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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update
Wow no more teheezeb and tameez between us we belong together
Love how he is so forward now the morning breakfast convo just cute
And then in his house her waiting for him like the dedicated wife
Love the song and romance
And rashid comes and interrupt
Wow Asad is such a great bhai he took his siblings
Humeria not gazi daughter really so who r their real child
So much twist that is y humi so pure at heart she does not take after gazia
Asad have to take care of zoya now with her nightmare
He loves her so much
Precap is interesting
Continue soon


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Thats how it shud be btwn them, a gradual acceptance by both of them shedding inhibitions since they are going to be life partners
Yah Asad has changed a lot becoz of the separation from Zoya and the realisation that you cannot judge a book by its cover. Now he knows that whos the actual Zoya
Asad always loves his siblings very much
Seems like not theri daughter, lets us see
Yes now Asad will have to take more care of zoya and he will do it too.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Anu di...I'm so sorry I was not able to comment.Exams keep me busy these days.I'll comment since tommorow...
Anyways the ff is going wonderful...Just read last 4 chapters and so much happened.I'm happy that AsYa are together.The twist with Humeira, GaZia and six-fingered man is interesting...Please update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Drishya..

Anu di...I'm so sorry I was not able to comment.Exams keep me busy these days.I'll comment since tommorow...

Anyways the ff is going wonderful...Just read last 4 chapters and so much happened.I'm happy that AsYa are together.The twist with Humeira, GaZia and six-fingered man is interesting...Please update soon...


I know you had exams and hope you faired well

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aksasya

Awesome update...
Continue soon...,


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anura7281


Rashid can be redeemed alongwith Shirin only becoz they both did the mistakes, teh children should not suffer, by handing over her children to Dilshad she proved that Dilshad has upper hand and was never wrong. Asad not calling Rashid abbu at this stage inspite of Shirins telling him shows that a mans hatred cant be forgotten at the blink of the eyes, no matter how innocently he was trapped, he did a big mistake by abondoning Dillu and kids. I am right? So as a son he needs more time.

They had to do it becoz they have lost everything now and cant be on the road with their innocent kids and this is a way of redemption of both. Shirin has to live without her kids for separating Rashid and Asad and Rashid has to live his life too in penance from hereafter. Becoz fate has played its game.

Rashid redemption could have been in 2 ways only either this, or his death, But Shirin is equally responsible for what happened 17 years ago she is not innocent. She broke a house so I chose this method. Hope it was logical and sensible.


I agree, the years of hatred cannot be forgotten in a matter on a day, the anguish and the hurt they have been through cannot be forgiven, thank you for writing QH the way we would have wanted it to be 😃
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Promo 3 : Humera: "Oh tho aap hai vo 6 ungi wala insaan" Mr. Six Finger : "beti yeh sab maine apke liye kiya hai, mera yakeen mano, mera aur koi irada nahi tha," Humera: "Kya meine jo us bungle mein suna aur dekha kya vo sach hai?" Mr. Six finger: "Jee" main majboor tha, aap mere malik ki ek louti natin thi, aur unhone marne se pehle apki zimmedari muje di aur pichle 15 saal se mein vahi kar raha hoon." Humera: "Yal Allah" She cries vehemently cursing her fate (Background some store room kind and song playing in the background "bane kyun bigade re naseeba"

Precap: Zoya is put through an experiment at the hospital. Razia and Gaffur rejoice that they can have at least the house now by selling Shirin properties and that they don't need Rashid anymore becoz in a couple of months time Humera will become 21 years old and she will inherit her ansectoral property and they can bring their own daughter in front of the world. Humera over hears everything. Nikhat recognises the signature on that register page as Badi bis. Ayan and Asad baffled that Badi bi stayed in that hotel and why she is not coming before the world. Humera is house arrested by Gazia and prevents her from meeting and talking to Ayan as now they don't want AyRa marriage. Ayan gets a note at KV doostep, "Humera ko bachao, uski jaan khatre mein hai".

