Arshi ff - PERFECT 'DULHAN' * PART (8) up... 8/6* pg 82 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start i thought its kushi thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
amazing update
really thought it was khushi
was is khushi according to arnav's expectation
pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ROTFL Nani I don't want my wife to listen to all my orders without using her brains . Nani I don't want my wife always wearing veil, Nani I don't want dis don't wat dat etc etc etc Duh. Neha now I can't really wait wen both Raizada brothers will go to Lucknow to meet Gupta sisters and MU happens Hurry Up. Once wen it happens den no doubt Arnav would be marrying Khushi who will show wat is called brain and wat not to The great ASR dat never in his life he'll complain about girls qualification Devil.
Update soon Neha, its really trilling and thanks for d pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
awesome start
i'm speechless
loved it!
waiting for our KKG entery
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Posted: 11 years ago
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haha nice start. i knew khushi will b shown the same way as asr wants :-D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26


Thnk you so much for liking & commenting on this ff..
Here is next part...


BANNER CREDITS- "SAMEERA12"...

Part (2) -> KHUSHI IN 'Manorama' Estyle


Payal was sitting in her room, tensed..
Her future hubby will be visiting the coming weekend. She has to be 'perfect'.. According to her 'sanskaar', she should not miss single tradition..
<><><><><>

Khushi came in the house humming a song,
"Didi tera dewar deewana;
Haye Ram Kudiyon ko Dale Dana..."

As soon as buaji heard her, she scolded,
"Hey Nandkishore, the groom is coming soon to see our Payaliya & what are you singing? It looks bad."

Khushi stared at her buaji..
Yes. She was singing deliberately. But, she will never admit that in front of her buaji..
"Wow!
Just because, the so-called groom is coming here,
I can't even sing in My OWN house!
Just Wow!"

"Shut up.. There's one sister who's tensed &
The other one is giving tension to others..
Hey Nandkishore! Look he has a younger brother, too!
So, behave properly..
We can look forward to your wedding, too.."

Khushi smiled widely..
Buaji thanked her NandKishore! But the next second, her peace got ruined..
"Good, you told me before.
I'll start giving him training to be my
Perfect 'Dulha'...
"
<><><><><>


Payal was sitting in her room, tensed.
"Will her in-laws like her? Will the groom like her?"
All these questions were roaming in her mind.
Unlike Khushi, she wanted this marriage to happen.
Her family had many expectations from this marriage..

She was in her thoughts when she heard,



"Ee shasi Gupta kaha rahat hai?"

Payal turned around only to left shocked..
There she is; her mischievious sister, Khushi..
She was dressed in a vibrant attire with her hair tied up in a bun..



"Yeh kya hai Khushi?" Asked Payal, still shocked..

While Khushi comes inside walking like a typical 'auntie' & speaks,
"Khushi naahi, Dilliwali saasuma! Tum humka nahi jaanat ho?"

While Payal stood there, shocked. She got it is anther prank of Khushi & tried to hold her neck when, Khushi stood up..
Payal flinched back at Khushi's raised voice,
"Hello hie Bye Bye! Tum hamra khoon karna chahat ho, youz PAGALIA!"


Then Khushi flipped her long braid across her shoulder, (buaji style)
"Ee ka Nandkishore! Payalia, Tum oo Khusi ki tarah kahe karat ho? Hum tumka ee sanskar diye rahe! Jao jakar chai banakar lao!

Payal just nodded at Khushi, scared of her new prank..

While Khushi once Again touched her bun, (Manorama style),
"Kaa pata chai ma zeher hello-hie karke, hame bye-bye kar diye to?"


Then Khushi holds Payal's chin & turning her face sideways, checks her out,
"Thik-thak hi hai.. Waisan humri bahuriya hone khatir tumka hamri baat manega padi.. Warna Shadi -bye bye
Humra Bitwa to phirst calass(class) modeel se kam naahi."



Both sisters shared a hearty laugh...

Payal asked her, "Whose acting you performed right now?"

Khushi laughed again, "I met this weird aunty recently when I went to Delhi for the Conference..
She presented herself to be some aunt of my Boss!"


Payal expressed her concern, "Khushi, you know right? Here no one allows their Daughter-in-law to work & that too, a job, where you've to go to DELHI frequently.."

Khushi rolled her eyes,
"Jiji, you know, God has given us Brains, too. So, we can think for ourselves..
I'm not going to follow everything 'pati' tells me to do..
I'm HEAD DESIGNER of AR, Lucknow Branch..
And this proves I'm worthy to Continue my job.."


Payal hugged her sister back. So what, if she abides by family 's rules? She will never leave her sister alone.
She will support her sister in whichever way she wants to lead her life.."
Edited by ..Neha..PM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
**res**

****unres****

yupieee me first first yo yo

update was just mind blowing 🤪

khushi was epic so hilarious 🤣

i was laughn continuously🤣

khushi is so mischievous

payal to pranks se bhi dar gayi hello hi bye bye🤣

tht dlog to was mind blowing

chai me zeher hello hie karke, hume bye bye karde 🤣🤣🤣

too goo love...

n m so happy tht such a wonderful story is dedicated to me😃

i love u yaar thnx fr d update...
Edited by marium-zamamii - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
**res**

****unres****

m second too yupieee 🥳

well u updated frst only small update thn u edited it too full

thts y i double reserved it...

love u mwahhh 🤗

waitng fr JOLP

itni excited hu tere sabhi stories k leke😳

now this ff also is my close to heart

thnx jaanu ☺️


Edited by marium-zamamii - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
hello .. hi .. bye bye!!!😆
yeh kaa thi...?!
phirst calass story!!!
very nice .. continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
It was nice update
pls continue soon
Thanks for pm me

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