#KSGonlyASAD -Beautifully Broken FF - Thread 1 {CHP 1 -13} - Page 30

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Posted: 11 years ago
ameoba haha true 😆
time for asya's seperation kya :(
it was interesting
lot of twists
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: divya_asya

ameoba haha true😆

time for asya's seperation kya :(
it was interesting
lot of twists
continue soon
thanks for pm

hmm divs... Sprtn for sure :( :(
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

hmm divs... Sprtn for sure :( :(

GOWTU replied on page 36😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: B3ll3...

Oh boy, everything is gonna go downhill soon. I really hope Nikhat doesn't marry that farhan 🤢

Great update

Thanks B3ll3...😃
yeah now you can say, asad break down begins.😳



Originally posted by: treasure11

is tanveerr good here ???

asad and zoya are soo much in love 😳
but ...

yeah she is , for now🤔
absolutely my asya are lovey dovey kabhi😆😆
thanks again.😳




Originally posted by: CrazyKSGlover

Amazing update...
AsYa scenes and dance were awesome and romantic
I m tooo scared mAn
Plz dont separate these love birds...

thanks CrazyKSGlover😃
thanks once again😃😃
scared for what?😕😕 would you like to explain😳
they have to fave seperation track for ending up beautiful life.😳
Edited by -TIARA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

Prologue

Interesting concept! ⭐️

Lovely writing! 😃

Looking forward to the chapters! 😊

Intoxicated Asad! 😳

thanks p_s05😳
thanks again. yup drunken asad😃




Originally posted by: p_s05

Chapter 2

The dynamics of AsYa's relationship is intriguing! 😳

Rashid and Gaffoor's scene was scary, hope this doesn't spell trouble for AsYa. 😒

thanks p_s05😳
thanks i am happy to know that😃
rashid and gaffur are best freinds and it wont go wrong from their sides



Originally posted by: p_s05

Chapter 3

Haseena 😡

Rashid is bankrupt 😒

AsYa were cute in the last scene! ☺️

thanks p_s05😃
haseena 😎
yeah he is bhikari for now
thanks for appreciating my work




Originally posted by: p_s05

Chapter 4

Many developments in this chapter!

AsYa were really cute, until Altaf came into discussion. 😒

Looking forward to the next chapter! 😊

thanks p_s05😆
thanks again.😳😳
altaf is just an jealousy element. i wanted to show asad's intensity here.😳😳

thanks again.



Originally posted by: p_s05

Lovely update! 😳

AsYa!


thanks again.😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -TIARA

GOWTU replied on page 36😆

k ll seee
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -TIARA

gowtu🤗..mene update de diya😳... thanks😃
true what you said . love do not need words to express😳
thanks yar that's my favorite song😳
yes it is, unfortunately the only way
baki ka reply tomorrow..please baby😭


EDITED.

i wanted my characters to react normally. like we normally would do. so ayaan is one of the real character i thought to play with here.yeah asya wish is to be with each other.😳but i wont make it that easy.😈😆
rashid can do a lot many things on list but selfish admi chose this for quick escape😡
haseena is my time pass. i will keep on messing around her in my stories. she rocks😆😆😆

you should love me for this dialogue. *pout*" ameoba is my invention.😳😳😆
see you are a girl and you can understand this better. if you comes from a conservative family where you are not allowed to work and a girl is given a training sinch her childhood on how to be good housewives and bahu. etc. so automatically your only aim in life turns out to be getting married. and when you face rejection repeatedly and feels so low about your selves and then you also take yourself responsible for the shame to family. automatically you develop a sense of personality disorder and in this situation where there is no hope any guy wants to get marry to you. naturally you start weaving complete life around him. and thus it is necessary for her to get married to him.if this wedding gets stops for any reasons than one thing is for sure there will be consequences specially from niks side coz he is the only hope in her dark life.

no one is bad by birth. and tanveer is no different. she is positive till she dont get a reason to react absurd and soon i will give her one😈
yeah they all were from same university. its a different story all together. if i finish this soon,. i will start with their before life. if possible.😳
altaf is finished. for now🤔
yeah abdul is snobbish i can tell you but he is not completely wrong just have a different pov.
and rashid is surely gonna say to asad and now he will start to break.
thansk for reading my chap. and also for the longets comment ever😆😆

ofcourse i love u for tht... Haseena k band bajhaaado... O m g... U r going to write prql also... Tht's would be grt.. But u dnt hv to end ths sooon... K.. Make it lng yaar.. Ya allah.. Rashidd batadegaaa... My brkn asad... Mujhe abhi se rona aaraha haiii :( :( hmmm so true.. I agree... I undrstnd nw why dis mrg so imprtnt to her... Nd she strtd love him also :( :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
Gowtu..u am planning to.. And soon i will start with prequel to this.but needed a solid plot and no restrictions on posting comments. 🤔
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -TIARA

Gowtu..u am planning to.. And soon i will start with prequel to this.but needed a solid plot and no restrictions on posting comments. 🤔

ooohhhooo... Go for it dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -TIARA

Gowtu..u am planning to.. And soon i will start with prequel to this.but needed a solid plot and no restrictions on posting comments. 🤔

ooohhhooo... Go for it dear nd soon u ll turn into SM.. So dnt wrry...

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