& Now, the WINNERS of the contest!
The RUNNER-UP for Let's Make A Movie Contest is :
& Finally,
The *WINNER* Of Let's Make A Movie Contest is :
⭐️ CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL WINNERS! ⭐️
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Before moving to the credits, the Judges have something to say about the entries :
JUDGE 1.
Hooks & Crooks
Story too rushed, plot not as gripping, title is wrong grammar wise
Guns & Roses
I absolutely loved the storyline, the characterization and even though I don't have to say it, the story was very well written!
Quiescence
I couldn't connect with the characters or their supposed love story since we were never provided a glimpse of that love. It was way too rushed and I felt it could've been written better.
My Heartbeat
The story seemed to be too rushed and clichd. There were also many grammatical errors I came upon which obviously means the author did not bother to proof read the story.
Sins Need To Be Burnt
The love story was very unique with it proceeding without the two actually conversing for quite a long time. The dialogues however, could have been done better and so could have the development of the characters.
Born, Only To Be Yours
The way the story was written was very confusing and I had no idea a majority of the story was a flashback until I got to the end. However, the storyline in which Arnav and Kumud happened to be Salim and Anarkali yet reincarnated was very creative. I only wish it was written in a more proper manner with better grammar and structure.
Frozen Island
There were certain parts that were written in first person and then in third person which confused me slightly. The lack of proper grammar usage makes the story less appealing despite the storyline being very unique.
To Love Again
The title and the storyline was quite interesting however, it was very confusing with too many characters and details meshed in together. I was unable to enjoy it as much as I would have because of the fact that I couldn't understand from how the story had seemed to take such a big jump from the beginning.
DDLJ
The plot was an interesting read but the grammar and structure the story was written in could have been better. Unfortunately, the story seemed to be too rushed and all over the place for me. Otherwise, the plot was very creative.
Airport Soulmates
The story was very entertaining and I found the characters to be quite well developed.. A very unique and creative story for sure.
Eloquently
I loved how the setting was incorporated into the story. The storyline itself was very unique and a wonderful read. I just felt I couldn't connect with the characters as much and they could have been developed slightly more further.
Last Wishes
It was a very touching story, very well written. I had tears in my eyes when I got near to the end of the story.
JUDGE 2.
Thank you for choosing me to judge this contest. It was great reading all the stories. It was nice to see so many good writers in the forum with a vivid imagination. Good job everyone and congrats to the winners!
JUDGE 3.
The entries were treat to read. The creativity blew my mind. Some entries were simply amazing, others needed a tiny bit of work but nonetheless, a great effort by all. Thank you for having me as a judge!
JUDGE 4.
Hooks and Crooks: An interesting read. However, you could work on your writing skills and brush it up a bit, so that your story will have a better impact on the reader. Quite entertaining, keep it up!
Last Wishes: Beautiful, beautiful piece of fiction. I loved the unique pairing of Arjun and Sharon, and you did complete justice to it. I only wish the ending hadn't been this abrupt, but I guess that could be justified due to the short time frame of Sharon's life? Very well done!
Eloquently: I loved the sheer simplicity of the romance, it just brought a smile to my face while reading it. Truly, the confession was very eloquently written as well. You had some issues with the grammar and style, but I am sure you can work on it. All the best!
Airport Soul Mates: Quite a quirky tale, the two of them meeting at various airports and falling in love. There's always scope for improvement, and you could work on your style and flow. Nevertheless, a pleasant read!
DDLJ: An interesting read. You could work on your writing skills and brush it up for a better impact on your readers. Very dramatic and entertaining, nevertheless! Keep trying, all the best!
To Love Again: Very interesting read; I liked the concept of falling in love with the same person all over again. The main premise of the plot seemed to be inspired from a popular Hindi film, but I am glad that you gave your own twist to the tale. Nevertheless, it was very well written, so keep it up and all the best!
Frozen Island: Quite interesting to read something on the supernatural/mystic genre. The title was quite apt as well. However, due to the lack of consistency in the plot along with the rather amateurish writing; I wasn't able to connect with your story. As a writer, you need to try and make your readers connect to your story, and I missed that connect. Nevertheless, an interesting piece!
Born, Only to be Yours: I liked the main premise and concept of the entire piece; however, I wish more emphasis had been put on the reincarnation. The main point of the story seems to be the fact that the protagonists were the reincarnation of Salim-Anarkali; so maybe a better flow and more emphasis on it would have made it better. Regardless, an enjoyable read!
Guns and Roses: Very very well characterised! From Armaan to Gunjan to RK to Khushi; the characters are exactly the same as what we've seen and I loved that! Also, the bit about RK's maternal side of the family was quite humourous, and I liked it! You write very well, so never stop doing so!
Sins Need to be Burnt: The plot and main premise of the story is commendable, and that's what made it an entertaining read despite the few fallacies. Work on your style and language, and I am sure you'll do much better! Great piece of work!
Quiescence: The concept of finding love all over again has been handled quite well. Additionally, you have a natural flair for writing so the entire story became all the more enjoyable to read. A classic example of how a simple story has had a good impact because of the amazing style, language and diction. All the best, very well written!
My Heartbeat: Fabulous characterisation; and that is the highpoint of your story! However, there was no flow in the story and it was difficult for me to understand the sequence of events and the main premise of it. I am sure if you work harder on your language and style, you'll be able to deliver a much betterpiece. All the best!
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| Entry No. | Movie | Writer | Total Scores [out of 200] |
| | | | |
| 1 | Hooks & Crooks | book.worm | 132 |
| 2 | Last Wishes | angel-luvs-s | 179.5 |
| 3 | Eloquently | niinuma007 | 161.5 |
| 4 | Airport Soul Mates | niinuma007 | 163.5 |
| 5 | DDLJ | Jenn1 | 116 |
| 6 | To Love Again | .MistyMornings. | 124 |
| 7 | Frozen Island | flora_arhi | 104.5 |
| 8 | Born, Only To Be Yours | deeps_92 | 126.5 |
| 9 | Guns & Roses | Dil | 180.5 |
| 10 | Sins Need To Be Burnt | shona_arhilover | 152 |
| 11 | Quiescence | Pearl_Oyster | 158 |
| 12 | My Heartbeat | RabbaVe | 132.5 |
Edited by -BlueEyes- - 11 years ago
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