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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb updte...i loved each and everything u written...
very happy that khushi doesn't leave arnav to eat alone...its a small gesture but it will make their bond strong...
and their fighting...how much they will fight?????like arnav thinks each and every convo of them ends up with fight...
thk god aman made it clear for her that the business is still in her name...feels happy that she prepares a special dinner for arnav...so finally arnav found the reason for her insecurity...and the finishing touch is superb...it
make me to read more and more...
really eagerly waiting for nxt update...
thks for the pm...
Edited by Joarshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Deeps, Arnav ni Telugu style to pelli koduku la choopinchaaru choodandi, okka nimisham gundae aagindhanukondi.. Assalu kala lo kuda eppudu ila ankoledhandi.. Its.. Its adhbutham.. Em raasarandi.. Prathi okka aacharam gurinchi.. Paiga vaatilo Arnav-Khushi ni petti, vaala manasthathvalani chepparu kada, inka maatal lev asalu.. Nijam ga nen em cheppaleka pothnan andi.. It was a strange over whelming different cherishing surprised and touching the heart sequence.. Pelli antha kuda.. ela raasarandi babu? Chithakkottesar assalu.. Edho Arnav ni mana Telugu style lo choosinandhuku maathramae kaadu, but, ah purity, ah different over whelming serene atmosphere ni maintain chesaru chudandi, hats off andi meeku.. Nen pedhaga ila pellilaki vellaledhu.. Dat too being a Christian, intha depth of telugu customs ni nen choodaledhu.. Of course movies lo choostham lendi, but, meeru raasindhi chadhuvthuntae it was like a live experience, edho nen akkada vaala tho undi, choosthu anubhavinchina feel vachindhi.. Oka pelli feel rappincharu meeru.. Jeela karra bellam, Mangala soothram.. Maatllo cheppelem andi.. Antha baaga raasaru meeru.. But, Arundhathi nakshthram maatham okka saariga mood motham light chesesindhi!

And apart from that, I am really really surprised and highly satisfied at the way the characters are proceeding.. Its too good to see a bit more into each and every character.. Be that Anjali who doesn't give a heed about Arnav but, would never want him to face something striking him in a wrong direction.. Aman who balanced his relation between Arnav and Anjali, made me really awe at him surprise.. I mean, he loves Anjali but is staying away from her since he really feels that it is Arnav who needs him, more than Anjali.. Do friends like that really exist? If so, the ones who have them are really lucky! Bua's reaction and impression on Arnav have been slowly but steadily being varied from the dark to the brighter side.. Payal's knowledge on everything happening and the way she considers Arnav is truly wonderful..

Coming to Khushi, I love the way you are molding her, or rather revealing her to us.. Its not easy to let go what you'v been doing sine ages and living independently and suddenly become some one else's and that too under no way knowing what the hell is happening except the fact that her one misjudgment has costed her a high price.. I love the way she realized that Arnav's threats to her are simply baseless since his intentions were never of what that might cause her loath him.. And then, though she has been on a highly impulsive side, there is also a streak in her where she keeps coming back to him, apologizing/making upp things better of she'd realize that she's been on the wrong side.. The entire session of her realizing that she's been in the wrong shoe the entire time, the guilt and horror striking her of how wrong she been in judging Arnav downright without actually listening to anything or anyone for that fact, her decision of making up to what she made wrong, protecting her sister, making her Bua agree, surprising Arnav, everything is a mile stone twist, if you'd ask me.. And in the recent chaps where she's been sharing the same room, trying to kinda rile him up, giving into his lovely ministrations, and yet the same time being insecure of both losing her business and her marriage life, is something being a girl I cannot disagree upon.. Its true that we need to trust, but with the circumstances under which ArShi started off, I'm not surprised why she's finding it difficult to think the way she is expected to..

And Arnav.. Do I even need to say how magnificently you'v characterized him? The tougher he is to see, the softer he is at heart.. The way he deal with their almost broken family, the responsibility he's taking up, covering up his brother from his Nani and sister, being a true friend in every sense to Aman, a perfect jiju for Payal, a great son-in-law and not to forget, a really wonderful husband to Khushi, coz I believe that there is a lot more hidden down there than what the eye catches..

There are many a things that I loved from the previous couple of updates..

The way Arnav loves to see the fiery side of Khushi.. Though his first intention was to see her defeated, he couldn't take it that she seems to appear defeated.. And so riling her up, just to see her the way he had seen her during their initial days..

The way he demands her complete attention on him, when he is in the frame..

The scent of sandlewood and musical magic of nada swaram..

The fact that Aman disclosed Khushi that this is the first wedding ever that Arnav attended to.. And the reaction and the actions that followed the unveiling of that truth..

The way' HATE' stirred back the bitterness, agony and distress in both of them..

The unshed tears that disturbed Arnav..

The glimpse of Khushi's dark past..

The first ever apology.. The truth that she's worth more than a 1000/- bill..

The first attractions and jealousy..

The submission of a woman to her husband.. The promise of a man to his wife..

Their way of trying to get a control over what they are actually feeling by going a bit away from each other resulting in getting together with magnified force..

The stupid, but, much needed fights and the way they make up..

The late night kitchen adventures..

The longing..

The dilemma..

The blooming love, but, the stopping ego..

The tiny ministrations of care and concern and respect..

The breakfast sequence..

The fish bowl humor..

The intelligent people ignore and irritate..

The night ritual if covering his wife and getting peace by receiving a serene smile with a melodious thankyou..

The fight again.. The outburst..

Hand of Aman in clearing the misunderstanding..

The trying to make up again with a renewed spirits..

The sarcasm of Arnav and yet the powerful angered concern..

The dawning of the realization..

The beginning of assurance and romance..


There are a lot more to say and a lot more to appreciate, but, I dont think it would ever do justice to what ever you'v given us.. Its a really wonderful journey that I'v taken up and you, dear Deeps, never fail to make me proud of my decision.. I really wanna congratulate you and appreciate at the way you are taking this FF forward and making it etch into our hearts.. It is one beautiful segment of my life.. And I mean it.. Thankyou very very much.. I'm sorry for the long comment but I had to make up for not having been able to comment for the past few updates.. Take care and keep up the great work you are doing!

Edited by Chaverah_TFC - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update.. so finally arnav understood her insecurity.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update dear.. Its getting more interesting with each passing update.. Plz update soon
Edited by sweetydoll32 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it...oh my des 2 always at logger heads...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ufffooo... Di... u know how awesome u r... loved both the updates a lot... and the ending of this one...WOW...FABULOUS...
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update
loved it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
just now i read 16th..now got 17 too..how lucky..will read n comment it..bye ..see u..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just loved the update...
From every aspect the update was awesome...

I mean it was humorous ae well as intense, etc, etc...


Aman & the idli part...

The chits part...😃


Then the last part...


Oh I can't seem to wait for the next update...
Edited by shipra.aqua - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh! they are absolutely on fire..
completely ignorant of their feelings and no idea where to begin..
wow!

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