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Thoda short hai aur short isliye hai because main disappoint ho gayi hun.


Chapter 6

They were thinking of what to do. It was like a not dreamed dream. Reyam are actually shocked after what they saw. And now it's becoming more difficult for them to understand.

"Hum kya karein? Kahan se dhunde unhe? Kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai." Rey said scratching his forehead sitting in the couch.

"koi to hoga jo hamari madad karega" swayam said keeping his one hand on hip and other on the chin.

"yaar kash kash hum un dono ko rok pate to sayad wo yahan hoti"

Rey speaks in a guilty voice in a though of letting Krisha go. They have now no choice also. And that was the right moment to stop Krisha from going. But they could not do anything in front of their stubbornness. And this is what they are facing; now they are not finding any way to reach them.

"Kria ke univers ji kisi ko to bhej do, koi aise jo hamari madad karega" swayam said praying to god with folded hands looking up.

"Main karunga tumhari madad"

Voice made everyone look at the door. There he is standing an old man having long white beard touching almost his chest and has a turban on his head almost covering his forehead. A black bag is hanging over his shoulder and a peacock feather is being held on his right hand. He is almost a phakir.

"Main karunga tum sab ki madad" he speaks in a confidence.

He is a man who usually can recognize spirits or ghosts and he can talk with them too. He is in the top list of the phakir's who can draw out any stronger ghosts. And here the person only came to help these guys. They thought that really god has sent him. They had heard about him to be the top phakir among all. His picture was been printed on the news paper who made a stronger spirit out of a girl's body. And look here he came only for their help.

Rey suddenly gets up from the couch, he was sitting at. He goes near to the phakir.

"baba aap yahan... mera matlab aap ko kaise pata chala ke.." he said but interrupted by him.

"Beta main bhooton ko mehsus kar sakta hun... apni sadhna se mainaaj yahan tak pahanch paya hun...aur ye koi sadharan bhoot nahi ek bhatakti atma hai...apne swarth ke liye ruki hai...kisi apne ko le jana chahti hai" he said looking around the house's roof and ceiling.

Yes. He has come to the right place. To capture this spirit only he is here. The spirit is way too dangerous and he has practiced only to capture her. And today the day has come. He is here for this spirit.

"Mere itne salon ki tapasya aaj puri hogi" he said rolling his eyes around the house. "kahan choop ke baithi hai bahar nikal...nikal bahar..." he said in a loud voice.

The wind started blowing speed. Windows started sounding. The glasses on the table start rolling and fell down. He made everyone came behind him, the main door closed. All are scared, light starts to off and on. A huge metal from the kitchen hits him and he fell on the ground.

"chala ja yahan se...warna tere saath saath ye sab bewajah mare jayenge... hahahahaha" she laughed harshly.

The surroundings is now hell scary, she is being trying to scare them from last 30 minutes. Girls have almost half conscious. Boys could do nothing instead of sitting like coward. Reyam couldn't tolerate any more. They have to do something. They don't where their love is. They need to find them as soon as possible. It's like hell here. Their intolerance is increasing. They have to get courage to find their love and bff and for this they have to fight with her. Yes they have to fight with her.

"kaun ho tum? Kaun ho?" Rey asked loudly looking at the corner of the ceiling.

"kya chahti ho? Aur tumne Sharon aur Kriya ko kahan rakha hai?" Swayam said almost in a hard voice.

"tum nahi dhund paoge unko..." she said in a understanding voice. "kabhi nahi" laugh harshly.

They can't find her from where is she speaking. Her laughing sound is echoing in the entire house. She has scared the gang. Gang is almost in no sense position. Reyam talks with the phakir to find a way out to go to save their respective love and bff. They are ready to survive and pass any hurdles to reach their destination of love and friendship. They for sure will save them no matter if they die after saving them. And at least they will go in peace that they made their love to come out from the hurdles of their life.

"Beta tumhari madad kar sakta hun par uske liye mujhe unhe dekhna padega...kya unki koi tasveer hai tumhare pass?" he asked.

"haan... haan baba hai na!" swayam said and left to the temple room to bring it.

The picture he brought was the same which fell on him inside the temple room. And the picture has the images of him,Sharon, a girl next to her, Kriya and next to him is Rey. And the confusion of Reyam was that they hadn't seen this girl before. He handed it to phakir and as soon as he handed the wind again starts blowing, things in the hall are being crash each other making sounds. The photo flew in the air drawing out from phakir's hand.

"tum log mujh tak ya untak kabhi nahi pahunch poge kabhi nahi" she said making the photo frame fall in the ground breaking the glass.

The frame is almost break that the picture couldn't be visible clearly, it's now difficult for Phakir to find out Krisha, as only this could have been a helping hand for him to give information about them to Reyam. But this girl or so called ghost/spirit spoiled everything. She is not in a mood to give up. And Reyam are also not in a mood to give up.

Swayam comes to pick it up, when he came to middle of the hall the chandelier above him fell.

"swayam" Sharon shouts in screaming.

She is screaming, something made her to scream, yes she feels Swayam to be in danger. She could sense his pain, she prays for his well being.

"Sharon" kriya calls her. "tum thik ho?"