PART 31

Asad House, the next day

It was like a calm after a storm. Asads house was now filled with all the perons he loved, be it his fiance, his brother, his mother and all his sisters whom once he thought he lost. He was now a happy man with so many people to love and take care. He was in his room waking up Ayan who had slept last night after crying over his fate. He was running his fingers through Ayan hair and telling him to wake up. Ayan pulled the duvet over his head and stopped Asad. Asad being Asad did not give up and made him forcible wake up by springling water on his face. Ayan said "Kya bhaijaan subah subah aap shuru hogaye, vaise jaise bachpan mein karte the?" Asad "Tum mere liye abhi bhi vohi chote Ayan hi ho, main tho soch raha hoon ki hum phirse apne bachpan ek baar phir jiye." Ayan "Are you serious bhaijaan,?" He touched his forehead and checked whether he was okay. Asad "Yes I am damn serious and now today onwards you are coming with me for jogging in the morning, now get up freshen and join me outside soon." Ayan "Bhaijaan" Asad "Be quick, Mein bahar intezaar kar raha hoon" and went outside to have his black coffee. He saw that Zoya was already in the kitchen setting out breakfast. He smiled seeing her. He wished "Good morning to be Mrs Khan." Zoya blushed and turned to see Asad behind, she too wished him back. He sat down on his chair and waited for his black coffee. Within no time Zoya came with a steaming coffee mug and handed over to Asad and went back. She was tugged at her hand by Asad, "To be Mrs Khan, yahan ayiye, yeh saaf nahi hain, please clean the cup" and he raised a eyebrow at her. Zoya too rolled her eyes and said "Maine khud saaf kiya hai, vo clean hai." Asad "nahi Ms. Farookhi, see this" and he made her see by pulling her close towards his face. He pointed at the cup. Zoya said "Kahan" Asad "yahan" Zoya " wait lemme see" and she looked at the cup at a close angle from here and there and found nothing. Zoya said "Yeh tho saaf hai,muje kuch dikhayi nahi deraha hai" Asad "Aap teek se nahi kar rahi hain, you know, dilse nahi kar rahi hai" Zoya saw that Asad was blowing on her ears while speaking and he was playing with her making her clean the cup. Zoya "Mr.Khan, mein dekh sakthi hoon ki cup bohot clean hai lekin apka dimag mein kuch kachra hain" Asad Oh really" Zoya "yes oh really" And somebody cleared her throat." Aheeem" They sprang from each other to look at the person and found it was Dilshad. Dilshad asked Zoya to call all the girls for the breakfast.

