Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 24) - Page 106

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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting monday,i just start to re read this story! is just i discover a new world,again,and again! thank you for your wonderful words ,characters,feelings!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh this long long long long night ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its monday in my place now...dont worry i dont live in mars...coz i love my india.
So mr 'update' when will u show up???
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Posted: 11 years ago
Monday aa gya... so eagerly waiting for the update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Time for new thread and so hope the first page of new thread have the update!!
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New thread and update also jaldi .. XD!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally, Anonji. I have caught up with the update.

I can see it was a dfficult chapter to write, but I think you were spot on in capturing the emotions that both must have felt when they were finally able to express what they feel for each other in the most primal and initmate of ways, especially after all that they have been through.

Khushi's embarrasment in facing her bua and Arnav's father is not surprising at all. She has been their child all these days, and now she has crossed the threshold into womanhood, it is difficult for her to face those who still think of her as a child. Also what she has exprerienced is the most profound experience for a woman and an intensely private one, it is not easy to face the world so soon.

Arnavji is, of course, a badmash, teasing her so. But his insecurities and fears still rule him to some extent. He is revelling in the possession of her, instead of revelling in the fact that she has given him not just her body, but her heart and soul. When will he learn?


Edited by Japonica - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
What happened to the K's POV song? Did it pass or is it yet to come?
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Posted: 11 years ago
naya thread bana ke update kijiyen...its been sooo long...

cheers...
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Posted: 11 years ago


Link to THREAD 25

Sorry guys, the chapter is taking longer than expected and add to it my own time crunch. I know I promised the update today, but I'll have to move it to Tuesday evening or early Wednesday. I rarely miss a deadline, so I hope you all can overlook the tardiness this time.
Edited by Anony_mous - 11 years ago

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