"haan.. ya.." she gave her a false assure but inside she is in tensed.

Krisha sits with the gang having many doubtful feeling. They were so uncomfortable. They don't know what's going on with the surroundings near them.

"Sharon! Kriya! Kya hua tum dono itni chup kyun ho?" Rey said looking at them biting a piece of bread.

"yaar Rey lagta hai dono kisi sadme main hain" swayam said laughing.

The gang also laughed and Krisha looked each other. That's the moment when Krisha shocked and looks each other and again the direction they were looking. They almost blink their eyes two to three times but no not actually, they are not hallucinating, and they are just seeing themselves in front coming to them walking.

"k-kri-kriya" Sharon said in vibration tone "hum to yahan hain. Phir wo kaun hain?" she whispers in her ears.

"pa-pata-pata nahi Sha-sharon" she said squeezing her finger.

They feel something uneasy. What they are looking is not a matter of fact as neither it would be real. They have to confirm about the place, they are likely to be trapped.

"Sharon chalo hum yahan se chup chap nikal ke kahin chip jate hain" she whispers in Sharon's ear.

"haan Kriya aur inpar nazar rakhte hain" she says and drags Kriya quickly to the nearby wall so that no one can see them.

The other Krisha came and sits near the gang.

"Guys hame bhul gaye the kya?" Kriya 2 asked them.

"haan Kriya lagta to wahi hai.. warna ye log itna enjoy karte kya?"

"dekha Rey maine kaha tha na ki dono ki dono sathiya gayi hain." He says laughing.

"haan yaar sahi hai" Rey says giving a hi5 to him.

It's enough for them to tolerate Reyam's teasing. They never like to be teased in front of their other friends that too from their respective love and bff.

"diii" Krisha shouts.

A girl wearing shorts and a jeans came out from the room, Krisha 1 are shocked to see her, they felt her to be seen somewhere but couldn't recognize her.

"haan Kriya! Sharon! Kya hua?" she asked them with concern.

"di dekho na Rey ko kaise mera mazak uda raha hai" Sharon complains.

"di Swayam na kabhi nahi sudhrega.. hamesha kyun aise karta hai?" Kriya said pouting.

The girl glares at Reyam and they gulps. She is the one who cares about Krisha except them. And she is not other than their (Krisha) sis. Elder sis, who love Krisha a lot, no one dares to talk with her about them. If Krisha plays prank then it's k for her but if anyone else will play for them it's like they are calling storm for them, she loves her sis a lot but more she is attached to is Kria. She can do anything for Kria, and Kria somehow get this love to share it with Sharon. Kria loves Sharon as same as her elder sis love her.

"di wo kya hai na... ye dono beheki beheki batein kar rahi thi aur?" Rey is interuptd by Swayam

"aur hamse dur dur rehena chahti thi to hamne kaha sathiya gayi hain" he said biting his lower lip controlling his laugh and it's same with Rey.

"ho gaya aur kuch?" she asked crossing her arm on her chest.

"di... aap to janti ho na hum apki behenon se kitna pyar karte hain" Rey said getting up from chair and holding her shoulder and looks at Kria.

"aur waise bhi di aapse behetar wo bhi nahi samajhti hain ke hum unse kitna pyar karte hain" swayam said looking at Sharon.

Krisha looks at them and blush. And there Krisha 1 too blush hearing it but again came to sense that they are not their loves. But how could be it possible, their look, their name, the gang, everything are same as well as their looks are too same. How? The question how is continuously moving in their mind, when Kriya shout in stream "Rey"

Rey's hand is cut while picking the frame and is bleeding. Swayam is alright. The chandelier has just touched his shoulder making a cut. Rey looks around as if his Kriya is calling him and Swayam too felt the same when he was hit by the chandelier.

"Beta use ab mat uthao koi fayeda nahi...main to dekh hi nahi paunga unhe ab" Phakir says in disappointment.

"nahi baba aisa mat kahiye koi to rasta hoga?" Rey says.

"baba aisa raasta jo hame un tak pahancha paye" swayam speaks.

"raasta to hai beta par bahut hi muskilon bhara hai... agar tumne un muskilon ko paar kar diya to tum apni manzil taka pahanch kaoge"

"Ham taiyaar hain baba apne pyar ko bachane ke liye hum kuch bhi karenge" both said giving each other assuring look.


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Edited by rolisiddhant - 11 years ago
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NOTE

Ok. Guys since I got good comments in this story from chapter 1 to 2... But gradually the comments are decreasing. So I have decided to end it so, here is the 2nd last part. The last part will be in next update.

I am so disappointed. So I am ending it. Aur waise bhi ss hai to khatam to hona hi tha na. so next update hi sahi. aur reser to unres hi nahi karte.. aur ab jisko bhi pm chahiye mere sare stories ke then add AnuFFandPM to your budddy list

Edited by rolisiddhant - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mein bhi res...
Unres

OMG! OMG! OMG!

How can you write something like this that was so... Scaryyy...

My god I'm scared to death.

Sad that you're going to end this. But I understand...

Even I get angry when people never Unres their comments...

Well hope you write more in future...
Edited by FrozenTeardrops - 11 years ago

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