ArHi TS: Perceptions. *Part 2. Pg 25* (Completed) - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
I like the starting But to be honest I don't know What to comment about, It's the kind of feeling when you read something and Like it but don't know what to say about it and I don't like giving One word or one line reviews ( I try not to Most of the times) I like to tell what I liked and Din't like(If I din't like anything in the first place) But this is just one of those times when I like something but don't know What to say about It...So would you mind Terribly if I give a detailed Review at the end of the TS???
P.S: Ok I know I should have just shut up and clicked the "Like" button and left.
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWesome TS
Loved the first part , wonder why Arnav is not making any efforts
Continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
Still Waiting


















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Posted: 11 years ago
Were is saiyu di
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Posted: 11 years ago
Updated my comments here

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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor Khushi :(
Pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
so glad to have you back with this awesome little story.

i loved the first part, was very moving and emotional and it somehow hurts me to see arnav treating khushi like this.

hope he finds out the truth out soon and takes them out of this misery!
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Posted: 11 years ago
So good to get a pm from you. 😃
And i hope u keep coming back like this more often.

I can't believe you stopped there...khoob maza araha hoga tumko? 😆
Jokes aside my heart goes out to this poor girl khushi. Life has been hell for her in the last 3 mths and she has no idea why it has been reduced to this level.

Her arnavji who's eyes and action at one point of time used to reflect the love he felt for her now just shouts and throws his weight around her, reducing the poor thing to tears.

But actually i am a bit surprised that khushi waited for 3 long mths before confronting arnav. I would have expected her to do this much earlier.

Thanks for the pm and cant wait to read the next part now. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Cant wait to read the next part of this story.
A great start for this story.
Edited by eversweetdreams - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank god that I saw a note from you on the Revenge...and came to know about this TS...thanks for writing...please keep writing na...A new TS from you is always a pleasure for all your readers...now coming to the story...I loved it...the way you described the opening scene where Arnav was watching Khushi was just awesome...but why he married Khushi??? When he could not give her love and care...it is only for Di...whenever you read the first chapter of any story, you have lot of questions but I know you must be having all the answers for us... and we need to have patience for it...and we need to wait for the next chapter...Please update soon...

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