KYPH Chp.41 pg. 57 THE END - Page 26

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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part cant wait till nxt 1
btw wen is it gona b posted??
hehe impatient me
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kriti_6teen

just read ur fic its gr8.
i thought it would b hard 2 make angad realize that Priya is his daughter but he has no probs with but kripa surely has.
continue soon

i know

Originally posted by: za7n4b

mind blowing excellenyt part

thanks

Originally posted by: sabzz

great part lik allways ..u r a wondeful writer keep writing ..!!! 👏
and plz write long part plz ...if u r free ! 😳

contniue soon ! 😃

thanks and I feel happy that you think I am a great writter

thanks

Originally posted by: angel_tia

this ia an ok ok part since i expected a longer part and some more scenes!but der aaye durust aaye!continue soon!
thank god AK met!!!!!!!!!

well I'll try and make better parts

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

hey ur fan fic is getting really good. plz write longer parts. im really anxious to find out wat happens next. plz cont soon.

thanks and i'll try

Originally posted by: janu_2006

gr8 part 👏
eil tht mean ke kripa angad ko maaf nai karpa ye gi???????
cont. soon

thanks and not yet

gr8 part

thanks

[QUOTE-ixi-shaj] Brilliant- keep going! 👏 👏

thanks

[/QUOTE]
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Posted: 18 years ago
Excellent part... i hope the truth about dat stupid ani comes out now!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey great part. but im confused- how is bringing ani here and seeing if saumya and pari get mad going to confirm kripa's innocense?
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part man that angad i hate him still he has doubts abt kripa well hope everything goes ok i love the way saumya and pari were talking abt dating and angad 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
great partttt contniue soonnn 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 awesome udate thanks 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Angad is planning to bring Ani here to find out the truth.

Breakfast Table

Angad, Saumya, Pari, and Kripa are all eating breakfast when Angad asks

A- um...is it okay if I bring a friend here

S- well you have to ask Kripa its her house

K- who

S- you

K- well um...I don't know ask Pari

P- okay is it a boy or girl

A-girl

Once Kripa hears that she has a feeling that the girl would be Ani

K(interupts)- hey um...really I don't think so because since Priya is little and many people in here well it will disturb her so why doesn't she in a hotel (mumbles) yea right let her stay there

A-okay

Angad leaves

P-Kripa why did you say that you know Priya won't get disturbed with more people

S- yea

K-I don't know like what if that is his girlfriend and....

P- do you like him?

K- WHAT

P- yea do you like him because first of all you said you didn't care and when you heard a girl you just said no....I think you like him and he looks like a great guy and I think he'll keep you and Priya happy

K- whoa baby from liking you went to like my marriage

S- I think she is anxious for you to get married so she can be your bridesmaid

P- no

S- okay then when Kripa gets married let some other girl be her bridesmaid

K- GUYS STOP I don't even have a boyfriend and you guys are planning my marriage already

Kripa leaves and Saumya and pari laugh

Angad's Room

Angad calls Ani

A- Hey Ani

Ani- Hey Angad what's up?

A- nothing much and you?

Ani- nothing....I miss you

A- um....me 2

Ani- well

A- um...do you want to come here?

Ani- meaning

A- welll you can stay in California but in a hotel because the people here don't have room and it doesn't look nice

Ani- but why would I come there?

A- There's a fashion show next week and I know how much you love then and since you love taking pictures they needed a photograph and I metioned your name and they would love it if you were there

Ani- okay

A-alright come Thursday...I need to go bye

Ani- bye

After Angad hangs up the phone Kripa comes

K- what friend of yours is comming

A- none of your business

K- listen you have to tell me

A- and why is that

k- because i want to know

A- and I don't want to tell you

K- yes you have to

A- no

K-yes

A-yes

K-no

A- see now you even told me I don't need to tell you

K- that was cheating

A- sorry sweetheart

Angad is grinning while Kripa is mad.

A- you know what

K- what

A- I loved how you got mad at me and then I would pamper you so much that you would forgive me

K- I know you bought me lots of stuff like that coach pures that was suppose to come out next week but you got it for me like a week before

Angad comes close to Kripa

A-I missed you

Kripa who was about to say me 2 just relaised their closeness and so did Angad

A- sorry

Kripa leaves the room

Guys I'm so sorry that I haven't continue. I was really sick and I'm still sick so i'm sorry if this part wasn't good. Thanks for the loving comments and LEAVE MORE PLEASE.

Edited by IndianCutie13 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
how cweet pls conti soon bu tyou should take care of your self so get well sooon i would love to wait for loonggggggggggg part 😉 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: asian_gyal

cant wait 4 da next part 😆

lol well you have to wait

Originally posted by: sahr_8

awsome part cant wait till nxt 1
btw wen is it gona b posted??
hehe impatient me

thanks and its okay to be impatient I'm impatient sometimes 2

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Excellent part... i hope the truth about dat stupid ani comes out now!!!!!

thanks and sooner or later it will

thanks

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

hey great part. but im confused- how is bringing ani here and seeing if saumya and pari get mad going to confirm kripa's innocense?

thanks and that part will be half because when they get mad Angad will find out that they hate her but not the truth until something big happens

Originally posted by: armaghan0

awsome part man that angad i hate him still he has doubts abt kripa well hope everything goes ok i love the way saumya and pari were talking abt dating and angad 😆

thanks and he has doubts on kripa and ani now and let me tell you more doubts on ani then kripa and he has to be jealous that's his love

thanks

Originally posted by: popgirl

Gr8t Part 👏 👏 👏

thanks

Originally posted by: sabzz

great partttt contniue soonnn 😃

thanks

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 awesome udate thanks 👏 👏 👏

thanks and ur welcome 😆

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