Arnav's Revelation Of Love NEW 15/10/14

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Sheetal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Good one will love to follow story

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shipra.aqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Hey, that's not fine...

That was a cliffhanger...

But all in all a very good story...

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sheetalmjk
Good one will love to follow story

Thanks I will PM you. I post on Sundays EST.

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: shipra.aqua
Hey, that's not fine...
That was a cliffhanger...

But all in all a very good story...

I love to leave you hanging and possibly wanting more? Thanks for reading!

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

asr tortured, his mind fogged by thoughts of a girl, this girl in red, everywhere... all his moments with her. beautiful thoughts you explore... always excites. always.

and she in a flap too. back of her neck registers his presence. wonderful. waiting.

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

The red is a pull of his desires which arise in him just by one LOOK of this girl who is driving her crazy.He can't deny her attraction but at the same time can't hold her in his arms.What a complicated relation he has with his own Ego.And she is just like a fresh and free air which is soothing and relishing seductively in his surroundings.

Good One Cynthia.👏

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: indi52
asr tortured, his mind fogged by thoughts of a girl, this girl in red, everywhere... all his moments with her. beautiful thoughts you explore... always excites. always.

and she in a flap too. back of her neck registers his presence. wonderful. waiting.

Thanks for reading and your comments. I am having fun writing this one I keep asking myself what was he thinking? Let's explore shall we?

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
The red is a pull of his desires which arise in him just by one LOOK of this girl who is driving her crazy.He can't deny her attraction but at the same time can't hold her in his arms.What a complicated relation he has with his own Ego.And she is just like a fresh and free air which is soothing and relishing seductively in his surroundings.
Good One Cynthia.👏

He always desires her but he could never give in to his feelings there may be pain involved. the hurt runs deep we shall see what he is feeling and he is going to cope with this beauty!