KYPH Chp.41 pg. 57 THE END

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Hey guys this i my first ff it's about Angad and Kripa Ihope you guys like it

It's a sunny day in Yonkers, NY. You see a big house. On the sign you see Khannas. Then we go to a bedroom. The color is blue; you see pictures of a young handsome boy. The room is clean and messy. Then you see a boy lying on his stomach sleeping. Then you see a lady and it is no other Naina.

N- Wake up

P- No I want to sleep

N- I will count till ten if you don't wake up then I will throw cold water on you and you know I'll do it

P- I'm awake

You see the person it is no other than (my hubby lol) our dashing handsome Angad

N- Good now take a shower because we have to go to the airport and pick up mine and your dad's BFF and their daughter.

A- Yes mom

Angad goes and takes a shower and comes out wearing an Aeropastle jeans and Aeropastle shirt. He puts on his Jordan Sneakers, combs his hair.

This is what he was wearing:

A- Looking good as always

N- Finally you are here now let's go

D- Naina what's the hurry

N- My BFF is coming

A- Anyway mom how old is their daughter

N- Why do you care?

D- Because he wants to get married to her right son

A- dad, no I just wanted to know if she was my age or younger like a kid or older like in the 30s

N- She's your age and let's go

D&A- yes

I hope you guys like it plz leave comments

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thx next part tom. hopefully

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awsome 👏 👏 👏 cont soon 😊 😊 😊
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hey great part!!
and let me guess the girl is gooing to be Kripa... lol


continue soon

Hina
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hey guys thnx for the comments
since school is starting i might not update my ff alot
next part


We are now in the airport. Their we see a husband and wife who might be 55 or 56 and they are no other than Gaytaria and Surya.
S- Where is she now?
G- Of course freshening up
S- Again she just freshened up 30 minutes ago in the plane
G- Surya she is a girl and wants to look good and by the way you know her line when anyone asks her why she always looks pretty and freshens up always and it is
P-"Kripa Sharma always looks pretty; she doesn't need to be pretty, because she is Kripa Sharma"
You see the body she is wearing Beebe miniskirt and a Beebe shirt with cute black boots and her favorite coach purse and it is no other than Kripa.

S- Yes now are you done Naina and Dilp are waiting for us
K- Yes let's go
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N- look they're here where's Angad
D- He had to make a call for the driver because everyone won't fit in one car
N- Oh
N- Hi Gaytaria hi Surya
G&S- hello
D- Hey
N- I'm so happy where's your daughter
G- She's coming look here she is
G – Naina, Dilp this is Kripa and Kripa this is
K- Naina Aunty and Dilp Uncle Rite
N- Rite
G- By the way where's your son
N- He went out to make a phone call to get a car
G- Oh
D- Look here he is
While Angad was coming he saw Kripa and thought he that she was her dream girl. Love in first sight and kept on starting at her.
N- Angad, angad
A- Huh yea mom
N- this is gaytaria, surya, and their daughter kripa
A- Hello
K&S&G- hello
D- ok me, naina, gaytaria, surya, will go in one car and Angad & Kripa will go in Angad's car
S- Ok let's go

Edited by IndianCutie13 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice parts but were really shory
plz try makin them long
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnx for the comments i'll post the next part tom..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 part.mke da nxt part long plzz
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thnx for the comments sry i couldn't post it soon i was busy next part in 2 mins

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