*Completed* Th# 3 ArHi SS: Revenge

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Avi!

itna mystery ho gya hai. ..itna mystery ho gya hai. ..k kya bolun abb. ..
kitna perfectly you wrote that guru-mirror talking sequence. .how much I want to believe that 'guru' is a 'she' but the other part of brain is saying he is a 'he'. if not garima then Shashi?
but isnt shashi is in front of everyone? and everyone knew about his presence?
Arnav k dad ka brother? who must be pretending his death?
aman?my all time favourite suspect. .?
must be someone who is a part of Raizadas.

but who who who??
and that news. ..khushi ko ye karna hi tha na. .. :(

and now what shyam is planning? those papers? khushi k naam sab kuch to nahi kar diya? but i dont think guru is that Bevkoof. . must be something related to Anjali and property. ..
dimag k ghode kam dauda k let me rest my brain for a while. .

and and and ...last scene k bare mein abb main kuch na hi kahun to acha hai *blush*
but one thing is sure..she loves him and she will always love him. . and she missed him. ...

a fast unres. ..will come later if I discover some thing. ..:)

I forgot to mention some things. ..

v.s wonderful poem as always*claps*

and Z the urdu poem you wrote in the end. .omg! I never knew you write urdu shayari also. a pro!
marvellous*claps*
Edited by .Avanti. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats on new thread!!!🥳
Amazing update Zehra!!!😊

I'm very confused about Guru!! I'm thinking maybe he is Arnav's chacha🤔
The part of Guru talking in front of the mirror was very well-written!!
I could imagine him as some villain in bollywood movies!!😆

I'm worried for Arnav..He loves khushi so much..He will be so heart-broken when he will learn the truth..And I don't want to see him like this..😭

It is very painful when the person you love and trust the most betrays you!!

And I hate shyam..he is so manipulative..And what did he give anjali to sign??😲

Continue soon!! Can't wait to know what will happen next!!


WOW Zehra!!! You wrote such a beautiful poem..👏
At first I could not understand it well..then I rad again about 5-6 times..Only then I understood..
It fits the story very well!!

Thanks for sharing it with us!!!🤗
Edited by jtmbarun - 11 years ago
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Ahh so the guru proves with his comment that Khushi is a mere tool which he will discard when his work is over.

I think this whole idea of the guru conversing with his reflection was very cool. Gave the chapter an edge.

So Shyam has been pretty cunning. Sending everyone to the direction of his choice.

Blind trust no matter what the relationship is not wise. Hope Anjali understands this in time.

Khushi must have a really strong reason for doing all this. She clearly loves Arnav. She hurts him, then wants to soothe him too. This isn't normal. Maybe it's the result of a troubled childhood or there's some psychological issue.

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Lovely Update Zehra 👏 and superb poem ⭐️ 👏

The mirror scene of Guru, his talk with himself is villainous. He is smart and intelligent enough to train Khushi and Shyam like puppets in his hands. He thinks everything goes as he planned but I am waiting for the day to see his defeated face infront of Arnav

Shyam stopped Akash and even made Anjali sign unknown documents. Wish Akash finds a loophole 😒

Khushi loves Arnav but her past is acting as a barrier. Arnav would be devestated after the revelation..
I am so waiting for that Chapter!


I so wish not to think who the Guru is or what happened in the past but can't, so here I go:
Anil is the Guru who burnt Khushi's father because Khushi's father knew something about Anil's deeds. Arnav must have seen an argument between the two and informed it to his father which lead to Anil's arrest. I also think Khushi's father must have been wrongly accused in cheating/ treachery but before it was proved wrong he was killed.

P.S. Now you can laugh all you want about my guesses 😆
Edited by Skiran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res unres
lol.. as always I am starting from apology note😆 sorry for late unres'ing😭 but kya karu, I am not online much hopefully will be soon online😃
okay coming to update
gosh... this.. this is getting so damn exciting.. sooo interesting Zee👏👏
this 'Guru' is made case... ek dun gone case he is!! yes he.. I guess now, it's he
such a manipulative person he is!!
so as I got, that he maybe is arnav's dad's business partner or maybe his left hand man.. and can be anil too.. arvind's brother!! but he was dead.. "guru" is dead too.. for other, right!!
or or or... it can be the man, who got burned?? khushi's real dad?? but why didn't khushi recongnize him😕 gosh... this 'Guru" is so damn intriguing character!!
hmm... bloody snakewa... and his character is perfectly like one.. have many skins.. or elephants😆 teeth of showing are different and eating are different (daant dikhaane ke aur, chabane ke aur )
wanted to slap him.. double face jerk... ass!!😡😡
poor akash.. he wanted to go.. but couldn't and moreover.. arnav!! really felt bad for him! poor guy... losing so much day by day!
hayye.. loved the bold khushi😉😳 and what an act of boldness...
hmm... what is their next plan?? what were those papers which Anjali signed?? and... is khushi's name is going to reveal soon??
ohh cant wait to know all these
ohh btw... superb poem👏👏 absolutely awesome⭐️⭐️
thanks yaar😳 I was right first time😆
continue soon pleej😳
PS: again sorry
PPS: ignore typos yaar😳
Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago
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cant waittt!!!!
i have been soo bored on IF..no body updates at all
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I knew it


Who is d 'Guru' Damnit...!! 😡 ..

Itna toh hai d "Guru" is frm a Gupta's..🤔

It can be garima or shashi.. Madhumati ko avi tak nai dikhaya is she d "Guru"..🤔

Cn be or cn be nt

Bt its definately sure arnav knws him/her frm d tym of dere parents death 😔

May be d person was pretending to be loyal nd arnav saw d real face ..Bt never had a proper chance to his dad..

Dis lead to misunderstnding btwn brothers nd den death..

D same misunderstnding wich is create nw by d same person 😡 Bt dis tym result wnt be d same

Although lifes r effected...

Poor khushi wil be shattered wen she wil knw d real truth.. Her life , Love , Trust , Every damn thing will be affected wid dis..

I seriously feel bad for her 😔

May be d guru is d person who killed everyone nd blamed d raizadas for d death of khushi parents too..

Nw tym for arnav khushi...

Khushi is definately in Love wid arnav ...Bt d day she realizes dis everythng wil chnge..

D "Guru" will change her life..

Bt y i do think dat arnav wil still not leave khushi..Bcz he loves her truly madly..

Nd wil be mad if he let her go...

Shyam is two timer 😡He wil loose everythng..

Bcz he wasnt a puppet like khushi..

He knew almost everythng unlike khushi who is in dark

She is scared of leaving him yet she does everythng to destry him ..!!

I wish akash find d truth soon

Shyam asshole missused d trust of anjali.. By signing d property paper or bonds of her in his name

He manipulated wid everyone

He didnt let akash come nd here he said akash didnt come only sick ppl

D last part is damn cnfusing

Is khushi planning to leave arnav . ...

Par i loved teasing part ☺️ ☺️

D shayari Apki lola ji samjha di humka 😆

Update soonish 😡
Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago

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