you were updating!!! :/

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Edited!

Pari, I swear I had the longest comment typed out for you but my internet went off while I was posting it, so I hate to say it, but I don't have t in me to type all of it again! All I can say is that stop being modest and tell me when you have a double-trouble update! I loved these two! The individual thoughts of the two characters! :')

Always,

Arushi

Edited by PrussianBlue - 11 years ago

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Gargi

@Gargi.swaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Res

*unres*

So,first things first...I just smacked myself for not coming across this piece of work until recently. ..I got d pm,immediately rushed here n reserved a place for myself, n all of this when I didn't know what d ff was all about. ..I am mad ,eh??😛but it was Pari's work after all n I was sure it would b worth a read...😊

Coming to d story, lemme tell u I read all 14 parts in one go,vich u probably have guessed by now,but ya,I did it!!I got driven to d fic after reading d first chapter n found myself getting completely immersed in it till I reached d third one...I don't remember when he said it,but when Aryan said my mother is my father, it was d best sentence of d fic...for me,it still is!!Randhir's abduction was indeed very filmy n although it was supposed to b a serious scene, I found myself giggling until d very end (sorry, I just couldn't help myself😳)I really find such dramas very amusing! !

Then come our Swamiji n Vidushi...as much as I love Parth being himself, it's still hard for me to imagine a not-so-evil Vidushi (again, can't help)Sanyukta's emotional turmoil, Randhir's guilt and his will to mend d broken strings, everything well emoted!!oh,and I forgot, Vidushi's comment when her Labour pains started, it was effing hilarious! !Pea-sized hole??🤣

Crap!!this was supposed to b a short comment n I as usual ended up writing an essay!!sowwiee!!😃Did I mention I absolutely loved d ff??

Love,

Gargi❤️

Edited by Gargi.swaron - 11 years ago

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue
Oh God! SO many RESes already! :(
Pari!! We were chatting SO much on WA and you couldn't tell me that you were updating!!! :/

It's 'Res' ki bahar! 😆

Urrrm, I like being modest... No seriously I can't bring up topics like such... Am weird like this😳

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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#298

Phewww I am so happy and yaay pestering so works 😆😆

I saw the PM and the very first thing is to rush here ... OMG

Me seeing the PM

then all so excited

It was so nice and he get to know about aryan ... poor baby missed 9 years of his kid

in tears

How I am feeling now

Edited by -DamnedDrooler- - 11 years ago

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angel.thomas

@angel.thomas

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#299

Finally Randhir knows it...all thanks to Vidhushi.😉 Amazing potrayal of Randhir's emotions. 👏

Thanks for the long updates😛

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Ayesha

@BeyondDreams

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#300

Awesome double updates... Too good... N especially vidhushi...lol... The way she is... Spell bound by the updates... Thanks 4 the pm.. N ya wen u update plz pm me again... Would love to read the further parts... Update ASAP...

Love
Ayesha...