The undefined relation#1 Taarey OS

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tamanna-azaan

@tamanna-azaan

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

it was awsum dear..
love it..
very emotional nd heart touching..

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dasv

@dasv

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Its was beautiful
Just awwwee
Its was a story that speaks so many things.
It showed that u dont know from where u get the love of ur life.
Just loved the entire journey of care affection and PURE LOVE
best part was the last line when rey thought that it going to b end now.
Taani's single line "say hi to dadaa" just changed his world.
Its was like beautifully written

Keep writing

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Naaz

@zulfinazi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

such a beautiful os
luvd it

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Monika Saxena

@monikasaxena05

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Superb os😊

M speechless..

U written it so well

Loved it

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Namita

@anatomy_nerd

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

omg somebody give me tissue box
*sniff* *sniff*
Ok coming to os...yaar u multipersonality girl kal itna mast full of life n funny update diya n aaj itna emotional os...koi aatma ka saya hai kya??
Seriously yaar it was soo beautiful...the best part when they were listening baby's heart beat
When rey feared that now taani would leave him she handed the baby in his hand...aww
A big hug n kissi for this beautiful os

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jallwa_taarey

@jallwa_taarey

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

i am the read it later

and i will comment later

thank you for the pm

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Aiman

@princess_tara

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

superb os
emotional cute
u named it undefined relation
but i wud say it was story of unconditional luv

n next tym wen u feel u write sumthing bad then surely post it as wen ever u say u write sumthing bad it always trun out superb