TaaRey Three Shots - Ehsaas *part 3 - page 16* - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
its been 10 months n still they r not proper...
I hate rey wen he said only fr body needs...
Rey is melting n will completely melt...
N shock taani is pregnant
Loved DA update .. amazing😉 ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
rey deserves it...
but taani...
y u always show her innocent... m wondering...
update soon
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
i hate hate hate husbands like this---and i dont want to hate rey...

nicely written though

Edited by prtn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Suberb Update...
Update soon n plz...PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
nyc start di..👏😊
Rey had done wrong N he deserves punishment for dat..😡😡
update soon dii..!!😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Rey's big fat ego is always a hindrance b/w TR relationship.But TG! Atleast he's guilty now because of T's pregnant news.Nice one.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Oops! *sorry* for being late
was held up in some stuffs

Yayyy, new three shot by Pooja

Awesome start dear 🤗

Rey guilt
flashbacks were so heart touching 😭
Feeling super bad for Taani 😒

Now that Rey is guilt
he will make everything good soon :D

Awesome Banner :*
Loved it ❤️

Continue soon ... waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
update next part soon.

waiting for ur update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

PART TWO

Rey open the car door for her and this surprise her to the core


" why he is behaving like this...did he come to know that am pregnent...no no taani how can he " taani was confuse with reys behaviour...first he was coming out with her for the first time after their marriage and now he is opening door for her...looking after her comforts...this is hell confusing for her but in one corner of her heart was feeling happy with his care toward her

Taani sat in car rey too settled himself on driver seat and drove away

He knows that what she is thinking and he wanted to tell her how much sorry he is for his past behaviour toward her but right now he was not able to come out of his guilt

They reach market and taani start buying the things needed for preparation and rey was following her...he was adoring her...she was making cute cute faces...her eyes which are hiding her pain...her simplicity was taking his heart away...all the while a small smile was playing on his lips

" why i hurt her so much...what was her fault my parents force me to marry her but i punished her for the mistake she didnt even commited...just because i didnt want to marry with a girl from village " rey thought to himself...he was cursing himself for hurting her

" will she forgive me for my mistakes and my baby whats his/her fault that he/she is not getting the love and care he/she deserve " he remembered how his family was happy when they come to know that sharon was pregnent how his family took care of sharon and swayum he didnt leave her for a second he took care of her every need...now rey also wanted to care for her..shower his love on her n their baby..he wants to share this news with his family but his mistakes are not allowing him


" Rey!!! Chale shopping ho gayi " Taani said to him bringing him back into reallity

Rey took the all shopping bags from her hand as he didnt want her to get tired and plus it is not good to carry heavy weight for her health

They were walking toward taani was thinking about his change behaviour

" why he is being so caring did he start feeling something for me...no no taani dont raise ur hope it will only hurt me " taani reminded herself that he cant love her when he himself said to her..she was tired to gettung hurt now she wants to live her life peacfully with her baby

She was not sure how will rey react when he come to know about her pregnency...she is afraid for her baby...what if he deny to accept her or call her baby mistake like he said to their night...she cant bear this if hell call her baby mistake

She come out of her thoughts with his voice

" ghar aa gaya " he said when he found her lost in thoughts

They come out of car...rey goes and bring bags with him when taani tried to take bags from him he denied...they entered in house

Taani was feeling very weak and rey notice that he was about to ask her to take rest but before that sharon asked taani to help her in making sweets

Taani goes in kitchen and starts making sweets...rey too follow her

" bhabhi one minute " rey called sharon from kitchen gate...sharon walk close to him

" woh bhabhi taani is not feeling well...please tell her to take rest..you know na she never care about herself " rey explain to sharon..he was feeling weird n embaressed asking her tell taani to take rest...it is his duty to look after her


" khud jaa kar keh do " sharin smiled at her dever...she is not aware of Taani n Reys relation status

" she'll not listen me " rey lied to her but in his heart he knows that taani will never say NO to him..she'll follow his every word without questioning him


