Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 2 - COMPLETED

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#301

Aww what ever happens they still are together and destined to be, just love the way you are making them go through the ceremonies albiet unknown to them, so whats next? is it suhaag raat😳

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penrith

@penrith

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#302

that was sooo goood.. looking forward to more delicious updates

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raws

@raws

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#303

Again blood filled maang...good one...i am so waiting for the maha update

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samsung04

@samsung04

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#304

Hey it was mindblowing update... Now waiting for maha update.. When is tht gng to be""""""

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kinjalcp87

@kinjalcp87

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#305

Hope arnav understand why khusi is doing this with him.

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#306

Both give pain to each other then cure also

Bth are ajeeb😆😆😆

Loved it

Plz try n update soon

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#307

That was one hell of an update... Loved it...

Adarsh trapped Arnav in all this... Arnav is fighting from the whole world when the main traitor is in his own family...

Loved the scene in hotel suit... Arnav turn the whole situation... As much as I was astounded with Arnav shrewd mind , I felt really sad for khushi... All twisting and turning hurt her... Both emotionally and physically... If only Aman could tell them the truth...😭

The penthouse scene was awesome... He again marked her as his wife... They can refuse all they want but they can't escape from their destiny...Another ritual completed... He carried her to his room...... Loved it...

Waiting for the next update...

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#308

hey Deepthi,

when u first started writing, i read ur first note, bt this being a story for separation, so i thought let me skip it, not for my faint heart...but now when i read it, i am so hooked...and really looking forward to see whats in-store for us in future

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navjot7

@navjot7

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#309

awesome updt
sorry for late comment
i am commenting after reading last 3chapter together
i am recovering from my surgery
i am much better now i hope i will be regular from next updt
about updates i love all of them
arnav brother is playing dirty games
both arnav khushi misunderstand each other
i like this aman
arnav again fill khushi maang
now i cannot wait to know what will happen next
thnx for pm

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#310

Iss Adarsh Singh Raizada mein toh adarsh naam ka koi cheej hi nahi hain...phir se kehna padegi Di, name selection is so apt...and knowing his side of story, now the whole picture got a lot clearer...
uss ne kya socha, he will trap Arnav Singh Raizada...not so easy man...

whats with Anjali...itni karwa kyun bolti hain yeh...but I feel there's something more in the story...waiting to know it all before declaring that I hate her, though I am a bit as for now...

loved how Arnav handled the whole situation...WOW...and I have to say, however it looked on camera, but he had a hard time, coz our Khushi too is no less...such a dramatic moment...I love this Di...

and the verbal fight between Arnav-Khushi...inn dono...koi kisiko chota nahi, hain naa...ek competition hona chahiye...who is more hot-headed...

and then Khushi's attacking him, throwing things to him...I know its not funny, lekin main kya karoon, just imagining it making me laughing out loud...

when she leaned on him for support, unwillingly though, and he supporting her frame...uff Di, u've written it beautifully...

and then once again his blood filled her maang...her looking like a bride...his carrying her to bed...WOW...such a lovely scene u've created Di...AWESOME...

loved what u said in the end,"if only he could look at her innocence masked behind her all time dont-you-dare attitude, if only she could feel his tender touch hidden underneath his every brutal hold."-One day they will...we are just waiting for that day to come...

PS: I really really want the misunderstanding to get clear sooner...it hurts to see her thinking so low of him...jaldi yeh MU clear kardo naa Di...