'A DREAM COME TRUE' Sandhir ff *PART 16 UPDATED* #1

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sparky

@sparkling_gems

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Posted: 11 years ago

#681

Chapter 15

Last line of the chapter was epic.. Randhir proposed to Sanyukta to share 75% of rent... in return of share the flat. But the million dollar question is why Randhir wanted to stay with Sanyukta esp when he is so religiously following his friend's instructions to stay away from her. Is it his heart which is ruling himor does he have some other malicious motive behind it.

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VeiledWords

@VeiledWords

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Posted: 11 years ago

#682

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samairaa gupta

@iraa_parsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#683

Res!!!
Edited:
Appy! SoRRy for unresing so late!!
Ohkay! This chapter was kinda filler chapter but I loved this one too.
Shanaya part sooo cute!
I loved it!
The last part when Randhir gets her flashback!!!
I could actually feel some kinda pain.
Brilliantly written Appy!!
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Update the next part soon.
Loads of love
Samaira

Edited by iraa_parsh - 11 years ago

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Anuradha

@federized2210

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Posted: 11 years ago

#684

Appy!!!!

I was ready with my comment yesterday only😆

But u didn't post here!!!!

So here goes...

Shanaya is a sweetheart!!! A totally lovable kid!

U've portrayed her so innocently!😊👏

This chapter cleared a lot of doubts...I loved this idea...U know, a filler chapter having the same ending as the previous one...It's perfect how u are merging flashbacks with current track!!👏

So Karan was a bane in SanDhir's life!! I so knew that!

What intrigues me is what actually happened that Sanyu isn't here anymore!!!

U've built up that suspense so well👏

Karan realized RD still loves Sanyu and he agreed to sign the contract? So can we expect a change of heart? Or maybe another ulterior motive?

Hmmm...Only u know🤣

RD is fulfilling Sanyu's dream...*Drifts off to SanDhir-land*

The memories that RD recalled while sitting inside the apartment were an absolute pleasure to read...

Each and every moment seemed so calculated...so precious...so real!!!

Lovely job!!👏👏

U have this uncanny ability to portray emotions using the simplest words and yet leaving a mark in our hearts. That's the best thing about ur work. It's heart-warming!!!

I'm running outta praises Appy!! U are just too good!

In a time when the show is betraying SanDhirians, ur updates are my drugs!!! So do update soonish!😳

Love u loads and big hug!!

-Always your admirer,

Anuradha❤️

Edited by federized2210 - 11 years ago

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#685

Amazing
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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Mariya

@mariya.kamran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#686

Reserve

Unres..

Superb chapter it was. Awwah Shanaya is such an adorable kid. Karan why don't you just flip off! Don't need another glue here. Its such a treat to read SanDhir related stuff when the show is heading nowhere. Thank you so much for the pm and the update. Update soon xxx

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don girls

@don girls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#687

wow amazing update

love the present parts

can't wait to see what happens when he moves into the apartment

please update soon

can't wait for it

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Ashka

@nothereanymore

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Posted: 11 years ago

#688

Res unres...

appy...!! amazing update dear...!!

I just loved it...!!

pehle to mujhe uss Karan ke bachche pe bahot gussa aaya but when I read those line ke deal is on... mera sara gussa chala gaya..

so Karan is not that bad... [hope so]

nd the daughter nd Papa scene... I loved it the most...!!

such a cute nd sweet scene...

the flashback was heart touching...

now plz cont soonish...

m eagerly waiting for the appartment scens...

love

Ashka.

Edited by sandhirlover - 11 years ago

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Priyanka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#689

Though i have already commentd on fb. Bt i think u hvnt read them.
So m doing here.

Wat can i say after readng. Do i need 2 say, dat u r unique n wondrful. Ur mindblowng appy di. How cud sm1 write so gud. How cud u. Dis part literally made me cry, it was so touchy. It was smthng like i cud see evrythng in front of me, as if evrythng is happening around me n m watchng it. U know wat the best thng about u is, u know how to make readers hooked up to ur stories. Dis time also u ended up thr. Dis is smthng which is killing me. I want 2 say di we ppl r blessd 2 have u as a sandhir fan and also to have u in our sadda haq forum. Ur dat amazng.
Sm lines were so beautiful, i just want to mention them. Bt its of no use cause u already know n if i wil start writing thoz lines thn m definately gonna write the whole part. :-P
i know smtimes the length of my cmment bcums too short. :-P
bt trust me i just cant stop my hands writing for u. M alwaz ur fan. I mean 1 of ur biggest fan. The way u tuk us 2day in past, it was fab... N the way story is going to
past nd present. M loving it.
Di ur r mind blowng. Made my day by dis part.
Thank u so much.
Really m glad, dat m readng stuffs writtn by u.
:-)
my
#appy didu rockss ;-)

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pooja_sanu

@pooja_sanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#690

oh awesome...loved d whole segment...past n present scenecs were awesome!!!
n i guess bcouz of sanyu karan n randhir r no more friends...update soon dear...totally in love wth this story!!!!