Sharon shook her heard at her devars...sharon goes back to taani and stop her

" look at yourself...you look so tired so go and take rest for sometime " sharon said to her in worried tone..she also notice that taani is not well

" no bhabhi am fine and here is so much work how will u manage alone and aapko aayush (Swarons two year son) ko bhi sambhalna hai " taani refused her

Rey was listening all this from outside...taanis caring nature touched his heart she always put him and his family first then think about herself...she never cared about herself always helping others...never raised her voice on anyone

" she is such a sweetheart " Rey thought to himself smiling to himself but at the same time feeling guilty for hurting this sweet innocent soul


" no taani atleast for me take rest...ill manage everything here please " sharon said...finally taani agreed to her and goes in her room but in her heart she dont want to go there knowing that rey is also there...she always go in room after he sleep every night and left the room before he woke up in morning

Taani entered and take a sigh of relief when she didnt find rey in room.. taani sat on couch leaning backward after taking her medicines...Rey was watching her every move from outside the room

After sometime when taani driffted into sleep because of medicine effect...rey entered in room

Rey scoop her in his arms and take her toward his nahh now their bed and make her laid on bed covered her with blanket...he look at her face admiringly then his eyes fell on her stomach

He place his hand on her belly...feeling the life growing inside her...he kissed her forehead then her belly

" kal holi hai and i'll bring every colour in your mummas life thats you daddas promise...i'll give you and your mumma all the happiness you both deserve...we will also have a happy family me , mumma and you " rey said to THEIR baby...right now he is happiest man on planet...the feel of becoming father...no words can describe how happy he is

He didnt want to but unwillingly he left the room because he knows that if taani wake up...see him and will feel uncomfortable in his presenseand he dont want that...he so wanted to go and tell everyone about taanis pregnency but before that he want her to accept him and he also knows that she love him or else she would had left him long back

~~

" what happen rey...subah se dekh raha hu khoya khoya hai " asked swayum when he found his brother sitting in garden

" bhai i was worried about something...you dont worry am fine now " rey assured his brother he want to keep this matter between them only what if taani dont like it sharing her n his problem to third person

" okay if you say so but just want to tell you if you feel like telling me ill be there anytime " said swayum...both smiled

" chachu chachi kahan par hai " small aayush come running to them...he wants to play with his chachi but he didnt find her in house

" aapki chachi room mein rest kar rahi hai " rey said as he pick him up and made him sat on his lap...he was aware that aayush is very attached to taani and now its their (taani n aayush) playing time

" aaj hum dono khelte hai aapke saath chachi ko rest karne do" said swayum

Three of them starts playing and when rey saw aayush n swayum together and their bonding...rey smiled imagining his baby calling him dadda playing with him

" my princess or prince also play with me...i cant wait to hold him/her in my arms " rey thought to himself...all the while smiling to himself like an ediot.

~~

Taani woke up and shock was understatement...she was on HIS bed...how come she landed up here

" hey krishna ji...i didnt sleep on bed then...kya rey ne mujhe yaha sulaya " taani thought to herself...she is hell confuse but when her eyes fall on clock she gasp in shock

" hey krishna ji !! I was slepping from so long...bhabhi kitchen mein akele saara kaam kar rahi hai...kya jarurat thi itna sone ki " taani thought feeling guilty

Taani got up from bed and goes downstairs...rey saw her and sigh heavily

" this girl will never change...uthi nahi ki kaam start...apne baare nahi par hamare baby ke baare mein toh sochna chahiye woh kitna tired hoga subah se kaam kar rahi hai but nahi sabki help karni hai...doctor also said to her to take rest but she never care about herself" rey thought to himself...today he called her doctor and talk to her about taani's condtion , her and baby's health and also about her diet , medicines etc.

And also prepare himself to make everything okay for her on this holi...bring colours of love in her life and start a new happy life with her.

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Sorry couldnt update earlier i was out of town due to some personal reasons and my health is also not good these days
i will "try" to update my other stories soon
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Edited by -SunShine - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Awesome update :)
Loved it :)
Waiting for Rey's confession :)
Update soon :)

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