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annys

@annys

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#471

awesome update ... Ill wait for next update

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#472

Amazing update loved it thank you for pm.

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#473

Really Loved the update... feeling bad for Arnav... I am damn sure Sheetal and Shanaya did the drama of the suicide threat and then druged him... poor boy had to suffer so much and now m sure Khushi isn't engagged but its an act but why I wonder that...Really want to kill the two S bitches... Poor Arnav feeling sooo sad for him... Every time he had the courage to confess his feelings something or the other happens to stop him... I am glad u r giving time to his POV coz till its not clear we can't have a proper picture again lakhooonnn sorry for being late in editing thanx for PM

Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 11 years ago

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#474

First of all I'm so sorry for my late comment, forgive me!

Secondly thank you so much for the very long update and one of they most awaited update,

Both updates were amazing yet very emotional and heart breaking,

I have been so excited and eager to read Arnav's flashback and honestly I never knew it would be so hard to read and it was just so heart breaking,

I can't believe Shanaya the cow and I can imagine Sheetal to also be in on the stupid suicide idea,

It's disgusting the fact that Shanaya probably drugged him and made him sleep next to her but obviously not doing anything,

However I'm happy for the fact that Arnav was still a Virgin and I had guessed that and he most probably is still one as he is saving himself for the special lady, lol.

I felt so sorry for Arnav as he is so sweet as he supported Shanaya as he is not heartless and was feeling so guilty after he thought he had slept with her.

So all the ignoring Arnav has done was because he was helping Shanaya, I think he personally should have told Khushi the truth because when it did finally come out it was more painful for both of them to deal with.

I'm looking forward to read the continuation on the flashback, especially when Arnav found out the truth from Shanaya not being pregnant.

The present part in the update where Arnav was in Delhi was so sad as the anger and frustration he is going through is expected as he knows he has lost his chance with Khushi but I still have a feeling Khushi is not engaged because why would she mention her engagement talk in a "bored" tone, I think this is her plan to make Arnav finally confess (I hope I am right).

The updates were a brilliant read, outstanding writing.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

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arshiska

@arshiska

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#475

wow very long update but sad one arnav hurt so much ..hw will he will accept the bitter truth i hate that y she s doing this to arnav ..pls dnt seperate arshi..thanks for pm update soon ya ..pm me always k pls ..i comment u whenever i can k pls..update soon ya😊

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classyandsassy

@classyandsassy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#476

Ok ... after this chapter I want to say ... can we keep KAS on hold & finish this one ???😕 as well as BB too ???😉 This was an incredible chapter Katie 👏... & painful too ... rula diya mujhe 😭...

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Sim96

@Sim96

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#477

Simply amazing! :D
I just read the whole of this story today and trust me its beyond amazing!
Keep going like this! :D
And do send me PM's! Please! Warna i'll have to stalk you all the time! :p

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manuthi mathi

@manuthi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#478

i read ur story in one go... really nice story.. but i felt so sorry for arnav... khushi engaged to NK... no it cant be possible... please dont separate arshi... waiting for next... pls pm me

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Katie

@love_iqbal_khan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: Arnav1Khushi
It was a very sad update.😭 I felt really sorry for Arnav. The opening scene itself was really heart wrenching. I liked the fact that as soon as he found out of the engagement, he bolted away and it has been the fourth day. How much can a person bottle up their emotions. One day it is likely to burst and that moment is nearing. It was very intriguing how Khushi got engaged only three weeks earlier. One would think it is a long standing relationship but I guess this engagement is her way of telling herself that she has moved on. Although they initially seemed to be bracing a solace in the early days everything has been super downhill from then. At this moment I m so happy NK never had a single line to say in this update. If he did or made some gestures, I would have been ticked off along with Arnav.
The past was really painful. Shanaya played him big time and he fell into the game eyes closed. I understand from his point of view that he wanted to prevent her from harming herself. But realizing that u are naked beside an equally naked girl which u never wanted to happen when sober is nothing but self doom for him. At that situation, Arnav would have been so tormented and felt hatred among himself for his act and devious ways. It makes sense that even after the incident, he wasn't able to look Khushi in the eye as he felt like he betrayed her. There can be no worse feeling than one when u feel that u r not worth enough to face a person. It kills u from inside. He went through so much anxiety. Everyone was initially blaming Arnav for his ways but this update shuns everything and makes u realize that tough times change anyone... In a way his sorry he said to Khushi was really nice. I remember reading from Khushi's pov when she felt that sorry was for more bigger purposes than the one mentioned. The flow of the storyline was very nice and subtle. Everytime I picture Shanaya, I can't help but think of Alia Bhatt from soty. And now I just hate the poor actress. Lol.

