Smitar's: Recalling Arnav #3 Parts 11 ~ 20 Link to #4 on Pg 1 - Page 60

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Posted: 11 years ago
Haye Re NandKishore!!
Good Morning to everyone here.. :)
Oh! No! Buaji caught them again...
Poor Buaji... 1st she found Arnav sleeping in Khushi's room and Now Khushi in Arnav.
Arnav had some deceny then but Khushi...
Horrible!
Before saying her signature line, Buaji should have closed her eyes.
Its Gandi Baat to see any couple like that...
Last time Khushi had dwelled too much but this time, When everything repeated again... She tried to look at the reason behind Arnav's actions..
Impressive... Well may be she would have in any other circumstances.
Whats gonna be Arshi's reaction to this?
Will Arnav get to Know that Khushi slept with whole night?
I think he will guess it with the fragrance of Khushi all over him.
At last Anjali replied but didn't shed her usual tears. Thank You Anjaliji. :p
Take Care :)
Thank You for this Mast update Smita Di and Rashmi Ji. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was awesome <3
Kushi again sleeping in taekondo pose..
looking forward to the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
a very nice update. khushi can feel the bond between arnav and herself. she is remembering things fast. waiting to read further
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hahahaha I loved this update.

You have a very deep understanding or how do I put it, you seem to have read and analysed a lot into the updates of the show and you sem to know a lot more than what appears to eyes.


I liked how you explained Kushi examining the scene at Sheesh Mahal. It was a new perception of that day.

Last scene was cute. Loved it to hear their sleeping arrangement.

That what the and karela thing was so touching. She has him engrained in his mind so much. She loved him so much. I feel Arnav never deserved this love. He had broken her trust too many times - on Diwali night, on contract marriage day, at the airport, on reminding her contract again to make her stay, the cheap deeds he did to bring her back home, and finally when he ditched her at the altar. Does he deserve her trust and love? Why should he get it back?????

He always punished her, pushed her away - first for his sanity, then because of Shyam and then because of Garima. Now for who else in future????
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Posted: 11 years ago
i read it yesterday... got soo emotional at the entire situation... didnt knw who to sympathize with more.. arnav or khushi.. or mayb them together...
i thot i wud clear up my mind a little in a day, n then comment...

n even now... i m still at the same place...

i just wish she decides to see tht he deserves a 3rd chance ... yes third... second pe to wo aaya hi ni naa.. :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh goodness! Khushi's memory is coming back, and so is Arnav's trouble! Great update Smita!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I loved it.
Khushi is a single piece in the whole world or should I say you are a single piece in the world Smita.🤗
Love you Smita. No matter how bad things are going you always bring a smile on my face.❤️🤗
I will be ever so grateful to you for that my friend.🤗
I just loved this line; "Why had akhdoo Arnavji become such a dukhi atma?"😆😆😆
Even in this memory loss Khushi can still see Arnav's true self with what little she remembers of him.
Ahh, What magic love has on us humans.
I just adored the last scene where Khushi is sleeping with Arnav in her taekwondo position.
I am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
how do you do that smita...your writing is totaly different then all, your story telling or i would say vision is amazing, i had read all ur previous and present Arhi's ff and they all are very enjoyable...outstanding..loved it..😊
and I'm so agree with Zafi...😆

KHUSHI IS AKELI ORIGINAL PIECE HAI, OR ARNAV NE USKA COPY RIGHT KARWAYA HAI...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am surprised he did not jump in and answer the question about him being married. I guess Anjali did tell the truth since they did not get married officially. Then there is our Kushi remembering things about him all by herself. I love the description you gave of her sides on how she felt the changes in him during that famous night at Sheesh Mahal. Then we get the karate pose sleep. Well at least she is sensing they are more connected than what everyone is letting on . . .
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a great chapter. If I haven't said it before I have to say your pacing is great! I like that Khushi isn't remembering everything at once. It's a great reveal and the uncertainty that you have created amongst the family members and Arnav is so sad but So right. Beautiful.

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