SwaRon OS: Mere Mr.Shekhawat [V-Day Special] - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice os :)
I loved SwaRon when they were younger :) aaawww they are so cute
Swayam's anger part was sweet
I loved the confession :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
this is sooo beautifuli had a smile plastered on my face reading this os
loved the confession😳
and their fight for chocolate
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Amazing 😃
After reading I felt like I was doing an ad for a toothpaste
Beautiful choice of words.
Lovely confession👏
Well penned
Ur welcome🤗


Edited by SanskritiS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Awww.. 😳
Such a cute os... 😊
It was amazing... 👏
Wish it could happn in serial too.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
wow tanvish..it was lovely..
a perfect OS for valentine's day..
the compatibility of swaron..the little cute incidents...loved it
the proposal was splendid..i really loved it very much..
thanks for the OS tanvish..
and thanks for the PM too..
and happy valentine's day to you too..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Lovely OS!!
I loved the proposal part///it was really awesome..
Great work..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Hey Tanvish 🤗

It was really a romantic OS...i read it in the afternoon but dnt get time to comment -_-.

The confession was so M-A-S-T. You are an amazing writer and i love reading ur stuffs. Keep writing more.

⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Amazing os
Totallly loved d os
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
res
unres
i m very happy tat i read tis os today
as a writer you hav definitely grown
you know how to pitch ur ideas in a charming way
n romance is a subject where nobody can beat you
balancing it wit emotional n humorous spices
here n thr
coming to ur os
it was sweet n had so many swayamish moments
tat i was in tat aww trance for so long tat i never realised
tat the os was over
the way you show swayam n sharon in a romantic yet unusual
manner is so blissful for me to read
tis is how a realtionship is suppose to b
couples find new quirks about each othr
n still say yes to each othr
the small flash back of swaron's childhood days
was beautifully penned
the best moment wa the epic confession
he made in the club
it was emotional n flawless 😳
do write more 🤗








Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
tanvish another awesome Os by u...loved it totally.. 😃
thank u so much for such beautiful OS.. 😃
it was cute and romantic.. 😳
swaron convo as kid's ws too adorable.. 😳
den swaron convo over ph ws nicely penned down..bechara swayam..sharon did not even allow him to talk.. 😆
and d ending was beautiful.. 😳
just loved every bit of it.. 😳 😳
it was amazing.. ❤️
keep writing 😃
Edited by sweetdivya - 11 years ago

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