Laal Ishq- Taarey ff - Page 5

very intersting concept
update soon dear

Originally posted by: payu_taarey

sounds intresting
waiting for update

thnks. trying to update asap

Originally posted by: princess_tara

after reading just these four lines

i m sure u r going to write a great passionate love story

so do start it soon n dont forget to pm me ok

I hope I'll be able to stand your hopes😃
will update soon and surely pm you

Originally posted by: jallwa_taarey

this seems interesting

Thank you for the PM

Please do PM me when you update

Thank you

thnk u so much. will surely pm you

Originally posted by: rheajini

nice .. Give teasor soon in hope it will be like tiitle ..

p.s :- tittle gives glimpse of passionate story .. Ahem I jst love this tittle laal ishq.

which makes me comment aftr so many tym

I am glad that you liked the title. I'll update soon. hope you'll like the further updates

Originally posted by: tareyforever333

Awesome concept!!
Can't wait for update!!

thnk u. bas thoda intezaar. I'll be there with the update😃

Originally posted by: _PanCake_

mai tujhe kaise maru??

yaar itna acha concept hai...

prologue kyu nhi diya huh??

kaise bhi maar. mujhe kuch nahi hoga😛 kyunki sab kuch teri screen pe padega mujhpe nahi.

Originally posted by: diyadawda13

Awesome concept di!

Can't wait to read it.

Please update soon, and thanks for the PM.

tujhe achha laga😃
bas mera to jeevan sudhar gaya.😆
I'll update soon darling

Originally posted by: diyataarey

Sounds interesting...

Do please continue soon :)

thnk u😃

Originally posted by: ankita_95

promo lines r suprb dear !!

its actually smthin different..

continue soon ..

thnx 4 pm :)

glad that you liked it😃 will update soon

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan

nice concept dear..

thnk u so much😃

Originally posted by: Vrindaroxz

revenge turned love passionate story...

great concept...

thoda to teaser dia hota...

thnk u so much. and intezaar karane mein bhi apna ek maza hai😆

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Concept sounds intresting...👍🏼

Waiting egarly for part 1 so update soon...😃

thnk u so much. will update soon

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Exciting concept
I can't wait to read the story

thnk u. just a little more wait😉

Originally posted by: dasv

Amazing title and concept
Laal the color of love and blood
Revenge turning into love will b aggressive and passionate
Continue soon
Waiting for the update

thnk u for such a lovely comment😃
will update soon

Originally posted by: -SunShine

Waiting
continue soon

will continue soon

Originally posted by: poorni_vishali

its interesting

continue soon thanks for pm

thnk u so much

Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran

seems intrstng
continue soon

thnk u

Originally posted by: ..Neha..

At least give PROLOGUE!! <puppy face>

awww! just wait pura ka pura update dungi

Originally posted by: vrushika_taarey

wow continue soon n pm me ^_^

thnk you. will surely pm you

Originally posted by: Sswachi

From title i m in love with this FF
It's one of my fav song of Arijit

Its sounds really interesting

Continue it really ASAP

we two are arjit ki deewanis😆 i know this song is just magical

Originally posted by: skfirdous

intresting concept
update soon

thnk u

Originally posted by: tharu01

Hmm..gud concept.. Update d C S n d 1st chapter...

thnk u so much

Originally posted by: Sona_loveVD

interesting concept
updt soon

thnk u so much😃

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Interesting concept :)

Continue soon :)

thnk u 😃

Originally posted by: -Glitz-

Sounds nce
Cntnue soon

thnks😊

Originally posted by: nidaTaarey

Ossum concept.plzz update soon

thnk u

Originally posted by: taashareyam

nice

thnks

Rough Beginnings

"Cheers!!!" A group of men were celebrating their success.

"Cheers to my son, Reyaansh. You are indeed my son." Rajveer hugged him while his younger son, Swayam looked a bit depressed in this cheering environment. Rey gave his dad a wide grin.

"I am so proud of you Rey. Humari business rivalry ko tumne jis tarah handle kiya, I feel so proud to be your father. Rishi shekhawat is finished." Rajveer patted on his shoulder.

"Ab uske zinda bachne ka koi chance nahi hai dad. Doctors have lost all hopes."

".Uska saara business destroy ho chuka hai. Shekhawat Empire has burnt to ashes. All thanks to you Reyaansh." Rajveer was feeling extremely proud of his son.

"But dad aisa sunne mein aaya hai ki uski beti vaapas aa gayi hai." Swayam interrupted the duo convo.

"So what?? Vo ab humara kuch nahi bigad sakti." He winked at Rey.