Gazias Residence

Humera was crying all through the day long since Ayan left home. She couldn't decipher what had transpired between the two families who were living together for the past 17 years. She thought she will ask about this to her parents and sprinted towards their room. Humera threw open the door and saw Gazia chit chatting in a happy mood. That was the last straw for Humera .She burst out. "aap dono yahan bait eke gappe mar rahe hain aur Ayan aur unke pura parivaar sadak pe bhatak rahe hain. Apko sharam nahi ati, jinke saath aap 17 saal se rahte the unhe iss tarah dhoka fareb se apne ghar se nikal ne ka kya matlab hai?" Razia "Humera, apni ammi aur abbu se iss tarah baat karte hain, kya yehi humne tumhe sikhaya hai?" Gaffur "Said Razia jane do bachi hai, iss tarah ki mamle se use door rakhe tho hi acha hai, aur humera beti yeh sab business ke mamle tum nahi samjogi aur behter hain tum issme mat pado, filal apne padai par dhyaan do aur humne bhi tumhare liye kuch socha hai jaise hi tum 21 saal hojaoki, hum soch rahe hain tumhe yahan se bohot door bhej de, in sab se bohot door." Humera "mein bachi nahi hoon abbu, ki aap job hi kahen mein use man jaun, kya business hai aur kya dhoka hai itna tho mein bhi samaj sakti hoon. Aur aap aise kaise mere zindagi ke faisle le sakte hain, mein ab balik hoon, aur mein apni zindagi ka faisla khud karoongi." Razia shouted "Humera yeh kya batameezi mein, aap tameez aur lihaz bhi bhool chuki ho uss jahir ladke ke liye, jo sara din ghar par baitkar, khata peeta tha, aur kaam ke naam par Rashid miyan aur saath mein hamara business ko bhi raste par la diya, are aaaj tak kiya kya hai uss ladke ne, din bhar matar gasti, aur awara gati ke alawa zindagi kuch kiya hai, bekar banker ghar par baita tha, vo tho hamara business that issliye use naukri par rakh liya, lekin vahan par bhi ussne kuch nahi kiya, sivaye ghoom phir ne ke alawa. Akal naam ki koi cheez hai hi nahi thi, varna use naukri koun deta, phatichar kahinka." Humera "Baas ammi, bohot hogaya, vo aap thi jisne muje bachpan se hi yeh bola ki Ayan mere shouhar banege, vo aap thi jo mere aur Ayan ke nikah karvane ke liye, uss din muje aur Ayan ko behosh ki halat mein bistar par dekh kar baat ka patangad bana diya, vo aap thi jisko mere aur Ayan ke sagai karvana chahti thi, tab yeh sab apko pata nahi tha, ab achanak se Ayan phatichar aur awara hogaya?" Razia "Humera galati hogayi mujse ki maine Ayan jaise ladke ko tumhari liye chuna, ab kaan kholke sunlo Humera tum mere ijazat ke baigar iss ghar se ek kadam bhi bahar nahi rakhogi, aur raha Ayan ka sawal , tho use jitna jaldi hosake bhool jao, usmehi tumhari behetari hai, samji. Agar muje pata chala ki tum uss ladke milne gayi yah phir use baat kit ho mujse bura aur koi nahi hoga, ab jao yahan se, hume kuch important baat karni hai." Humera said "Aap jitna kosish karlo Ammi ab mein Ayan se miloongi aur baat bhi karoongi kyunki ab hum dono ek doosre bohot mohabbat karte hain" and she stomped her foot and went outside in a rage.

Asads Residence

Everybody was seated at the breakfast table. Zoya and Najma were serving everybody. Asad and Ayan came from their jogging session and joined them too. Dilshad informed that Rashid had called and said they have decided that they are going on a pilgrimage tour now and will keep informed about them from time to time and had told specially told Ayan Nikhat and Nuzzat not to worry about them. Asad asked Nikhat "aaj kal kya kar rahi ho tum," Nikhat "Bhaijaan mein aage padne ki socha hai and lecturer banna chahti hoon." Asad "achi bata hain good" Aur nuzzat tum "Ayan replied "are bhaijaan yeh toh, din bhar idhar ki baat udhar aur udhar ki baat idhar karne main lagi rahti hain, college bhi teek se attend nahi karti hai, aur vahan koi poochta bhi nahi tha." Asad "yeh kya sun raha hoon main Nuzzat, aajse yahan yeh sab nahi chalega, tum log padayi ko serious kab loge, kuch ban na nahi hai zindagi mein, Zoya ko dekho, how she is independent, mein chata hoon ki meri sari behene ache se padayi kare aur apne pair par khade ho," Yeh baat tumpe bhi lagoo hoti hain Ayan, abto tumhara business nahi raha, toh ab kya karne ka irada hai." Ayan "Please bhaijaan don't tell me that I will join your office and I don't want too also, please Bhaijaan, mein rockstar banna chahta, vo to vahan uss ghar ki mohoul hi alag thi ki mein apna sapna chod diya" Asad "Rockstar, Ayan tum hosh mein tho ho, yeh bhi koi profession hota hai?" Ayan "ab jab hum pooru tareeke se azaad hai to main chahta hoon ki mein apne guitar or gana par dhyaan doon, bhaijaan vo mera sapna hai, I really want to compose my own albums , please bhaijaan mana mat kijiye." Asad "Mein soch kar jawab doonga" Ayan's face fell. Zoya was laughing at him. "Kya hua rabert, tum to kehte the ki, tum apni bhaijaan aise manaoge vaise manoge etc, ab kya hua, nahi manne." Ayan "Mona darling bhaijaan ne reject bhi toh nahi kiya hai, and I am sure vo man jayenge, hain bhaijaan?" Asad "Ayan tum Zoya ko Mona darling mat bulao, it doesn't sound nice, i mean only Mona okay." Ayan said in a mischievous tone "Agar mein Mona ko darling bulana chod doon to kya aap mere sapne ke liye maan jayenge?" Asad was like stunned. Zoya was laughing now. Asad was looking at Zoya now and she assured him with her eyes. Asad said "Okay mein mein..., I don't have any problem, I will enquire in the performing arts academy here and manage to get you an admission there, Happy now." Ayan "Bhaijaan you are the best, I love you." Everybody else "we all love you too". Asad looked at Zoya and their eyes spoke and that was known only to them. Dilshad said, "main jaanti hoon, ki muje apnana tum sab ke liye bohot mushkil hoga, par kissi pe bhi koi dabav nahi dalna chahti hoon, tum sab jaise chaho muje vaise bhula sakte ho aur yahan apni marzi se reh sakto yahan koi rok tok nahi, I have no issues at all." Ayan said "I will call you Badi ammi," Nikhat and Nuzzat too said that. Dilshad smiled and thought its difficult to take a mothers place no matter how the mother was but a mother is a mother only and children will miss their mother. Dilshad said "Main koshish karoongi ki tum sabko Shirin ki kami kabhi mehsooz na ho, agar kuch problem hoto muje bejijak batana, mein naraz nahi hongi." Ayan said "Nahi, yahan apke aur bhaijaan rehte hue hume koi problem nahi hosakti, we are happy here, par iss baat ka afsoz hai ki sab kuch iss tarah se hogaya" And Ayan took Dilshads hands and kissed them. Dilshad took him for a lovely hug soon to be joined by everybody except Asad. Asad was now seeing a whole family in front of him and thought this is the way fate has decided everything and he was watching it with a content heart.

