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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#391

This was another magnificient chapter expel
Awesome
Your writing makes me feel all light and giddy and the arshi used to make me feel on the show
And i want more
Seriously cant wait for the next chapter

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-PayaashPM

@-PayaashPM

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#392

Loved it ... Simply fabulous ...

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awroneema

@awroneema

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#393

can we get an excerpt b4 thursday...😳

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#394

Tooo good..my favourite story these days..

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Phoenixrises

@Phoenixrises

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Posted: 11 years ago

#395

LOVED the update. The Spanish house, Arnav being jealous of Aman, his constant flirting was all very well written. The conversation they had during the limo ride in the morning was very amusing and very well put. I enjoyed it thoroughly. I can't wait for the next update.

Anyway thanks for the PM.

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#396

Aaaw arnav is jealous of aman

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#397

Wow, chapter-2 in thread-2!

Congrats yaar.

i can guess how much people love your stories. and you deserve it.

i'm enjoying flirtatious ASR a lot. How the way he admired her beauty and sex appeal was making me aphrodisiac. I don't know how long Khushi can ressit his yearning gaze and control her desire.

Oh Gosh he leads a profligate life for sure. But Khushi seems kind of reserved to usurp his health. May be she is becoming pragmatic and doesn't want to indulge herself in this temporary profusion. But i have an intuition that Arnav's intention is something else.I guess he actually didn't marry her just for a year, but forever. He is extremely attracted to her and he is very much concern about his comfort and taking care of her really well.

I just loved how Khushi became worried for Arnav when he fell down from the horse back. And how she reminded him the vows was amazing.

How the story is progressing, can't wait to read the next chapter.

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ENLIGHTENED1

@ENLIGHTENED1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#398

U know the termoil that khushi is a wife ... But she s not ... Only a woman can understand ... No matter how practical and pragmatic we we on try to be ... In the end of the day we r ...mashriqi larkiyaan,... Born to be a wife and a mother

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#399

As I read this update, all I felt was an emotion I do not readily feel I real life and yet, your story has made me feel it...ENVY!!!!!!!! I want to be the girl in this fairy tale that can rival any Disney Princess's life. I want to be this Silicon Valley Indian Prince's Princess and their lovely castle in Menlo Park...or is it in Atherton or Los Altos?

Love the banter, the tension and the clever repartee that these this very intelligent couple is engaged in.

Who is Lavanya and what is her angle and what is Aman Mathur up to? Why do I feel like he has an ulterior motive behind hiring Khushi and urging her to continue to work for him?

Edited by Anamika100 - 11 years ago