"Since aaj humari aaj itni badi jeet hui hai, Go boys..have fun." And soon both the brothers left to enjoy their success.

~~

" Reyaansh Singhania...24..young but the mastermind and MD of Singhania industries... looks like he had all the degrees we can ask for." Rosie gave the reports while looking at all the old records of Rey.

"Cut the crap Rosie. Mujhe uske upar Biography nahi likhni. I want to know what's profitable for me. Tell me the things which will benefit me. Tell me his weak points." Taani screwed the hell out of Rosie.

"He had a sum total of 25 complaints registered but interestingly never get into jail. May be they sorted matters outside police station."

"What kind of complaints?" Taani asked.

"Mostly Fraud cases and bribing. But there's one case which is different." Taani raised her eyebrows.

"Ek ladki ne sexual molestation ka case file kiya tha. Almost 3 years back. But uss case ke baare mein files tak mein kuch nahi hai. Its like ye case kabhi hua hi nahi."

"Naam kya hai uss ladki ka?"

"Shreya kapoor."

~~

"Finally tu aa gaya." Vicky hugged Rey. "Kya yaar kitna wait karata hai?"

"VIPs ki entry late hi hoti hai." Rey gave his killer smirk to the girls present in the club.

"Aaj to party ka alag hi maza hoga, dekh na rey kya ladkiyan hai yaar." Nil's eyes scanned every part of the club as if saving every girl in his memory.

~~

"Complete Casanova. Girlfriends ki list shayad ek din ke turn over se bhi zyada nikle. Koi bhi ladki 2 din se zyada nahi tikti."

"Interesting." Taani smirked. "Aur kuch."

"Aur bhi thoda bahot info hai mam, but aisa kuch khaas nahi." Rosie said while her eyes conveyed a fear. Taani guessed a difference in her voice but decided to keep quite.

"Ok then, you can go now." Rosie nodded and moved out leaving taani into her pool of thoughts.

~~

"Did you tell her about that thing?" A men asked Rosie on call.

"No, I told her nothing except what you told me."

"Hmm..Good." And he chucked the call not giving her an instant to say anything else.

~~

"Rey sir, this is your 9th drink." The bartender said with a meek voice yet warning him.

"I know, jo keh raha hu bas wahi karo. Give me the drink!!" He ordered him and decided to stay away from this rich spoilt brat to save his life and job.

"Yo! People in the house! The sexy burning desire on the dance floor!!!" The DJ announced and a spotlight captured the back of a girl looking irresistibly hot. The crowd cheered as they saw her curvaceous figure wondering what it would be like to see her face to face. With the sudden applause, Rey's eyes turned to the same spot where he found a girl standing with her back facing him and just by looking at it he could guess that she was not a regular visitor of the club.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sv_kEdNwYtQ

All I Seee...

In Hersszzz Touch

Wats D Fun Ah Ah

Do U Know Wht I Mean It Isz

Mmm

Sup Sup

With DJ's voice, her seducing body started shaking on the beats of the music making every guy drool on her.

Ooo

Can I Get Ya

Ooo

Can I Touch Ya

Ooo

Can I Get Ya

Ooo

Can I Touch Ya

She slowly moved her hips making every guy go weak on his knees. A few boys came close to her and tried touching her bare back. While she grabbed their collars and bring them close to her and then push them away.

Zara Zara Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me

Ah Zara Zara Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me

Ah Zara Zara Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me

Ah Zara Zara .. Ooo Ooo Ooo

She turned around finally letting everyone see her face. The guys turned lusty while the girl turned envious as they saw her. She was no less than Greek Goddess.

Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me

Ah Zara Zara

Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me

Ah Zara Zara

Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me

Ah Zara Zara

Ooo Ooo Ooo

She moved her body seductively on the dance floor while a few guys tried to grab her. A guy came right in front of her blocking her way. She moved her hand on his face and pushed him away.

Bin Tere Sanam Is Jahan Mein

Beqkaar Hum

Dum Da Dum Da Dum

Bin Tere Sanam Is Jahan Mein

Beqkaar Hum

She went up to Vicky and grabbed his shirt to pull him closer. His hands automatically went to her waist while she danced with him making him loose his senses.

Zara Zara Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me

Ah Zara Zara Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me

Ah Zara Zara Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me

Ah Zara Zara .. Ooo Ooo Ooo

Slowly his hands started moving a little lower but before they could reach their destination she pulled out and moved away giving him a wink.

Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me

Ah Zara Zara

Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me

Ah Zara Zara

Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me

Ah Zara Zara

Ooo Ooo Ooo

Rey scanned the girl who was burning the floor with her sensuous moves. With only 1 look he was sure that she is not any of the girls he slept with. Hence he got tonight's plan.