Gazias Residence

Gaffur was on the dining table and shouted "aaj kal yeh Wajid miyaan dikh nahi rahe hain? Razia, kya tumne use chutti di hai? Mera newspaper muje teekse nahi milta hai aajkal, pata nahi kahan mar gaya, khambaqt." Razia "Are haan mein to apko batana bhool gayi, Wajid miyaan apne gaon gaye hain, unki kissi rishtedaar ki beti ki sagaai hai, ek do din mein ajayenge, tab tak thoda adjust karlijiye." Gaffur"teek hai.aur tumne vo ghar ke kagzaat teek se rakhdiya haina?" Razia "Jee, meine hifazat se rakhdiya hai, ab mein bolungi to kahoge ki bolti hai, accha kiya jo humne kuch din pehle Shirin se uske bachi kuchi property hamare naam karvadi, varna aajto hum sadak pe hote, Allah ka shukar hai, vo property ko bhej ke, humne yeh ghar chud valiya, ab to sar par kamsekam chat tho hoga na." Gaffur "Haan Razia, barso se kamayi hoon izzat ke liye mein ek pal mein sab kuch nahi gava sakta," Razia "are siddiqi saab aapke iss izzat kamane ke chakkar mein hi tho sara paisa lutgaya, ab ab thoda kharcha kam kijiye, izzat tho apki vahi rehegi usme koi kami nahi ayegi, ab na aap apne committee karmo mein dhyaan zyaada dijiye" Gaffur "Teek keh rahi ho Razia, maine kuch zyaada hi dariya dili dikhayi ab thoda haath ko kaske pakadna hoga, ab hume hamari asli bati ki bare mein bhi tho sochna hai, use humne bachpan mein videsh bhej diya tha, sabke nazar se chupakar rakha, tumhare kissi jaan pehchan wali ke hawale kiya thaki, jab waqt aye tab use sabke samne apni beti banakar la sake. Aur shayad vo waqt jaldi ayega" Razia "Vaise hamari beti Hiba bohot sundar hai, maine uski tasveer dekhi hai, bilkul aap par gayi hai ji, vo neeli ankhen, aur ghora ghora rang, aur tehzeeb mein toh vo lakhon mein ek hain, Chand ka tukda hain, hamari Hiba" Gaffur "Inshallah" aur ab humne hamari saari dav sahi waqt dekh kar chalana hai. Ek baar Humera 21 saal ki hojaye, tab hum iss poore jaydad ka malik honge aur aish aur aram ki zindagi guza renge" Razia "Ji sahi kaha apne, issliye toh maine humera ko ayan se door rahno kaha hai, taki hum mouka pakar humera se sara jaidad apne naam kar sake, varna agar kahin iss ladki ne, ayan ke saath nikah kar liya tabto sara jaidad ka malikhana haq Ayan ke paas chala jayega, aur jis maqsad se humne Rashid ko itni saal ghulam banake rakha, uske liye ab Rashid ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, ek kangal aadmi se hamara kya rishta aur Shirin se bhi sab kuch aitliya hain, ab to hamare raj karne ke din hain." Unknown to them a pair of eyes was watching all these Humera had overhead all these convo and she was holding her breath by closing her mouth with her hands to prvent her sobs going out and making them feel her presence there. She quickly slipped from there, she tried to sneek out of the house, but Razia had already planned her house arrest. She was 24*7 kept under observation and was not allowed even outide to the garden.

