Hey Juhi!
You surely took your friends challenge to another level in this story. So far I have read prologue and 3 chapters and they are amazing. Along with that I have some questions of my own.
Chapter 1 : details about their hurried marriage and how it happened. My curiosity rises here as to how Arnav new Khushi was Ms Gupta. I read in your note that Arnav will answer it himself in few more update so I'll be patient but I can speculate and I think that he might know her from before apart from being attracted to her.
His blatant declaration of his attraction to Khushi was stunning and his playing with her for sharing the bed and her being virgin was hilarious.
Chapter 2 : Their getting into easy comrade and try to get to know each other was really nice. Arnav is right for Khushi carrying for others comes instinctively as that is what all she has done all her life, taking care of Payal but Arnav snapping her had different reason which were justified once he opened up to her. If Arnav say that he has never let anyone care for him than he has also not care for anyone other than his family but her he does care for Khushi, her opinion about the house, her feelings when he snapped at her, her dreams of pursuing PhD. Everything about her matters to him which brings me back to the fact that he may have known her from before not that Khushi know him personally.
And wow...if only every man describes his women, girlfriend, wife like the way Arnav did to make her feel beautiful and accept the compliments. But Khushi was witty in her reply but it did backfired 😉.
Chapter 3 : it was hot throughout. First her helping him undress was really hmmm... A...arr...ousing😉. Him playing with her to make her confess to her state that she too as affected and didn't sleep was awesome.
Aman is an ass and still didn't know what N.K. is curious about. Lavanya is another character, is she jealous or it's just the way she is not talking to anyone?
Hmmm Khushi is right to feel sad. In the event of Payals wedding they does have forgotten about Khushi. I can relate what she feels, I too live in US and if my parents fix my sis's wedding without considering my availability than I'll be dejected and shatter as well. Arnav is too caring he is making sure he keeps Khushi's mind off such thoughts.
Yes Khushi be selfish. We should be at times in life, and see the result was awesome a passionate kiss. Her offer to help Arnav with undressing met a nice reply...can't wait to read what's next.
Chapter 4 : Please email me the bog link @ ripdaman_ripu@yahoo.com
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