When Shanaya revealed that she maybe pregnant, that was like the last straw. His whole life was turning against him. I felt so sorry when he said the one jealousy which he wanted to see, he was finally able to see it but it was too late. In a way, he should have realized itself that Khushi has some stronger feeling than friendship for him. Which mere acquaintance or best friend reacts that way if they don't feel love for that person. But I guess it was too late to pursue his feelings. And when he finds out how Shanaya played him, stupid Anjali and Payal had to give in their two cents. Argh. If swearing was aloud in this forum, I wanna use all the cuss words for these two along with Shanaya and NK(just for the sake of it).

Overall it was a very upsetting update. I had various emotions after reading this. One being Arnav please keep distance from Khushi and in a way I felt y really talk about the past and clear the air if she claims to have moved on. If she moved on then so be it. Well I know it sounds big headed and I am talking along because this was Arnav. If it was someone else, I could have given a more sane and logical answer. Lol. But when it is Arnav it feels like his heartbreak is our heartbreak or something. Now I am seriously blabbering. I gotta stop...

2 more weeks. Sometimes each update adds so much pressure. Now I wanna seriously persuade u to put KAS on hold and finish BB and AY. This wait is jus ...nahi horaha

ASR's typical trait has been to lock himself away from the world when emotionally upset...he has already transformed to a fun loving and outspoken Arnav to a conserved and silently raging ASR after Khushi left and now when he finds out that she's engaged, he locked himself away from the world to brood and deal with this news on his own where he can lash out at objects rather than people, where he can break things without alarming others.

One of the reasons why Khushi got engaged to NK was that it was her way trying to convince herself that she really has moved on from Arnav. I've already told you that, although unnecessary, I understand your hatred towards NK...but...All I'll say is, he knows nothing about Khushi's feelings for Arnav...

As far as the past goes, Many would argue that Arnav should have confided about his problems to his best friend...and he may have if he hadn't woken up next to Shanaya and found out that they'd slept together. At that point, his friendship with Khushi took a back seat and his guilt for having betrayed the woman he loved was at the forefront. Guilt, self blame, and self loathing is a deadly combination and it tears you apart on the inside. Besides that, there's also the fact that he knew that all this mess had taken place because of his devious ways and dating all those women in the past. he realized that if he had never been a Casanova, Shanaya wouldn't be in the picture, thereby eliminating all this chaos...so he felt it his responsibility to deal with it alone witohut stressing and upsetting his friends...especially Khushi.

Arnav may have been a player in the past, may have been an idiot, but he was never irresponsible. It was that sense of responsibility that led him to go to Shanaya when he found out that she'd attempted suicide. it was the same sense of responsibility that kept him from pursing his feelings and discussing what he saw on Khushi's face when Shanaya announced her pregnancy. At that moment, since he didn't know the reality of Shanaya's lie, he had a responsibility towards the child that Shanaya was supposedly carrying.

In the present, Arnav will definitely need some push to go and fight for Khushi...he will, despite his wishes, will need to get to know NK better...its always good to know your opponent well. except this time, Khushi is an opponent too...in a way. Lets see what becomes of them and where they're headed.

