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NikitaM11

@NikitaM11

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

hahaha that was so cute!! I didn't even guess that Arnav had used other means to put the chocolate in her mouth ;) Loved it!

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Loved the image of Arnav you painted.. very little written yet so beautifully sketched out

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

that was innocent and passionate at the same time...

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Awesome OS
Loved it <3

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Ayeaayeeayyeee !!! This one cute as hell !

What a lovely way to feed Khushi the chocolate ...😳

Edited by _disha_ - 11 years ago

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

First of all I have not seen the movie you mentioned, I shall be doing that first thing tomorrow.

It's simply fantastic that even a horror movie inspires you to write about Arnav and Khushi, I personally think you should always write something whenever you watch a movie, lol.

The one shot was amazing and simply superb,

I honestly thought Khushi was getting kidnapped but it turned out her kidnapper was surprising her but he ended up frightening her, love it.

Love the way Arnav held her captured and fed her the chocolate, so sweet and romantic.

Awww bless even Khushi realised at the end and her reaction was just so cute.

This was written exceptionally well,

Thanks for the PM xx

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

loved it... :) simple n beautiful :)

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

*sighs eating Chocolate in Arnav's style, now this is one scene I would have liked to see them enact! You most certainly have a knack for creating the most adorable Arhi scenes ever N! So much so that I always want to read more, heck lately I have been wanting a sequel for every single OS of yours! hehe

Looking forward to the next chapter of MDJND and more of your Os's.