I Love The Way You Touchin Me, Feeling Me

Boy Im Gonna Be Rebelling

Boy My Little Secrets Gonna Let You Know

That Wen You Put Your Arms Around Me

I Love The Way You Surround Me

Oh Boy I M Gonna Loose Control

He smirked while his already blur vision made it hard to capture her nicely. He now blamed the drinks. He stood up and stumbled on his steps but the wish to see her clearly made him go on.

She notice him and her eyes wandered on his well toned body. The guys burnt in envy as she left everyone and started moving towards him. She moved her fingers on his shoulder seductively while he smirked seeing her bold nature. Her lips came close to her earlobe and her lips feebly touched him.

Tere Hi Tera Hi Intezaar Hai

Mujhe To Bas Tujhse Pyaar Hai

Tera Hi Tera Abb Khumaar Hai

Khud Pe Na Mere Ikhtiyaar Hai

She moved away from him still dancing around him. She grabbed a guy and danced with him giving rey a look. While she was getting closer to the guy he touched her thighs feeling them. She let him do what ever he wanted. Rey looked at them with envy. The girl that Reyaansh Singhania puts his eyes on is only his.

Bin Tere Sanam Is Jahan Mein

Beqkaar Hum

Dum Da Dum Da Dum

Bin Tere Sanam Is Jahan Mein

Beqkaar Hum

She left the guy and went to dance floor where everyone was waiting to see her moving waist again. She danced still eyeing Rey while the glass that was lying in his hand broke in pieces as he saw her dancing with guys lusting on her.

Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me

Ah Zara Zara

Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me

Ah Zara Zara

Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me

Ah Zara Zara

Ooo Ooo Ooo

The blood started oozing out of his hand. He started moving towards her with shaking legs. She looked at his bleeding hand and a smirk reach her lips.

Once Time Touch Me Like This

I Like What You Want

What You Give Its A Risk

Two Time Touch Me Like This

Together Wanna Fasa D Style The Way Tat A Lover

Three Time Touch Me By Far

Gets Over Here Comes The Crazy With Me In My Car

Its One Time Touch Me Like This

I Know Wat You Want, Wat You Can, Wat You Say.. My Lover

He grabbed her arm and stopped her from dancing. They looked at each other while trying to find a lot in each other's eyes. He took her away from the floor to a secluded corner while they looked at them in shock.

He trapped her in between his arms while she looked least scared. He was trying hard to find what was attracting him to her so hardly while her hand moved towards his bleeding hand kissing it passionately.

Yeh Dard-E-Dil To Ho Na Agar

Sataye Abb Dooriyon Ka Gum

Behek Jaye Na Yeh Kadam

Hai Tujhe Meri Jaan Ki Kasam

The pain it was causing to him a minute ago now became the uttermost pleasure. She moved her lips close to his and touched them making the blood on her lips to make his lips red.

Bin Tere Sanam Is Jahan Mein

Beqkaar Hum

Dum Da Dum Da Dum

Bin Tere Sanam Is Jahan Mein

Beqkaar Hum

She moved away without kissing him. Rey gets shocked by her behavior while she she moved out of his grip. Rey looked at her retreating back.

Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me

Ah Zara Zara

Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me

Ah Zara Zara

Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me

Ah Zara Zara

Ooo Ooo Ooo

As per her wish she went again to the dance floor rocking it with her moves making every heart skip a beat. While every guy tried to come close to her rey looked at her from far trying to understand this not so normal girl. His legs automatically followed their way to her while his mind stopped working. The alcohol was showing its effect.

Bin Tere Sanam Is Jahan Mein

Beqkaar Hum

Dum Da Dum Da Dum

Bin Tere Sanam Is Jahan Mein

Beqkaar Hum

She looked at him and gave her a smirk. He almost collided with her. She grabbed his collar making him stand straight. She moved close to her face looking at him eye to eye while he tried to keep his eyes open.

"Taani." She whispered and her sweet breath reaches his lips directly. With a smirk on her face she moved away. He saw her going out of the club and soon the drinks made him completely out of senses as his body dropped on the floor.

"Taani.." He whispered before going to his pretty sleep

P.S. Tell me if its complete bakwaas cause I know it is. Even I can't believe I write that bad😕

omg what an update

n it was not at all bakwas

i think taani's pa behaviour was fishy what she was hiding

rey is a casanova he destroyed taani's father
many people case on him

n taani want to destroy him
i think she started her work
by comming in pub n making him go mad over her

update next part soon

Amazing update...

Awesome update!!