Edited by love_iqbal_khan - 11 years ago

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Katie

@love_iqbal_khan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: --MISHTEE--
Awesome updates
looking forward to read more 😊

Thank you!

Originally posted by: anu1017
Awesome update K!! Loved it 😊

Whole update from Arnav's POV was good, felt bad for him now that we know the back story behind his disappearing act!!!

Hopefully he will have the talk with Khushi and will be able get her away from the clutches of big bad NK lol!!! 😆

I am ready for the wooing to start, where Mr.Raizada will have his full on charming self and bring his Khush back to Raizada land 😃 Bring on the Arshi romance and RabbaVes I am ready 😉

Cannot wait for the next update!!!!!

Thanks A! Yeap, now we know why he wasn't around...he was being an a**h**e on purpose...he was stuck on some deep mess...and aw, come on...NK isn't big bad...he's been a sweet guy till now, hasn't he? Mr. Raizada may come in later, but for now, the shrewd and ruthless ASR will need to take over because Khushi isn't going to make this easy.😉

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri
simply amazing
loved it

Thank you!

Originally posted by: littlemissstar
Amazing..
Loved it..
Bt feeling really bad fr both of them..
Pls let them talk n sort their issues..
N knw its not going to b easy..bt pls.. No more heartbreaks..
😊
Bt the emotions came out really well in this update

Thank you! They'll sort out their issues eventually but you can bet that Khushi won't make this any easier for him...no more heartbreaks?? I can't say that now can I? if Khushi and Arnav manage to get together, NK's heart will break, yeah?

Originally posted by: sanjeewi15
ok i ddnt read the whole part, i read it from here n ther... cant read this Shanaya crap... i knw it is an important part in the story.. bt couldnt help...
omg im so into this story can feel what Arnav n Khushi going through... uff m such a drama queen... :D

waiting for the next... i knw dat Khushi is nt engaged to NK.. she is lying to stay away from Arnav, bcz she still thinks that Arnav wont accept her love and it will be threat to their friendship... :)

lol...that's okay...I appreciate the honesty. I tried my best to minimize Shanaya in the scenes for that reason...I know that people probably dont want to read about her...majority of the part was mainly Arnav's experience during that time...I would love to tell you that you're right and that Khushi's not engaged, but unfortunately, she is engaged to him and there is nothing amiss about that. its one of the very few things in this FF that's straight forward. Khushi and NK are engaged.

Originally posted by: addictedx53
What a mess! The past came back to Arnav to wreak revenge. How much ever Arnav needed to atone for his past indiscretions, knowing his pov somehow makes me sympathise with the situation he got caught in.
The heartbreak he caused to Khushi at that time by not disclosing the truth was a betrayal more than the actual truth. If after so many years she wanted to find solace with NK she deserved to do so, esp when there was no communication with Arnav in all that time.

I suppose they both need to undergo these hardships before finding their love together. It was heartbreaking though.

Yeap! all this mess was started three years ago by no other than Shanaya...and it continues to ruin Arnav's life. Arnav couldn't have disclosed the pregnancy to Khushi because he didn't know about it until then either...he felt too guilty to even look her in the eye after he slept with Shanaya, let alone confessing it to her...guilt and self hate can make you do crazy things and it made Arnav run from Khushi because the more he saw her, the more he remembered that morning with Shanaya...

Originally posted by: famiya
feeling bad for arnav
khushi is engaged

Yeap...she is...lets see what Arnav does now.

