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Posted: 11 years ago
chapter 36..
finally two souls meet..
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Posted: 11 years ago
You'Re The BestYou'Re The BestYou'Re The BestYou'Re The BestYou'Re The BestYou'Re The BestYou'Re The BestYou'Re The BestYou'Re The BestYou'Re The Best Chaverah Its Always Been For Us is always d best and expecially U who never goes out of d story line and more dan dat d way u brings out d exact emotions, pain, angony and everything related to human emotions very well according to d situations is out of words Chaverah Kisses .
Now to d chapter, Chaverah dat was one hell heartbeating chapter Beating Heart . Was really waiting wen Arnav will reach Naintal and take Khushi in his arms and both engulf into blissfull moment were dey forgets der every misery, pain and everything dat dey went through these 7months seperation .
Update soon, now waiting to know wat actually happened during der trip and was Shyam really behind it. Thanks 4d pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago



Hiii...
First of all sorry...that m cmnting here at last aftr reading chaptrs till date...

Coz... I gt so engrossd in stoey that i just was eager to read nxt to nxt to nxt... So sorry for this...

Nw second thing thanku for acquainted me with this superb ff...
I really likd this story so far..

First of all i will say that u did a superb work with words and did a vry fair job with arshi.
As it very well potrayd deir characters..

Second u askd if i want to suggest smething... O my lord... M a keen reader ... Nt a critic to fyd faults... I enjy my writes.work as a reader... So i will say no suggesstions..just classic...

Nw coming to the story i was in begining thinking hw the story is going to be... Bt nw i can i did a grt thing that i read this ... And came across a superb writer..

I dnt hav any buddies bt at sme post i ll doo suggest sme ppl .. To read dis .. As i fy its a suprb fantastic story..

Nw about story..
I really likd the bond all dey share evn its arshi arnjai or eithr payal akash aur aman... All dey seem to be entangled deep with deir bibd... Which is more stronger dan blood related relations...

I appreciate hw u pick a single emotion and paintd it so well on characters.

This ff made me feel sme emotions all togthr ... Pain,joy,love,agony,helplessness,eagerness.. And much more..

Starting i appreciate hw u potrayd arnav and te changing man in him... With flowing tym..
The love he has in him is like i cant put in words... All thanks to you.. That u gt the courage to write such all feelings.. And u really did justice to his character... I guess his love cant be explaind rathr just be feeld till eternity..
All thanks to u .. For penning dwn such deep feelings in his character...
I lovd his character the most... Ofcourse he is my love .. So obviously i ll like him...
Bt den also u did a fantastic wrk..

Secondly.. Khushi... M amused with the way u pennd her charactr ... Marvellous... Excellent... I am stunnd hw u well established her character in this... She is pillar to evry relation... I really appreciate .. Hw well her character is flowing in ff... The way dey all repect and love her is genuine... And come frm heart coz... Her character is smething like exceptionist... Superb...

Nw about anjali... Wow i always say my frd dat i like ipkknd othr than arshi is the reason the bond anjali and arnav share... Is watchable... Same is here.. I hav flln for her innocence... Hw naive she is... I must say u did an extremely tremendous tsk by enlighting anjali's shade... So well... Hats off... Here her bond with akash and aman is also smething making me go out of words... Superb ...

Akash- i wish if eithr 10% of her shade was shown in ipkknd hw u hav pennd it den i guess... Ipkknd would also add a more powerful memory of akash.. As in ipkknd this was missng... Bt still i love akshay dogra... Coz in his simple character also he dis a fab. Job...
So i appreciate hw well ur efforts are countd... In terms of bonus as akash... Excellent...

Nxt ole ole ole aman the youger of all bros... Hehehe ...just outstanding...and vitrious... Reflective ...

Payal evn her character is introduced very later .. Bt still she grippd her place quite soon like othr characters... She also equally stand by dem... I must say all characters are like that they are destined to be altogthr... All thanks to u...
Hw well u have.writtn about evry character and all emotions... I am looking forward to read ur work...

Evry character is so well well well well potrayd..
I am overwhelmed to read their bond... I wish to read more and more of all ...

I guess nw m in this ff... And will cntinue regularly with this..

As i hav cmpltd 41 parts so will be love to join the ride of this ff... As a pagal sanki reader.. Who love arshi ... Till eternity..and nw startd loving ur ffs .


Hai saath hum us saath ke jaise
Jaise suraj aasman ke jaise

Hai jude hum ek dusre se
Jaise jud jaye dil apne dhadkan se

Hua apna milna aise
Jaise mil jae nadiyaa saagar se

Hai hairaan hum hua ye jaise
Bandhe ab hum in risto ki dor se..


And last bt nt the least bst of luck for ur furthr writings...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved d update
Finally arnav found his khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago
ch 35

awesome update
loved it
finally found kushi
loved aakash emotions on seeing her
Payal and aakash part is nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update...loved it to the core.
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally they found each other ...
happy happy
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for not commenting earlier..
First of all, hearty congratulations for the new thread.. I hope you get many threads like this..
I just read the four updates i missed n like always they are amazing, lovely, fabulous n what not.. I don't think i can say anything to writer like you.. You are more than perfect in portraying emotions in your stories.. I think i already said this but i fall in love with your FFs again and again after reading each update..
And about the updates, arnav and khushi's pain was beautifully portrayed.. I loved akash the most in this updates.. Finally when arshi met, i could visualize those scenes..
Continue soon..
Thanks for the effort of sending me pm even when i couldn't even read and like the update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
finally he met her
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago


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