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mooumi

@mooumi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: anura7281

for that its a long way i promise you will get it. To get nok jhoks asya has to be together right. Time has nt come now. But will come soon dont worry.

okkk di n update soon 😃

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Nyc update
U are really a fab writer
I jus loved it
N would love to follow it

There is only 1 request
Please seperate the dialogues from expression and gestures

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anura7281

@anura7281

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: -Aditi.
Nyc update
U are really a fab writer
I jus loved it
N would love to follow it

There is only 1 request
Please seperate the dialogues from expression and gestures

thank you so much for the compliment

See I write in a hurry and I dont get enough time

i know the convos lie btwn the lines. I apolosgise for this.

But I will try from next time but still cant promise. This is becoz of

time constraints not anything else.

Glad you liked my story and ye pls follow it. You will enjoy

Edited by anura7281 - 11 years ago

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Darling ,

I love this update.

As you said i like this Zoyaan.👏

I am eagerly waiting for the next update.

Asad and his shell when will he open up.

I am waiting for Zoya's innovation.

Love you dear.

Thanks for the pm.

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Edited by Surish - 11 years ago

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anura7281

@anura7281

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: aseelashah
Darling ,
I love this update.
As you said i like this Zoyaan.👏
I am eagerly waiting for the next update.
Asad and his shell when will he open up.
I am waiting for Zoya's innovation.
Love you dear.
Thanks for the pm.

Yup you all will love this zoyaan!😛

Asad is riling up and when his patience breaks he will open up one day😕

Yup Zoyas innnovation! I can only say this now. But you all will like it I guarantee.

Yup i love you too.

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Belle Collet

@AngreziKudi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Awe Zoya glad ayan was there. Great update. I can't wait to read about Zoya and Ayaan as friends, I have always adore their friendship. Can't wait to read about a jealous asad and also when he realise his love for Zoya. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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anura7281

@anura7281

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: B3ll3...
Awe Zoya glad ayan was there. Great update. I can't wait to read about Zoya and Ayaan as friends, I have always adore their friendship. Can't wait to read about a jealous asad and also when he realise his love for Zoya. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Yup ayaan was there at the nick of the moment. and he will be there for one week more So lots of Zoyaan. Yup its friendship only nothing else. No jealous Asad now Now Asad is possessive thinking that Koi tho hai of Zoya is him. But still he has not met her till now. You may get one I think so. He had realised his feelings for Zoya but has not yet opened up. Way to go!

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Wonderful update!!!
Nikhat & humeira are really smart!!!
Zoya felt guilty as Anwar & Zeenath didn't hav a family bcoz her!!!
Asad is Asad Emotionally challenged!!!
Aww Devar ne bhabi ko bachaya!!!!
Thanks 4 pm.
I liked ur post on page 1!!!!

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anura7281

@anura7281

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Wonderful update!!!
Nikhat & humeira are really smart!!!
Zoya felt guilty as Anwar & Zeenath didn't hav a family bcoz her!!!
Asad is Asad Emotionally challenged!!!
Aww Devar ne bhabi ko bachaya!!!!
Thanks 4 pm.
I liked ur post on page 1!!!!

Yes Niks and humi are smart in my story. more smartness coming soon.

Ys Zoya feels guitly, They did becoz of Zoyas traumatic childhood which you will get later

as flash back.

Ys Abhi tak Devar aur bhabhi ka rishta bana nahi hai so they will be friends and soon partners in crime also. So keep enjoying them. soon ayaan will get a new name too.

Glad you like ti