PyaaR to Wadh KR OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Ajj sey app pati patni ho" Pandit ji anounced them as husband and wife as rey filled Kriya's mang . Village people gives them blessings , where few peoples were standing with their head down .
worry lines formed , "he is not going to accept this marriage at any cost " He thought . After this whole drama they all left for Mumbai . Everyone losted in their own thoughts . It's relly very tough
to digest that Rey and Kriya now husband and wife now .
Kriya's PVO
"Mujy nahi pta tha ki hum is trha sey 'hum' bney gey . Universe g thanks , Rey ko meri life mey wapis laney k liye . Finally main or Rey ek saath rhy gey hamesha k liye , m so happy ." She blushed
on her own thoughts .
But things never happens according to your wish .

Rey's PVO :
Hamesha merey saath he esa kyu hota hey . Muj sey kya dushmani hey apki bhagwan . Main is marriage ko kabhi accept nahi krooga that's my final decission .
Main papa ko kya boluga . Or main Kriya sey pyaar nahi karta or nahi nafrat . she is my friend, good friend or kuj nahi . Main mumbai jaty he Kriya ko bol dooga .

Is this end of a relationship .

No one spoked through out the journey . When they reached Mumbai everyone headed toward their houses . Rey walked toward his car indicatiing Kriya to follow him , Kriya silently followd him .
"Rey.." she tried to talk but Rey simply ignored her calling .
He opened the car door and waited for Kriya to sit . she silently took her place . Dark night and pin drop silence a deadly combo to horrify someone .
Kriya she horrified not because of these two things , but because of Rey's silence . she tried alot to talk but nothing worked . Rey ingnored her like she did not exist .
"Rey app kuj bol kyu nahi rhy ho .." she held Rey's left hand to seek his attention , Rey simply freed his hand .
"Rey app asy kyu kar rhy hoo ... " she almost begged infront of him .
All of sudden he become angry "shut up Kriya . You want me to be happy with this marriage .He shouted at her pouring his anger on Kriya . She almost hit the window of car because of
sudden out bust of Rey . "Rey main to bus.." He cut him in between "What Kriya , i don't love u and for me this marriage is a crape ..merey liye iska koi matlab nahi hey "
she shattered , her heart once again shattered in thousand of pieces . all of sudden her view become blur .
She slowly stepped out from car . "Kriya sit in the car ... "Her ordered her with his harsh tone . But she was blank now , she started walking don't know where .
Rey called her from behind but it's like she become deaf . She didn't reponded to his calling s .


Her newly born heart once again crushed badly and shattered into thousand of pieces . Why always she . What she asked ,True Love that it . She never experienced what is
love exactly . It was her bad luck or what , she only knows that her world shattered once again .


Rey called her but she kept walking like she became deaf . She was walking in the center of road , when he saw a truck coming from opposite side of the road . He pulled her
"Kriya..." he pulled her as a truck passed in fast speed . He engulfed her in tight hug , protecting her from that truck which almost hit her .
"
Kriya tum pagal ho gyi ho kya . agar tumhy kuj ho jata to ... kya kar rhi hoo tum . Main kab sey tum awaz lga rha hoo . " He hugged her tight . But she was still like a stone .
Which have no feelings , emotions just a piece of stone nothing more . Rey shaked her but no use . i Guess it is to late .

"Kriya are you listening me ..." he slapped her but again no repsponce . He held her wrist and walked toward car .
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Both simply walked toward their rooms . Next morning Rey decided that he will talk to Kriya about this . With this hope he walked into her room . "Kriya .." he knocked at her door .
when he didn't got any responce her again knocked . Rey entered in the room and looked around but Kriya is no where .
"I guess college chali gyi hogi .." he thought "college mey baat kar looga .."

"Rey Kriya kha hey ..." Swayam question as soon as Rey entered in the canteen . Rey gave him puzzled look "Kriya ghar pey nahi thi , i thought college a gyi thi "
"Kya bol rha hey Rey ...kya matlab vo ghar pey nahi thi ."
"Arey kasam sey vo ghar pey nahi thi .."
"tuny usey kuj bola kya ... "
"umm main kya boluga usey yaar ..'""
"Rey sahi mey bta kya bola tuney usey " Swayam become hyper
"Okay fine btata hoo ...'Rey narrated Swayam whole story .
Swayam become restless "Rey do you know tuny kya kiya hey ... tuny uska dil again todh (Break) diya . main janta hoo ki vo tum sey kitna pyaar karti hey ..
or tumny usey j bola ki tumharey liye j marriage ek crape hey ... j marriage kisi b halat mey huyi hoo but uskey liye yeh shaadi he sab kuj thi .. aqgar usey kuj ho gya na Rey to .."
"Per mera matlab vo nahi tha ... '
"hum is pey baad mey discuss krygey pehley Kriya ko find krey ..."
It's almost evening but there is no sign of kriya anywhere . They checked bus stand , railway station , hospital ,airport .
time its slipped like sand .
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"Kha ho tum Kriya..." Rey fell on his knees . "mujey ek baar explain karney ka chance to deti . I know i was rude . " fresh tears build up in his eyes .

"Rey baba main abhi Kriya baby k room mey gya tha unkey bathroom ka darwaza ander sey band hey . Many bohat awaz lgayi but Kriya baby ney koi awaz nyi di . " Rey tripped on table while running toward her room
Finally she is here . He knocked at bathroom door . he decided to break the lock . After struggling with the door he opened it . the next thing he saw
shattered him .


