Unreserving...
Very nicely written.. though there was not much to say but it looks like a connector with further chapters. Randhir hid about Sanyukta from Karan. He felt so agitated when Sanyukta thanked him. Why he didn't want anyone to see his good side? Will wait for next part.
Dont worry about the length or delay. I know Holi preparations are so hectic. I cant even get time read stories and comments.. btw Happy Holi.
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