At a psychatarist clinic

As soon as Zoya saw the clinic and doctor's name she was confused, her mind was waywarding and swinging to and for deciphering why Asad brought her here. Seeing confusion in her eyes Asad again asked "Do you trust me Zoya?" Zoya looked at him perplexed but nevertheless she nodded her in agreement without saying anything. Asad held her close by her shoulders almost half hugging her. He placed a forehead kiss and assured her that everything is going to be alright. He took her and soon they were before the doctor. Dr. Asish Sareen was one of the best psychatarist in Bhopal and hence how Asad could miss him and hence they were here. Dr. Sareen asked "So Miss Zoya right?" Zoya "Nodded" Dr.Sareen "Are you afraid of me?" Zoya again "Nodded in negative without talking" Dr. "Then why are you not talking? I wont don't anything harmful, I am here to help you only." Zoya looked at Asad and Asad said "Zoya , hes the best in whole of Bhopal and he will help us. So don't worry" and he placed his hand on her shivering hands. Zoya said that she wanted to talk to Asad alone. Dr Sarin smiled and he said he will come in 5-10 mins, by that time she can finish her talks and be ready . After Drs exit, Zoya asked Asad "Kya muje yahan issliye laye hain ki aapko meri baat par yakeen nahi hai, jo mein dekhti hoon, vo jhoot nahi hai, I can really see it, please Mr.Khan kya aap samajte hai ki pagal hoon, dimagi taur se bimar hoon, aur ek achi shaadi shuda zindagi nahi guzar sakti hoon?" Asad seeing the questions put forward by Zoya, he placed his fingers on her lips and said "SHHH" He was still lovingly looking at her and spoke softly "Dekho Zoya, pehle yeh ki aap pagal nahi hai aur mein aisa bilkul nahi samjhta, doosri baat yeh ki, mein jaanta hoon apko vo sari cheese asli mein dikhti hain aap jhoot nahi bol rahi hai, aur teesri baat, aap jaise bhi hain, aap mere liye perfect hai, issliye hamari shadi shuda zindagi ko khush banana ke liye main yahan apko laya hoon. Remember we belong together and so your problem is mine too Zoya and I cant see you getting up like this again and again at wee hours of the day and spending the rest of your life in fear and mental trauma. We need to find a solution for your dreams and thats why we are here. Dont misunderstand me." Zoya looked at him in his eyes and saw that he was actually speaking the fact, till when she is going to be tormented by her nightmares, it has to stop somewhere. She knew he was being practical and she had had full faith in him. Zoya replied "Ji I am sorry" Asad "what sorry, you forgot theres no sorry and thank you between us, you can say sorry to Dr.Sareen when he comes back." Zoya "Oh really with her eyes wide open and flashed a dimpled smile. By that time Dr Sareen came back and said "Yah if your private conversation is over, shall I take her to the chamber please." Zoya said "I m sorry for my behaviour and now I am ready and I am not afraid also." Dr.Sareen smiled and said "Good, I think Mr. Khan has a unique place in your heart." Zoya said Absolutely hes special , very very special" But I want him also with me right inside where you are taking me" Dr. Sareen said "normally I don't allow my patients by standers to accompany inside but yours being a special case I can allow Mr. Khan in there. Come inside"

