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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey

I STILL HAVE TO READ THIS STORY 😲

I'll read the chapters from starting now. 😆

okay baayfraand😳
read and then do tell me hows it😛 I'll be waiting for your response😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Taani is so strong after everything Shivam done to her she still didn't give up
But look for ways to escape
The guard looking at Taani like she is a piece of candy is so damn creepy
I hope she deal with them as well
Aww Taani is a sweetheart, she save Sharon but not herself
I love Sharon plan to get that idiot to spill Taani whereabouts
Rey is missing Taani so much
Omg!!! I love what Taani did to that jerk lol
I hope she torture him some more 😡
Spectacular update
Deepi u doing a fab job

glad you liked it dear😃
thanks a lot for appreciation😊😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anj_taarey

Wow wow wow..dis story is amazzngg..read d whole story in one go...diffrnt concpt👏
I luvv cooper...hes vry ccutee...❤️
vryy sad for taani..poor grl..wat a sad lyff...😭
Bt our hero rey hs startd to fall fr her😳😳
seriously u r an awesome wrtr..
Updt soon..😊

thanks dear😃
glad you liked the ff
thanks for appreciation😊
updating soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zulfinazi

amzng updt
taani past was sad n she made sharon escape awsm
taani's plan is nic
rey missing taani
finally dey got to knw wer is she
eager waiting fir nxt
updt sn

thanks😃
glad you liked it dear
updating soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: taani.priya1997

hi deepkriti
i guessits not your name but id
but still to begin with i have to call u by some name
a few days ago i started reading your stories i was un aware of your writings
then i read some of your stories it was really good and bit different in terms of concept
when ever u pm me i had to read the back logue chapters and then come to the current one so it some time took me time... i read

The Road to Ladakh -taarey ff

The Voyage to Titanic- Taarey SS

warrior series

No strings attached- Taarey FF

what all i want to say all are unique

but every time i came to this story i felt reading it i felt attracted then i started but again i felt miserable did not like the concept of taani being touched by some other rather than rey...

you may not believe i have discussed with many if frds that i myself wanted to write a story of human trafficking with taani as victim but i couldn't find out a way and miserably failed how to keep taani untouched by any one...so some where i liked the concept it was near to my heart but couldn't read it out many times opened and then again closed it

but some how lst night i read the name of the chapters and felt connected so i made my self determined to read it today ...and today witha cup of coffee i started reading it...

i had mixed emotions but at last when i completed it just now i felt relaxed i felt a warrior inside me and i really felt good

i could exactly visualize each and every seen from the stripped pole dance to rey drinking to rey loiterring around in the lonely roads then both moving around taani falling for rey, rey couldn't handle the fact taani stripping and at last reyam and sharon fighting to find out where is taani...


i could feel each and every person connected to taani who woo their lives to her

sharon - a girl saved by taani , her urge to save taani her life which is a gift of taani

rey - a person who came out of a tiering past by only her few soothing words ,a person who has fallen for taani not knowing fully about her..a person who forget his pain to sooth her pain

even a little puppy whom taani saved it even owes her life to taani


even i am quite sure swayam too has some connection

and even i could see in front of my eyes feel taani's fight in front of shivam

i really started liking it ,feeling my heart in it , i am really liking ur writings and a damn fan of this ff

even i will pm you something regarding warrior series...

a great fan ,

a reader

with love

priyanka

I have already told you di, your comment touched my heart😳
nothing else to say after I read your comment I am speechless
thanks for your appreciation and support
I hope I'll continue giving you nice stuff in future too😊
you are my fan😲😳
but big sissies are not fans of small ones. 😛
love you a lot
deepkriti
P.S. and yea! you are undoubtedly a great warrior😃👏⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ___SAD___

nice going totally lovable

thanks😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sona_loveVD

awesome updt

loved the chapter
eagerly waiting for nxt
updt soon

thanks😃
glad you liked it dear
updating soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

I gotta find you


The room was filled with silence. Taani saw the unconscious and tied up Shivam flat on floor. The first thought was to kill him right there. But she knew, one wrong step and she might lose the chance to escape. Sensibly enough, she kept her cool and picked up anesthesia and the knife. Taking a single glance all over the room, she paced towards the door and opened it cautiously. Sneaking outside, it looked like the whole floor was out of guards. She quickly got out of the room, closing the door behind her. It was the best chance to escape. Looking at both the sides of corridor outside room, she finally decided to go to left to find her way. The long corridor seem to get covered in seconds with her long steps. In haste, she suddenly tripped over something lying over the floor. Falling hard to the ground, she tasted her own blood oozing out of her pink lips. Her head snapped at the thing which made her fall. It looked like even the God was on her side. She looked at the metallic lid covering the mouth of a chamber. Quickly opening it, she heard some small splashes of water from beneath. It might be a water tank or a sewage drain pipe. Thinking it might have a escape way, she was all ready to jump inside when simultaneously she heard some footsteps coming near. Without wasting a single moment, she took the support of stairs connected to the tank and closed the lid above her. The guard who has come to check the place flew back to his position founding nothing.

