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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

I AM SPEECHLESS!!!! SPEECHLESSS, K? <3 Love yaah!!!!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Wow, just wow. The update was simply amazing and mind blowing,

From start to finish the update was a brilliant read,

Love the way Khushi was being very blunt with Arnav and trying to ignore him, his plans to instigate and provoke her kept on backfiring.

Wow love the part where Arnav removed the mud from khushi's eyes, a beautiful and lovely moment.

The dialogues you included in the update were perfect and complimented the scenes perfectly,

Love the way he challenged her and kissed her, leaving a poor Khushi stunned.

Awww the part at the orphanage was awesome and bless Arnav had so much fun with the kids and even made Khushi join in.

Khushi can definitely go one better with the challenge as she gave Arnav a very passionate and hot kiss, leaving Arnav speechless.

Loved the update, written exceptionally well.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

fantastic chapter... loved it totally

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Sanaya Javaid

@Hope_Life

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Nice update.Like Khushi took good time to forgive him.

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Zehar hai ki pyar hai tera chummaa
Kaisa ye khumaar hai tera chummaa
Maine dekha nahi tere jaisa kahi
Tujhko mere sar ki kasam 😳

yeh song uss CHUBAN ke naam jo Ms.W ne bade hi Naughty andaz se Mr.A ko diya aur woh khade ke khade hi reh gaye haaye...

edited my comment on page no 5😊

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pooja_sanu

@pooja_sanu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

aww firstly i thought arnav will directly ask sorry but that dint happend instead he kissed her...n challeged her!!

n den i was expecting kushi wont kiss him but there u go she kissed him i mean better than arnav!!
loved it!!!

n it was nce i guess he is opening to kushi more n more

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Res 😊
Unres

Oh gosh he is such a flirt darling sexy legs n all
Khushi finally won the challenge
N first tym in his lyf time ASR was speechless

Kya bat h...khushi or kya kya kr waogi asr se

Lovely n awesome update

Edited by -Aditi. - 11 years ago

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

fab and lovely update.
khushi really gives hard tym to arnav, loved reading it the way khushi irritate arnav and not forgiving him.
the kiss challenge reminds the show again but the way khushi tooktym and kissed arnav in kitchen was sooo awesome and lovely 😳
khushi is falling moreand more in love with arnav as his past is revealing to her.
superb part
thanks for pm

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

I am so glad to see Khushi giving him a tough time and making him see some sense through his anger and iritation. I agree he wasn't in the right frame of mind but that doesn't justify his actions. Nevertheless the way the entire apology ended was fun and I ,for one, have absolutely no complains.

The different facets of his personality can leave anyone mesmerized, no doubt she's falling for him hard and fast. The entire orphanage visit was beautiful. The reason behind his dual personality, though is a mystery, I am waiting for it to unfold at its pace. The small kitchen encounter was amazing and I many such encounters are desperately awaited. Miss.Wilson is seriously too good for she actually made the great ASR speechless.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Mind blowing update...

Hayyee... Arnav challenged her and she won... And she proved that she can do even better... ... Loved them... Sexy legs made him speechless...😉

Poor guy was so sad... His sexy legs was not talking to him... She took her time to forgive him which Arnav deserve...

Khushi came to know about his other side... For this I thank to Shruti for being the best friend... Loved their time in orphanage...

Continue soon...