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"Doctor hws she ... vo theek to ho jayegi na " its fifth time whe nRey asked same question .
"Rey hum log try kar rhy hey na ... pta nhi vo kitny hour tak shower k neecht thi sayad poori raat or din ... and wrist b cut ki huyi hey ... bohat blood lose huya hey ... but we are trying na ...ab to bhagwan he kuj kar sakta hey hum to sirf try kr skty hey " doctor helplessly said ...
Gang found Rey setting on floor hugging her knees hiding his face in between his knees . Swayam hugged him "she will be fine Rey ..." Swayam consoled her . He knows Rey still love her , but he was affried that she will leave him again one day with broken heart . But he never thought that this story will take this 360 turn . Kriya is a strong girl everyone knows , but only he know how much she suffered ... and same thing for Rey . They both suffered alot .
Rey hugged him " main isis baat sey darta tha ki vo ek din chali jayegi tabhi maney apni feeling ko kabhi samny nahi any diya . Kyu ki pyaar merey liye hey he nahi Swayam . See na Kriya phir sey ja rhi hey "
this line of Rey made everyone cry .
"Rey kahi nahi jayegi vo ... Kriya jahi rhygi dehna vo theek ho jayegi .." Sharon said in betwwen her sobs ...

it's almost 1 week but Kriya she still sleeping ... lost somewhere in the deep down of black water far from them . With each passing min they were loosing the hopes . Doctor also said that they don't understand why she is not responding .

Rey feels like with each passing second she going far from him ...some where in darkness . He blocked him self in his own shell .
He almost stopped eating . He litterlly begged in front of God for her life . He prayed , cried , begged . He tried everything . sitting infront of Kriya holding her hand .. he shared his pain with her ..in this hope that she will open her eyes and will hug him tight .
He Remembered when he found her in shower and her blood all around her . That time something died inside him .
Swayam knows that slowly slowly he is losing both of them . He tried his best to cheer him up .. along with gang . But it's like for Rey only Kriya exist no other one .

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One year passed everything changed . But only two peoples are still same . Rey and Kriya .
they both still standing on same place where they one year ago . Kriya never open her eyes in this year ... and Rey he hardly closed his eyes in this one year .

"Rey kya haal bna rkha hey tuny ...ek saal ho gya hey is baat ko " Swayam completely fed up
"Swayam chup kar Kriya disturbe hogi teri awaz sey ..." Rey said still looking at Kriya ..
"Shut up Rey ... u know vo nahi uthny wali ..." he saked him "Sun rha hey na tu .. or j sab teri wjha sey huya agar tu us waqt apney dar ki wjha sey Kriya ko vo kuj na bolta to ajj vo hum logo ksaath baty kar rhi hoti ...na ki asy jha hospital mey hoti ..."

Rey did't said any thing as if he did't heard any thing .
"Swayam dheerey bola bola na Kriya disturb hogi ..." he again repeated same line .
"Wake up Rey please ,... " this time Rey pushed Swayam hard "Kitni baar bola chup kar Kriya uth jayegi sone dey usey ... vo mujpy chilayegi ..Rey apko pta nahi hey main so rhi hoo " Rey again held Kriya's hand and sat next to her indicating Swayam to leave the room .

"Sorry Kriya pagal ho gya hey Swayam bolta hey tum kabhi nahi utho gi ... i know tum tired ho is liye rest kar rhi hoo right .." and break into silent cries ... Everyone lost hopes , but Rey was the only person who said that she is sleeping she will wake up soon .
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After almost 4 years and finally God opened Rey's file . and his request accepted .
Kriya opened her eyes . for everyone it's more then a megic . For Rey their was no bound of happiness . He hugged her kissed her , like a kid who got his fav toy after lots of begging .
"M sorry Kriya ..please mujey maaf kar do i know i was a fool ... i know main mafi k kabil nahi ...but mujey ek chance dey do ...sirf ek chance ... main kabhi asi galti nahi krooga ... " he held his ears ..."ek baar maaf kardo please ...'tum apny is stupid hubby ko maaf nahi krogi " Kriya hugged him ...
"I Love u Kriya "
"ye Kriya kon hey " Kriya said in her childish tone , this shocked everyone .
"Kriya tum asey behave kyu kar rhi hoo " Rey cupped her face .
"Kon Kriya " she pouted .
"Tum ho Kriya " Rey almost shouted . She freed herself and cuddled herself in the corner of room and looked at Rey with feared eyes .
"Doctor Kriya esa kyu kar rhi hey " Rey looked at Kriya with sad eyes ...
"I guess Rey she lost her memory becasue of Shock .. now she is just a Kid '"

His world one again shattered ...
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Okay guys done
next part baad mey
Real story ab start hogi
or Kr romance b mil jayega
chalo by
m waiting for ur like and reviews
luv u all
Aroma
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -kitty-

Age ka post kar jaldi


doing rey 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kamini tune kaha tha ek mai hi karelia...Ab mujhe aaj hi islan. Update chaiye...poora read karne k.baad hi unres karungi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lunch kar a fir ise poora kariyo
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kutti kamini i hate u :@ age post kar jaldi muje abhi chahiye warna u dead 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha

kutti kamini i hate u :@ age post kar jaldi muje abhi chahiye warna u dead 😳

😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeah bekar emo band kar n age update kar tu -___-
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kar to rhi hoo dyaan sey dekh na -_-
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
will unres after reading 2nd part..
Now plz post d 2nd part A.S.A.P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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abet abhi ist post mey posting vo read kro na wha pey many or read kiya guys tum log second post pey kyu atak gye ho 😭

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