"Now what?!!" Swayam asked extremely confused after seeing the tight security around the place.

"We have to get inside anyhow!!" Sharon said extremely impatient.

"There has to be any other point to enter..I think we should look for them." Rey advised.

"No use! He is doing an illegal job here. In no way, he'll take a chance of leaving a single entry unguarded." Sharon said. Her mind frame becoming totally like these beasts, she was forced to think like them. It was the only way to find a solution.

"What if we.." Swayam said half of the words looking at sharon in anticipation.

"What?!! Are you going to speak now??" She said with a confused and irritated look.

"Only if you agree.." He said doubting on his own plan.

"Anything for taani!" Not a single line of doubt appeared on her face. After what taani did for her and their long years of friendship, there was no way she could deny.

"Fine! Then the plan is..." Swayam quickly spit out every single thing going inside his mind. Rey and sharon looked at each other. Never did they thought that a simple Chef of a restaurant can have such a detective mind. They smirked as it sounded full proof.

Climbing down the stairs one by one, she finally felt cold water on her sole. She looked around her. A huge pipe with diameter double her height had water running smoothly through it. With divisions after every few metres it was a long water transporting system. Giving a single glance, to the running water, she inhaled a deep breathe and dived straight inside. The water engulfed her figure for a few moments giving a feeling of death. She felt her body sinking until she moved her limbs in accordance to reach the surface again. Her head escaped out of the water giving her breathe of relief. The waves pushed her body forward as she automatically started flowing with the stream of water letting it take her wherever it wants.

The car stopped in front of the main entry of the factory. Guards on duty surround the car as the black filmed mirror were pulled down and the faces inside were brought to notice.

"Robin?!!" One of the guards said in confusion finding him at the backseat along with a tied up girl. The driver in front handled the steering. His face hidden beneath his cap didn't allowed a complete exposure of his face.

"What are you doing here?" The main Guard asked. "And who is this girl?" He said looking at the unconscious Sharon.

"Shivam had asked me for another girl and fortunately I found her." He explained.

"But why are you beaten so badly??" His eyes furrowed in doubt.

"Uh..A few people..I have lent money from...came yesterday..and since I couldn't repay, they did all this." He lied. The sweat on his forehead trickled down his face. The fear of death was bringing current down his spine. The guard looked at the capped Driver who remained mum all through this.

"He is my driver." Robin explained. "Don't worry, he is trustworthy.." Robin explained before anyone could ask.

"But we need to ask Shivam Sir, before sending you in." Bringing out his walkie-talkie, he was about to dial for Shivam, when suddenly he heard a message coming on. Swayam, who was by now hiding behind hi cap became alarmed along with Sharon and Rey who was hiding in the trunk of the car.

"Sir! That girl...taani..she escaped. Shivam sir is unconscious in his room.." The man on the other side said. Completely shocked by the news, the whole team of Guards moved inside leaving the car and its passengers all alone. Sharon who until now was lying with closed eyes snapped them open as soon as swayam patted her shoulder.

"Did you hear that??" Rey asked in complete shock. Swayam put off the tape over sharon's lips.

"She escaped." Sharon said as a small smile played on her lips.

"But then where is she??" Swayam popped the question that runs in each mind. Meanwhile Sharon again tied up Robin who was too weak to resist in front of these three musketeers. "Look! I think we should get inside." said swayam. "What if they are mistaken? Or may be we could find a clue. " He suggested. Thinking about the idea for a few seconds, Rey and Sharon nodded in agreement. Swayam, without waiting for another minute, drove inside. The car crossed the main gate oblivious to the another company that joined them outside.

"Passing through different passes of the pipes, taani was completely drained because of powerful splashes of the water. With no energy left, she was about to leave her life in the hands of fate, when she saw a ray of hope. Another opening of the pipe was a few metres away, with its stairs touching the surface of water. Finding her inner strength, she clutched the metallic stairs as soon as she reached them. The water passed her as she uplifted her wet and drained figure out. After taking a few tiring and heavy steps, she finally reached the top. Removing the lid, her head popped out only to find a vehicle parked above the opening. Through the spaces between the tyres, it looked like an outside area. She peeped a little out finding an army of guards surrounding the car. They seem to be discussing about taking another girl inside. Her blood boiled as soon as she heard Robin's voice. This man needs a lesson too. Knowing that she can't escape in front of so many guards, she found once again her luck working in her favour as the guards realised her absence and ran inside to find her. She uplifted her body out of the chamber, closing the lid behind her. Founding her chance to escape, she was about to run when she heard a familiar voice. A voice she didn't heard for days. A voice she was dying to hear for so long. It was Rey. She blamed her ears as this might be an illusion. Though she didn't wanted it to be. She prayed it to be real and as if God heard all her wishes, she heard another familiar voice and then another different but familiar voice. Sharon and Swayam were also there. It couldn't be illusion after all. Feeling ecstatic, she was about to move out, when something struck her. The guards were searching for her and coming out might destroy everything. As soon as she heard them moving inside. She clutched the rods beneath car's floor a she hanged on it, to move along with it inside. The flexibility granted to her by her job of stripping was giving its all assets now.