Asad House

Nikhat and Nuzzat now almost got used to the house routine and they were feeling comfortable too. Nikhat said dekho nuzzat Asad bhaijaan ka ghar kitna sundar haina, hamra vo purana ghar, tho ek kal kotri lagtha tha, lambi deeware, bade bade khambe, kabhi na khatm hone wali khamosh raste haina? Nuzzat said "Haan Bhaji, yeh ghar toh bohot hi sundar hai, aur apko pata hai, Ayan bhaijaan ne kaha tha ki, Asad bhaijaan ne khud iss ghar ko apne haatho se sajaya hai" Nikhat "Acha, tabito sab kuch apni apni jagah par hai aur kitna khula khula haina? Nuzzat "Hmm, maina apne 12th ke baad interior designing ka course karne soch rahi hoon, bhaijaan makan banayenge aur mein uska interiors design karoongi." Nikhat "Acha tho tumne future plans bhi bana liya hai" Saying this they entered Ayans room now and Nikhat trampled his shirt. She took it and said "Yah Allah yeh bhaijaan bhi na, kabhi nahi sudhar te, bahar se ate hi shirt phek dete hain," and she was shaking his shirt and something feel from its pocket and she thought it must be something important for Ayan and will give him when he comes out from the washroom.

At the clinic

Zoya was now seated in a chair and she was holding Asads hands so tightly and was gripping it in nervousness. Asad was also holding her and assuring her that is okay. Dr. Sareen said "See Zoya I will tell you about the whole process what I am going to do. I will be giving you an injection due to which slowly you will go to a temporary sleep but still be able to conversate with me and we are going to do a time travel now to see what and when and how you saw these dream scenes you are getting and once I am finished with my work I will slowly bring back to you back to the present. Dont be afraid. Now are you readu for this exercise Zoya?" Zoya looked at Asad and he assured her. Zoya "Yes Doctor," In no time Zoya fell asleep. Dr.Sareen started "Zoya can you hear me? Zoya "Yes", Dr."Who am I?" Zoya "Dr.Asish Sareen Dr. "Good, Whats your name" Zoya "Zoya Farookhi"Dr. "Ok, now tell what are you seeing?" Zoya "I am happy now, actually more than happy, I am engaged to the person I love and I love him so much more than anything in the world, I can do anything for him, then there is phoppi, Oh, my to be mother in law,actually she is more like mother to me, and a house full of sister in laws and then my best friend and to be bro in law, then my pregnant sister and her husband, who actually are my foster parents. I have a family now and wholesome family, a complete family." Dr. "Go back 6 months, now what do you see?" Zoya "I am in India and I came to search my father and then met him" Dr. "Whom did you meet" Zoya "Asad" Dr. "Oh ok, go back 1 year, where are you now?" Zoya "New York with my appi and jiju, they love me so much that they didn't plan for their own kid to take care of me. That day I fought with my appi and went out because Appi always wanted me to get married soon and I hated that." Dr."fine, go back 1 more year now what do you see?" Zoya "I am with a friend of mine, and she said she has got some pictures for me when she visited India to attend a family function and she gave me." Dr. "Then" Zoya "they happened to be my fathers pictures in young age." Dr. "and how did you know that?" Zoya "My appis some relative told me that she knew my mom and she was married to the man in the picture and then he deserted her and never came back." Dr."Oh so sad, so now where is your relative? " Zoya "she died a year back only, she was very old." Dr. "Oh, now go back 5 years , now what do you see?" Zoya " I am in my final year of my college and had topped in my exams and I am nagging Jiju and Appi to take my on a holiday." Dr."Good, now again go back 5 years what do you see now?" Zoya " I was in my high school and children are teasing me for the scar I have on my right arm, and I came crying from the school. Schools uniforms sleeves were short you know. Then Appi and Jiju changed my school and there I had no problem since they had long sleeves." Dr. " Oh now go back 5 more years back now what do you see?" Zoya "I am inside a building which is on fire, I m shouting for help, then Ammi ammi bachao ammi, and I am crying now." Dr. Sareen saw that Zoya was literally shivering, sweating and panting and she was restless now she was shaking her head vigorously from one side to another. He calmly said "zoya relax, answer my questions, what else do you see? Can you recognise any face? Tell me Zoya? Try hard" Zoya "No doctor all I can see is only fire around me and my ammi is there too but I cant see any faces" Dr. "Try again Zoya may be you can see something more?" Zoya "Yah suddenly somebody pulled out of the fire now and I can see only his hand, and it has 6 fingers also." Dr. "Ok relax a bit more and try to see again, do you see something now? "Zoya "Some boxes are there in the background and something is written on them" Dr. "What is written try to identify it?" Zoya "I can see A K B A R D O L L S yes its Akbar Dolls yah I can clearly see it" Dr. "Try again concentrate anything else?" Zoya "I can see somebody is alit before me but that person is not screaming at all but lying on the ground, and on the ground there is a pool of blood."Dr. "Zoya thoda aur koshish karo kissi ka chehra dekha?" Zoya "Kissika chehra nahi, charo taraf aag hi aag hai, mera haath par kuch gir gaya, mein jal rahi hoon, bachao, baharo" zoya started shouting vehemently. Doctor again said "Zoya relax, please nothing is happening you are fine, Go back a year or so, anything could you see" Zoya "Nothing its all back out I cant see anything, poora andhera hai, I cant see anything, kuch bhi nahi" she started to shake her head and was sweating profusely and doctor stopped the experiment then and there and allowed Zoya to have a short sleep. Asad was sitting beside her holding her tender hands in his. He was pained to hear all those experiences in Zoyas life. Anwar already briefed that she had witnessed her mother death in fire. He slowly lifted right sleeve of her arm and saw the scar. He caressed it lovely and said "Zoya tum bohot bahadur ho, yeh nishan yeh sabit kartha hai kit um kitni strong ho. I now love you more Zoya and I am proud of you too." A lone tear escaped his eyes and fell on Zoyas hand, she got up feeling the warm tears and sat up on the bed. Asad was now relieved to see that she was conscious. He helped her to get down and they both went outside to meet doctor.

