Arshi SS- Forever Yours COMPLETED

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LazilyAnonymous

@LazilyAnonymous

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

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Awesomely written 🤗 I loved reading Arnav's POV. He loves her. He misses her. They are so far apart but still together ❤️ I don't know why but this kinda reminded me of VeerZaara. They were far apart for such a long time but were always together in their memories.

I loved how you described their pain and events that occurred when they were far apart.

Aww Khushi and her book. Khushi is an amazing author, whether it is about irritating her Laad Governor or about loving him. I am sure Arnav loved the surprise. I just wish they were together ❤️

Waiting for the union 🤗

Beautiful and a tear-smile-jerking part :)

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Awesome update 👏

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

loved the start that so sad she is putting up a pretense because she promised him poor khushi totally heart broken wishing he was they with her and where is arnav awesome part thanks for the pm.

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shuzuma

@Shuzu

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Awesome update

Love it😃

Thanks for the PM dear

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

This chapter made me both happy and sad. Happy because though they are miles apart they are still so close. They live for each other. Whatever they do, they do it for each other. The love they have for each other is so precious and pure. We now know Arnav's side of the story. What I don't understand is why no contact at all? Why so much pain when their lives can be filled with happiness? I know the next chapter will answer all the questions. What I loved was Khushi wishing him on his birthday, the way she did, her getting dressed for the first time in years only for him, her planning for her book launch to coincide with Arnav's birthday, her saving the first copy of her book for the person to whom it rightfully belongs and Arnav's reactions to all this. It showed how beautiful and strong their bond is. It made me sad because even after holding so much love in their hearts they are not together, the empty eyes that do not shine, the lone tear that slipped from Arnav's eye. The beautiful lines at the end were so painful. Specially the last line "Har Lavs Hai Beymaaney,Bin Tumhare Raazdaar".

A beautiful chapter. Loved the use of words in this chapter very much. Will be waiting for the next part.

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

They are together yet not together, even when they are miles apart they are in each others heart... poor Arshi my heart goes out to both

wonder what made them take this step ??

you've portrayed all the emotions effectively Anku and I trust you with the story 😳

I know there will be a happy ending with Arnav and Khushi uniting

loved both the chapters

eagerly waiting for the nxt part

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soumee

@-pearlblu-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

U sure know what to write that will touch d chords of d audiences hearts...my eyes almost welled up...but d love, it ws so clearly evident on both the sides, that it just made dis pasrt all the more heartbreaking!! Keep it up😭👏😃

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-UnknownSoul-

@-UnknownSoul-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

loved it <3

i can't wait the next part :D

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mayuloveu

@mayuloveu

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Very much painful update. Plz reunite arshi

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

ek dusre se itna dur hone ki baad bhi, har waqt ek dusre ki saath hain...remembering each other all the time...dil ko chhoon liya Anku... It's beautiful...but why couldn't they keep in touch...I know we'll get the answer on next one, continue soon...