Driving inside the factory, Swayam halted the car as he found a secluded place. Finally getting off, leaving the tied up Robin at his place, they gathered in front of the bonnet.

"Now what?!" Swayam asked.

"What what?!! There are three ways from here. One of us will go in each direction." Sharon said in a commanding tone.

"Lets go then!!" Rey said making all the three move but before they could leave, a single call was enough to stop them.

"Wait!!!" A known voice called them from behind and they halted wherever they were. A current ran through their spine. Knowing well, that the voice belong to her, they turned with tears already filling their eyes. And there she was, with tears wetting her eyes. She portrayed the mixture of beauty goddess and an ill fate girl. Her wet dress stuck to her figure making her a 'beauty to die for' while at the same time, her bruises shine more because of the water droplets on her skin. Her shining eyes add glory to her beauty while the marks beneath them were enough to guess the reality. She looked a perfect figure of an 'Unfortunate Beauty'.

"Taani!!" Sharon became the first one to come out of trance as she jumped over taani only to hug her tightly. Looking at the two girls, Swayam giggled a little while Rey was still too shocked to respond. Her bruises and red skin pinched her heart. The injuries on her face, shouted on his face that she had faced too much.

Following Sharon, Cooper jumped out of the car as he extended his forelimbs in air indicating her to take him in her arms. Taking him, she gently caressed his coat giving him a big relief. Swayam meanwhile hugged her from the side, slightly kissing her on her hairs. In all this excitement, her eyes were transfixed on one person. Standing motionless, he looked in complete daze. After a long time, she felt a fear. A fear of losing him. What if he doesn't approve her after all this? What if he deny her after her own skin betrayed her to some beast? What if he left her all alone in that mist to survive against all this? She tried finding answers in his eyes. But her blurred vision didn't allowed her. She approached him with slow and heavy steps.

"Rey.." Her voice meek and slow, she suddenly found her out of energy and hope. The fear was taking over. Her inner strength betrayed her making her immensely weak. Can't he just take her in his arms? But would he ever?? He looked completely blank. His eyes were on her face but mind revolved on different possibilities that might have happened with her. They might have beaten her or brutally tortured her or even RAPED. The single word was enough to boil his blood and burn his entire soul. How could somebody so low to do such a thing with such a beautiful soul. The girl, who saved his life faced all this and he was nowhere around to save her. She needed him and he was not there. A feeling of guilt took over him. He found her staring at her, may be with anticipation. She wanted answers but the major problem was he didn't had any.

"Guys!! We need to leave from here..its not safe.." Swayam broke their trance.

"No!!" With a determined voice, taani spoke. She turned towards swaron, standing beside Rey. "I heard from a guard that they have captivated some small girls here. I can't leave them alone. We need to rescue them too." She explained. It didn't took swaron even an instant to give their nods.

"Guys, you'll go back to the city to bring the Police." She asked swaron.

Taani looked at Rey but he was still blank. "And we'll go inside.." With a hope of acceptance and fear of rejection, she gripped his palm in hers, interdigiting them tightly. He looked at her with a little tears. "Lets go.." She whispered to make him move.

"While the whole army of guards was finding her, they sneaked inside the corridor which was supposed to be for bought slaves. Passing through different cells filled with humanity butchering activities, they finally reached the last one. Taani looked through the bars, the girls were sleeping.

"We need keys." She said looking at Rey. With an idea popping in his mind, he took a small nail digged in the bricks of fade plastered wall. Opening it with his talent, taani looked at him shocked while he already entered inside. The sudden entry made the girls scared as they shifted towards the corners in fear.

"Don't be scared. We are here to make you free." Taani said coming forward. She could see doubt in their eyes.

"Believe me, we'll make you free from here." She extended her hand. Rey looked at the small girls, looking all blue and black in their tattered clothes. It was easy to detect that they have faced the same fate as taani, but it was hard to digest. Only the thought made his soul wince.

"Please guys, we don't have enough time. Please believe us." Taani looked a bit helpless. Looking at each other, they tried making a decision but a doubt always stayed in their minds except one. A girl from the group came out as stood with taani giving others the same confidence. Taani felt tears escaping from her eyes as all the girls were finally on her side.

"Swayam and sharon will take time. Until then, we need to hide them." She spoke to Rey who was still in his thoughts. His mind seem to work deeper than ever. "Rey!!" She shook her. "You listening??" He was suddenly jerked out of her thoughts. "We need to hide them!!"

"Yeah..Yeah.." His brain suddenly functioned on her problem."I have a plan!" He said finally making her relieved and a little confused.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update :)
Really Loved it :)
Finally Taarey found each other :)
Lets see what happens next :)
Damn excited to read the next update :)
You have written the story like a fiction / thriller :)
Cant wait :)
Update soon :)
Well I read it even before you PM me :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

nice update dear it was awesome chap as usual dear love it thanx for pm update soon n pm mee take care😛😛😛

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