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Posted: 11 years ago
One question are krisha sissy..??

Well after reading this this was what came in my mind..

Well update was super awsum..

Loved it..

Update soon..

And yaa all the best..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Go ahead
... keep writing 👏👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: kriyaanshfreva

Sorry about the length of the last update. It didn't even cross 400 words . :p Sorry about that , but have my exams going. That is why.

Part 7

I didn't want to take things forward at a fast pace , so I decided to be normal with her. It had been a week since we were friends .

We had our rehearsals early morning. So we reached the rehearsal hall , and we saw Kria dance. Honestly , it was a treat to watch her dance. She was a dancing princess , but I was confused why didn't she show her talent to others?

All complimented her for her dance. She gave them a small smile , and went. Suddenly I realized I needed a dance partner , and who could be much better than kria , plus with this I could go forward with my plan.

I called her. She turned. Out of curiosity I asked her.

"Why do you hide your dancing talent?"

"I don't hide it rey , I just don't like showing it. If I would have to hide it from people , I would have never revealed to you that I was the girl you danced with that day."

"Erm , but I really think you hide it , like some secret. Anyways , kria I need your favour."

"My? What?"

"Listen , I need a dance partner for a competition , Sharon is dancing with swayam , and other girls don't want to participate , just this one favor kria , please?"

"Rey I don't.."

"If you say No , this means you are hiding your dance."

"Okay."

I smiled in victory.

"Rehearsal hall , sham ko?"

"Fine. Now can I go?"

"Sure!"

---

I was waiting for her in the rehearsal hall , she was late , I went to find her , and saw her in a classroom.

"Dad , just once? Please?"

There was a sort of desperation in her voice , mixed with pain. Her dad probably cut the call , and she stared at the phone. I heard sob , but she controlled it. She turned and saw me , she was shocked.

"Rey?"

"Uh , you were late. Everything fine?"

She nods. But she didn't look fine. She was upset . And I don't know why I just wanted to hug her . But I didn't. Why should I? She did look adorable , with her nose turned red , but I had never seen her upset. Even when my gang had done her ragging. And it was disturbing to see her in that state.

No! I didn't have feelings for her. I mean who wouldn't find it disturbing to see such a strong girl , be upset .

"Shall we go?"

I nod , and we went.

---

Kria's P.O.V

I was speaking to my dad. I just wanted to meet him once. Didn't I deserve at least that much attention from him? Since that day , he had never met me , and he hardly spoke to me. It pained , but I was used to it .

Tomorrow was father's day , and I wanted to meet him , just for an hour. He didn't even reply , and just cut the call. I don't know why I sobbed. But I controlled it , kria ghai is not a person to cry over such issues. You have yourself for your support , you don't need anyone.

I turned to see rey. I was shocked.

"Rey?"

"Uh , you were late. Everything fine?"

For a second I had thought it was a part of his plan. But , no it wasn't . Cause in this one week I had noticed one thing , that rey wasn't a bad human being. He just had an elephant size ego and double the size of an elephant reputation of being a bad boy to be maintained.

But that does not mean , I was soft towards him. No! I knew he wants to take revenge. But now his expressions were genuine. He was in deep thoughts , and stared at my nose , what was so intresting in it?

"Shall we go?"

I asked him , and he nods. We went.

---

Hope you all liked it.

For Pms Add - TBPpms.

Note.

Guys , are my writings so bad that the reviews don't cross even 4 pages? Be very honest if you like it or not. I won't mind , cause I do need to know the problem in my writing. How will I improve , if I don't even know what's wrong? So please tell me , and if you like my writing please review. Reviews mean a lot , and it is upsetting not to see them. The Life OS reviews were VERY DISSAPOINTING , and even the last two updates reviews. Next update after page 34.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Was such a nice update loved it...😉😃👏👏👏👏😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey nice update.

Its really interesting ... wanted to know what bothered both kria and sharons dad.


What rey will do with kria at party and what wil happen at competition.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update :)
This update has left so many questions in my head
Why was Kriya behaving like that???
How does Gautam know Kriya????
Is he her dad????

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Luvd it
Par kitni mysterys hai bt its interesting
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 12

I reached the fire escape , and cursed out loud to my fate. Damn! Wait a second , why on earth am I running from this? You can't make me see that you're weak. Show him the new kria! Show him that you're no more the old kria.

But , why should I prove it to him? I know this and that's enough. I walked out of the fire escape and was walking lost , when I clashed with mr.rai prakash. Only thing left today! Thank you god. And by the way note the freaking sarcasm here.

"Sorry sir."

"It's fine."

His voice was cold . What was I expecting anyways.

"Kria?"

He said. I look at him.

"Yes?"

"Stay away from rey."

I look at him , his voice was of pure concern , but I am sure the concern was for rey not me. Of course why would he give a shit about me. Oh and obviously concerned about sharon. He should be!

"Reyaansh is my good friend , and I understand that you indirectly want me to stay away from sharon . But you don't need to worry sir, sharon is very safe , and I stay away from her. "

"Kria.."

He was going to say something. He looked angry.

"You know what forget it!"

He went away. I closed my eyes , and took a deep breath. My hands turned into a fist , I opened my eyes and saw rey standing in front of me.

"Kria?"

"R-rey ."

"Kya hua?"

"Nothing. I need to go."

I was going to leave when he held my hand. He turned me.

"Kria , what is your relation with sharon's dad?"

"Nothing!"

"I am no dumb fool to not understand something is fishy. Kria i-is h-he you-you're fa-father? I me-mean a-are yo-you li-like hi-his il.."

"Shut up reyaansh! How dare you say that. And he bloody isn't my father , just his friend."

"I am sorry but you were speaking to him so coldly that's why I just thought."

"Whatever."

"Am sorry kria."

He held his years , I nod. He smiled a bit.

"So your mood is off? What should I do to bring the smile back?"

"Ice cream please!"

I hadn't forgotten that it was his plan , but right now I just needed some ice cream and if he was offering , why not take the chance!

We went.

---

Rey's P.O.V

Man! Why on earth did I ask her that question. But it did seem so with the way she was speaking to him. I knew her mood was upset so to cheer her , asked her. We went to the canteen. Kria sat down , I gave her a smile and went to the counter.

"Two chocolate ice creams."

Something struck me. I smiled.

"You know what forget it."

I knew the best way to cheer her mood. I went to her.

"Kria come on , yaha ice cream nahi mil rahi."

"Kaha jaana hain?"

"Kria , chalo na!"

"Where?"

"Surprise!"

I took her hand and dragged her to the car. We reached the place. Here she will see a rey she has never seen.

***

Hope you liked it. Next update after 57. And i am very STRICT about it this time.

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...!
it keeps on getting interesting to see what kria relationship is with GRP...!
i like the way that rey is trying to make her happy ...!
can't wait to see what the surprise is ...!
please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love it
rey will try to spoil bad mood of kria
that will be intresting
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update :)
I really want to know what's going on between Mr Rai Prakash and Kriya
I wonder where Rey is going to take kriya

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