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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just amazing...I am confused about Anjali's character..I find her both negative and positive...Negative because clearly she is jealous of her step brother as when he came he was ALSO showered upon love by their parents which she couldn't digest but Positive also because she knows to differentiate between people and not hold them guilty for someone else's reasons...In previous update I didn't like Anji much but I guess this update changed my views about her...Want to read more about her character...Please give one update with more on Arnav-Anjali-Adi childhood and AmanJali...btw got to say AmanJali make a cute pair...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was simply an awesome treat. wow and super super super congratulations for acing this update. it could not have been more perfect. for me personally it was more like watching a movie instead of reading it, everything was so clear and so beautifully described. ive never been to a telegu marriage ceremony before but after ur update i can proudly say that i did attend one virtually and if i get to attend one someday i would not be so lost with all the rituals. loved the way u described all the rituals, their significance in starting their couple life! n u were so explicit in describing their attires for all the ceremonies! u just rocked this one update!

arnav may seems to be the ruthless kind of man but from inside, he is just an ordinary man with simple needs and the wish to have someone of his to call his own and to be loved by that person. my respect grew immensely for him during all the rituals, even though he was not understanding one bit of them, he went along with all because he knew that this would make khushi and bua happy. n the way he came to protect payal, i think he will be become a brother to payal and a son to bua in the near future!

i was guessing that aman was the man anjali was talking about to adi in the previous update but then i thought maybe not. they seemed to be really in love but i fail to understand y they cant be together. i dunno but i think its kind of selfish of anjali to ask aman to choose, his friendship with arnav and his love for anjali are two seperate things and he wont be able to survive without any of them so telling him to make a choice is just pure cruel. also loved the fact that even anjali is not in good terms with arnav, she behaved very nicely with khushi. maybe khushi will be the one to diminish the distance and the bitterness between the siblings!

khushi was looking like a fairy. i just cant wait to read how their lives are going to turn out and with them its bet to be exciting with their nok jhoks and sweet little fights. i dont think arnav will ever let go of khushi from his life and now knowing how her father treated her, its almost next to impossible. poor khushi, it must have been so hard on an innocent little child, wat kind of ass... sells his own daughter because she has not ressemblance to the other family members, that so illiterate and uncivilised! n man like her father should not be able to be termed as human being, its totally disgusting!

thank fully the marriage ceremony was a successful except for the incident with adi, he is such a creep and i think he is dangerous and he wont mind in hurting even khushi if he knows that arnav will be hurt in return. arnav should make sure that he stays far away from their lives! arnav should have punched him but it would have created such a scandal and disturbed the peaceful atmosphere of the wedding!

i think this wedding day was a life changing moment for almost everyone. nani ji can now relaxed that her boyfriend got someone as khushi, madhumati knowing that khushi is no longer fighting on her own, there is someone who is by side, and arnav and khushi they got each other, they will be able to erase the bitterness of each other's life although i dont see that happening in the near future

breath takingly beautiful update deepti, u just left me dazzled by it and now im waiting to see wat will happen when they will be left to their own devices:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
yupiee so I was Right Aman is anjali's fiance Hmm Why the hell Anjali hate Arnav so much ?? I just the whole wedding Part Di .,Arnav is understanding herr so is she ..I can't more Update soon Di :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
beautiful loved it
all in Telugu style
u stole my heart by making it
love u soo much
all the best for their future


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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Loved reading this FF. Just came across it today. Fabulous job done by you. Looking forward to the next.👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
OH MEEE!!!! beautiful beautiful "wedding" chapters, I love how in detail you have written describing each ritual for someone like me who have no IDEA about these type of wedding! OMG they ARE MARRIED OFFICIALLY!! EEEKS!!!
LOVELOVELOVE IT
thanks so much for the pm xx
sorry in delaying the reply as I just read it today!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
OMG ...what a wonderful update ...awesome...loved it ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
That was beautiful...
Lets see what hav u stored for them?...
Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Wow, that was a wonderful Mahaupdate.
I;m glad that you didn't just glorify the ceremonies but also point out the potholes in it.


I love this Arnav and Kushi and their chemistry like anything. The best aspect of your stories is their chemistry.

Anjali's lover is Aman? Now did that shock me - yes. But did it surprise me - no. Because I had wished in the beginning Anjali fall for Aman, then it would be easy for her to like Arnav.


But this seems difficult even now! And Anjali hates only people who do wrong, I thought she was angry on Arnav because of her father. That part is confusing me.

Anyways enjoyed a Telugu wedding for the first time.


But isn't Kushi Hindi? Or is she a telugan?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Amazing wedding chapter. You have described each and every rite of Telugu wedding so apt. Now I want to attend wedding so badly :(. These three chapters can be constituted as an article about Telugu wedding and importance of each rite performed during the sacred event. It is very informative.

Coming to our Arshi story I really love the way Kushi explained every rite and steps to to-be and how easily Arnav followed. Shaadi ka pehale se he Joru ka Gulam :). Is Nani aware of Anajli-Aman relationship? Did they have official engagement then breakup?. Looks like Anjali and Arnav are not even in talking terms. I presume Arnav knows that he is the reason for split-up?. Next time Payal should slap Adi if he tries to approach her. Waiting for Mr & Mrs Arnav journey :). I love all the wedding pictures.

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