FF,TAKE ME TO HELL ,DARK FF CHAPTER 7 UPD PG 99

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Anysia

@Anysia

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Nice update

can't wait to know more

Update soon

Thanks for the pm 😊

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Dhanya C Babu

@dhanyac

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

awesome update...

continue soon...

thanx 4 d pm...😊

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sindhu

@misscrazyfan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

god i felt like i am in the mansion...

u made me completely involved,,,,,,

my heart was thudding every sc,,,,

it was like a big don family wiht the utmost worst back ground,,,,,

but i am so worrried fo rmy angel khushi...

how is she gonna survive with hell of monsters,,,,,

cant wait dear

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Ashakalyani

@Ashakalyani

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Feels realy sorry for khushi

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

That's a dhamakedar update...I felt like I am in the mansion...beautiful mansion...it was just I am watching a movie...I am happy that Sameer and Akash are different than their other brother...huge age different between Arnav and Zaifer...it is just like a big don family...I am just worried about Khushi...poor soul...how she is going to survive with the bunch of monsters...is he aware of that he bought Khushi as a sex slave...but I hope she will agree to marry Arnav...he wants to protect her from Zaifer...waiting for the next update...

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

awesome and mind blowing update.
mansion was soo beautiful and story is going amazing.
poor khushi what will she do now?
precap is fab
waiting for next oart
update sooon

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coolpd93

@coolpd93

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

woah! Siera...what can I say abt this update 😉Awesome yaar!..all f ur stories are freaking awesome...
this update..i don't have any wrds..

Poor khushi..i really don't have any words. .
Precap.
OMG she gotta knw abt ..
Woah these two are equally mad...
Superb..
Eagerly waiting fr nxt part😉
Thanx much fr d pm.
Sorry fr being late

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sudhareddy

@sudhareddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Loved the concept of the story and it is very different.

Prologue - Khushi is a doctor(interin) in profession. She is living with her step mom Kimu after her father's death but Khushi's step mom whom she trusted cunningly sold her as sex slave to her boyfriend Arnav Singh Raizada's brother to clear her debts at casino and her alcohol bills. She was made unconscious and she was taken to a place where she don't know and after she was conscious the maid made her wear revealing dress she hit her with vase and escaped from there and promised herself to fight with circumstances till her last breath. Arnav Singh Raizada' servant told that the girl was in Zeifer's room at first but now she escaped and she is in his portion. Servant remembered innocent girl and felt pity on that girl whom Zeifer's maid forcefully changed clothes for that night to spend with Zeifer who is terribly fond of sex malicious, lunatic games. Arnav didn't like the girl whom he bought to be in his own portion and he dismissed the servant and giving orders he went to lift and pressed button 5 for his portion.

Part 1 - Loved the way you described ZAAS Mansion floors and Individual portions of 4 brothers and Characters of Sameer, Aakash & Payal, Zeifer and Arnav.

Zeifer is elder of all brothers and he is only interested in sex and he had 4 sex slaves who lives in his portion and he is dependent on Arnav and he don't work and he was betrayed by his wife and because of that he wanted to make every one life hell. He wanted Khushi as his sex slave because she the daughter of the man for whom his wife left him and he wanted to take revenge and Arnav gifted him Khushi as his sex slave on his birthday.

Loved how Arnav remembered Khushi who saved him when he don't want to live anymore and how he dreams her voice in his sleep and how he enquired about her from his man and asked to get all details of her and he felt restless for her safety because she is the one who made him realise still he had a heart. Arnav saw all his clothes on floor out of wardrobe and wash room area and he searched for the girl whom escaped from Zeifer's portion and when he went into washroom and Khushi throw water on his face.

Arnav saw her in his shirt and lost senses because about whom he was thinking she was infront of him and thought he buy her as his brother's sex slave and felt ashamed of himself for the first time in his life. Khushi too recognised him and hugged him and said as she helped him in past he had to help her to go out of this place. Arnav asked Khushi to Marry Him in front of the maids who came to take her.

Pre cape - Khushi got to know Arnav buyed her and she spit on his face and what will he do now

Waiting to know will Arnav marry her forcefully

Waiting what will Zeifer's reaction

Waiting for next update

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shivanie

@sweetvanie

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Wowww , what a update Yaar ... i can't believe arnav ask her to marry him ... and his elder bro is that creepo ... actually arnav is dark here ... he is trading slaves ... and his elder bro have sex slaves for himself ... i was speechless ...
and the pre-cap , khushi is fighting back ... if i was her, i would've done worst lolz ...

But its a good start ... and would like you to continue ... so i can read more ...

Now go update ... lolz... kidding ... do update when you can ...

Thx 4 PM ...