Asads House

Ayan came out of the washroom and took out his guitar and sat down to strum it. He heard doorbell ring. Upon hearing it again and again went out to see who was it. He opened the door and found no one there turned and murmered "hone koi shararati bache, hamesha bell bajake pareshan karte hain, agli baar range hathon pakadoonga" Shaking his head was about to close the door something flew inside. It was a white paper and something written on it. He picked that paper and turned to read it. He was bewildered to see that "Humera ko bachao, uski jaan khatre mein hai". He called humera immediately and on the other side when humera was about to pick her phone Razia snatched it and opened the mobile, took out the sim and broke it into 2 and threw it on the floor.

At the clinic

Asad and Zoya was waiting for the doctor. Dr. Sareen came and sat. He started "I have examined Zoya and there is nothing to be worried about. She is perfectly fine like any other individual. The things which she sees as nightmares and dreams are images of an accident happned in her childhood. On a thorough examination I came to the conclusion that she doesn't have any memories previous to when she was 6 years old. This incident I think happened around when she 6 years old. And her memory is impaired previous to that. Thats why she saw a blackout. Its okay becoz almost evey kid will not remember what happned till he or she is 3 or 4 years. Her impaired memory of just 2 years is of no significance here as its will some childhood memories only. But what happened at the age of 6 was the turning point in her life. She developed pyrophofia - means fear of fire from that age only. And after that as Mr. Khan had detailed me you were in a shock state for almost 6 months out of which you gradually came out and became normal. Your OTT and messy behaviour was the retaliation of your disturbed mind. And the scene which disturbs you is your mother's death as this has been clarified by your brother in law. And they took you to states for having a change of place in order to make to overcome your shock.

