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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#241

Khushi, now like a women balancing on a rope b/w real wife and reel wife. .
😃 omg my gutter mind works along with arnavs. . I knew khushi would say sumthng lyk ths bt still mind was coordinating with arnavs hehe anytym anywhere . .

I dnt lyk la. . dnt knw y . . may b because, that one line . . I dnt want to disappoint him, dint go well with me !!!

arnie a tinge of jealousy for mathur ???

sheetal and nk ???

waiting fo d nxt

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#242

beautiful ArShi moments...loved them...each bit of it...and God, Arnav is just so irresistible...how is Khushi surviving...this is awesome...also too much of trying to impress his wife...😆 poor boy...I so wish them to forget that this marriage isn't a real one...I hope I day they will...and I know its so far ahead, so I'm not thinking about that right now, but enjoying as it comes...by the way, loved the intros of La, Aman, NK, Manorama...waiting for the next chapter already...

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rith123

@rith123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Hello hi!

Part two comments are here!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100299772

Bye bye!

Also, if Khushi isn't interested in Arnav, I'm available. Just saying.

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Meena

@chotidesi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#244

I don't even know what to praise you on anymore because I've exhausted all of my praises. I love your words, your descriptions, pretty much everything. I'm eagerly waiting for your next update :)

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Awesome awesome awesome update Juhi!!! Part 2 was really good the way you described their house was too good, I could imagine everything. Poor Arnav he was trying to impress Khushi and sprained his hand 😊 Who hasn't made fool of themselves in love right??? But is it love or just an attraction, cannot make out Arnav's feelings yet.

It was almost like they were in newly married bliss and then everything came crashing down when the reality of the marriage hit. Cannot wait for your next update!!!!!

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jolybudy

@jolybudy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#246

wow Part1 and part 2 were awesome as usual...👏

Aman Mathur.. this time a frnd of Khushi.. diff... is there gonna be any jealousy track or something?

Interconnected bedrooms.. superb... Khushi initially not interested in knowing how to lock and later wanting to know how to lock... beautifully brought out..

hmm... Arnav trying to impress Khushi and being a flop.. no way.. guess this right hand hurt wld lead to some romance.. with khushi feeding... isnt it???☺️

Btw.. why is Arnav all of a sudden behaving aloof... is he trying to get Khushi to accept that she too does have feelings for him..

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#247

Aaah their constant battle with themselves on what this marriage really is about. I feel they both conveniently forget about their farce marriage when they want to, and remember it suddenly when they want to hide from how rapidly their feelings are expanding. Feelings - not the mushy kind, there is still time for that, feelings like fascination for each other, curiosity to know each other better, attraction obviously, and I would say a shared intensity and passion that they both possess for their individual likings. I love all of that and more about this story.

It looks like you spend an amazing amount of time just to draw the characters out, and then start writing the story. That and many other things define how wonderful a writer you are, Juhi. I used to say that for Anne, Meera, Munches, Gargi/Bingala, Maya and now you Juhi.

In your stories, Characters are very well defined, and they remain consistent throughout, you kind of understand why they did what they did throughout the story, and you never ever question their motives, because the flow of the story, and their characterizations make you believe that thats how its supposed to be. Brilliant work, Juhi!

Forgot to mention in earlier comments, but writing in first person isnt bad at all, in fact initially I thought its going to be difficult to follow the story, but it definitely isnt. You did a great job at trying something new, and it works beautifully.

Edited by inspiringstars - 11 years ago

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#248

OOOMMMEEEG!!! AWESOMEEE UPDATE!!!!
THEY ARE BOTH ATTRACTED TO EACHOTHER..BUT SIGH SHAADI RULES 😕
hope it turns around for both of them
write soon x 😃

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Arshibest

@Arshibest

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#249

Loved the update
U r just awesome
The way u write it is just mind blowing

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#250

Love how they both are attracted to each other but Khushi fights it more, I hope Aman will not be boyfriend in hiding, that Khushi is not aware of ...

The new home seems to indicates perhaps Arnav knows more than just his 'temporary' wife's last name, it is as if he had it decorated with her in mind, esp the bedrooms, accommodating but just enough to make her feel comfortable.. his desire to try something different..

I am left wondering if the injury will mean Khushi has to look after him, more interaction than she may want... Never for a moment doubted you would not be able to pull this genre of writing..look forward to more..