Originally posted by: ILoveFF
This is very sad

I know... :(

Originally posted by: Snowy8
It was a very emotional & a very heartbreaking update for me 😭u r a wonderful writer..u made me emotional 😭 shanaya is a b**** & a spoilt brat..such people have a pathetic life..get a life shanaya 😡 i knw dat shanaya liked him & he was dating girls to make khushi jealous bt he was atleast honest in such relationships making his GF's clear that he was not interested in serious relationships at present & he never used them for physical purposes bt shanaya used a cheap trick on him by cheating & acting of getting physical 😡 hope shanaya's completely out of arnav's life in present scenario..i very very badly want arnav-khushi together as soon as possible coz both are just made for each other..arnav needs to give a huge explaination to khushi regarding his feelings & wat happened after she went..i wish he'd have put up the courage & gone to the place where she was studying so that he can confess whatever he felt all these years towards her..then she would not have been engaged to NK..both had so many ways to be in touch with each other all these years..if not khushi , i wish arnav had taken the first initiative by going to meet her there coz he was not present when she was leaving to her university & it might have lead to some misunderstandings..SOMEWHERE I FEEL THAT BOTH ARE THE VICTIMS OF SITUATIONS..dunno y he chose to wait & nw she is already engaged to someone when she's back & i'm really feeling sad for arnav & me too coz this ff is one of my favourite ones..hope everything clears soon..( i know m sounding miserable but i have a thing for romantic fictions & i really feel sad when 2 people who need to be together get separated by situations😔)

Thank you so much! I agree that shanaya is spoilt and needs a life...she's just seeking revenge and some people have very twisted minds and they'll do anything to avenge an insult, no matter how small the jab may have been. Shanaya is just blinded by unjustified rage and driven by a strong need to take revenge. She is beyond all logics and reasonings at this point. Arnav and Khushi both have a lot to explain to each other and a lot to understand about each other's feeling before they can move past their dreadful misunderstanding.

You're absolutely right when you say that both of them were victims to the situation. It was just everything spiraling out of hands at the worst possible time and then Shanaya had to go and add more poison into the strains by announcing her pregnancy.. Arnav's reason to not confide in Khushi was guilt...he had betrayed her by sleeping with Shanaya and he didn't have it in him to face Khushi...his reason for not seeking her out was the same. You'll see why he never looked for her in the next update. If you're looking for romantic fictions right now as an antidote to the mess in this FF, (I dont know if you follow it or not) but try 'Koi Aap sa' by me...it started recently and so far its all rainbows and butterflies

Originally posted by: anjs
wow...though i had assumed the past to be somewhat same...but reading it still, pains my heart...

and Khushi, what the hell, was that, hiding the ring...with your one confession, you have absolved Anji and Payal of all the mistakes that they did...

thank god Arnav left the place and made it known that he was hurt...there is no point playing the good friend now...keep your distance boy...let her realize how much she has hurt you...

I know some people will disagree with me that Arnav had hurt her equally...and that is what khushi feels to...but the whole thing was a lie...m sure Sheetal and Shanaya has played a dirty game with Arnav... poor guy...lost everything and still was blamed by all...

but Khushi...she entered the relationship willingly...not only that, she also officialled it by getting engaged to NK... at this moment, she is the most hated person in this ff, for me...

now I really want Arnav to move-on...with another leap of a couple of years... let her get married to NK and see how she can live with another guy, when she is still in love with Arnav...

p.s : I dont want Arnav to move on with another girl, i just want him to shun the idea of love and marriage...

I know...its one of those things that you already know deep down but still, it isn't any less difficult when you hear it again..

Khushi's only reason for hiding the ring was to not steal Anjali's thunder...it was Anjali's excitement..was supposed to be her day..and Khushi didn't want to take away from that by announcing her engagement.

arnav has unintentionally hurt her, yes but she has also hurt him unintentionally only...she doesnt know how he feels for her...he didn't really give her a reason to wait for him...she also thought that she was over him so she got engaged to NK when the opportunity presented itself.. I know that Shanaya and sheetal lied but Khushi didn't know that, right??...heck, even Arnav didn't know that it was all a lie..

Lets see what becomes of Arnav and Khushi...he may not shun the idea of love and marriage but you will see the ruthless ASR making a comeback.😉