Zoya "Okay but why do I see it in bits and parts? Why I am not able to see the clear picture and faces?" Dr. Sarin "See Zoya, I can only tell you that human brains behaviour is not explored completely even by us becoz we get to know new new things with the passage of time. I would say only 10 % of brain behaviour is being researched and explored by people like us and the remaining 90% is somewhat unexplored and unknown. May be your mind will be at rest when you find everything related to your past and then perhaps you wont get any nightmares too. May be this is natures way of telling something which nobody knows or is a secret till now. As you said you came here to search your abbu who deserted your mother. May be these dreams are a key to your past and when you find the anwers for your questions, I am sure your mind will be at peace and rest."

Doctor turned towards Asad and said "Please keep her happy always it so happens when she is very disturbed mentally or emotionally she gets these nightmares frequently. May be keeping her engrossed in something and diverting her thoughts may work wonders. All that we see in our dreams are images of our sub conscious mind but unknown to our conscious minds. Our conscious mind will always guide us in our normal activites but our sub conscious mind guides us during sleep also. Some Dreams have meaning, some are wierd, some may be bad, etc. But everything is what is perceived by our sub conscious mind and it works only when our conscious mind is at rest. So don't worry, keep smiling and yes you can contact me at any time for any kind of help."

Asad said "Thank you so much Dr. Sareen. I hope that I don't need your help in future."and he shakes hands with him and walks out with Zoya.

Asad house

Asad and Zoya arrive at the house to find to door open. When they went inside they got the fact that everybody was waiting for their arrival it seems. Ayan said "Bhaijaan yeh dekhiye and he showed the letter which he got at doorstep. Asad and Zoya were baffled seeing this. Nikhat said that she got a paper from Ayans pocket and when she was about to give it back to Ayan they found that Badi bi has stayed in the hotel from recognising this signature and she showed it. Everybody was shocked. Ayan then described about how they went to that bunglow which Zoya was searching and how they found Babi bi in the pictures clicked by them and then when they revisited nobody was there, that photo disappeared etc. Now Badi bai has stayed in this hotel. Ayan said that Badi bi is not kidnapped but she herself is hiding from the world. But for what? Ayan also said " I tried to contact humera but its not reachable but found out from the gardener that she is under house arrest" Nikhat said "Lekin insab mein Humera ki jaan khatre main kaise padi, aab humera ko kaise bacheyenge? Zoya suddenly says "yeh register ka page Humera ko bachayega" Asad asked how and Zoya tells her plan.

Precap: An inspector comes to arrest Humera that she has unlawfully stayed with Ayan on the date when the hotel was raided by saying that they were married. Asad, Ayan and Zoya go to hotel again and enquire about Badi bi and gets to know that she stayed for a few days and then left with a person. Adjuster gets the original recording of the gudiya factory. Humera is safe in KV. Humera explains that she is not the real daughter of her parents and they plan to bring her after getting her property. Everybody shocked at this revelation. Dilshad decides AyRas marriage to be done asap in order to secure Humeras life and property. Everybody agrees to it. They do a court marriage as for now, for Ayan to get the ownership of the property and Humeras life is no more in danger. The original recording is handed over to the police and the case is re opened at the insurance companys request. Asad gets to know that the gudiya factory belonged to a person called Akbar Hussain and the dolls were famously branded as Akbar Dolls. Asad stunned at his own conclusion that it might be Zoyas moms skeleton that was found in doll factory months ago.

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Ooh things are getting good, I'm so happy Asad took Zoya to see a psychiatrist and get her check out, her nightmares are obviously from the trauma she went through. Gazia the less said about them the better. You remembered that they had a daughter, I remember them saying it at the beginning of the show. So humeira isn't their biological daughter then whose daughter is she? Can't wait to read and find out, and Gazia are not going to get anything since Ayaan and humeira are getting married. Great update, love it all. 😳
Edited by B3ll3... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ITS REALLY INTERESTING

PLS DO CONTINUE SOON

THANKS FOR PM ...

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Edited by aishw09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!!!!
Getting more & more interesting?!!!!!
Thanks 4 pm
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The progression is amazing! 👏

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