UNTAMED DESIRES-MG FF-UPDATED PT 22 PG 114 ON 16-08-14 - Page 58

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved this strong Geet. Present.
Past. All Maan had to do was see the words My Maan and he is full fida over Geet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 19
awesome...
wow Geet took strong steps...
why is Maan worried about this Antara?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet ... that was just awesome putting Antara in her place
the legal way , Geet's strong and postitive and possessive personality came across
amazingly well
Mariah on the other hand with her dad was just classical
Maan in the past when he found Geet in his liberary all those emotions and desires that filled
his thoughts was amazing and all be he saw in Geet's book "My Maan"
those feelings that he felt must have truely been deep .
however I can't understand why Geet had said when sh met Maan for the second time
he accused her of trapping him
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Posted: 11 years ago




RECAP

PRESENT

Maan lifted her smiling widely and pecked her forehead and asked,"Hey butterscotch,what did u do today?"

Mariah spoke in tit bits,"School...games...breakfast...lunch...dinner...eat!"

She meant that she went to kindergarten school.There she played games and before that she had breakfast and then lunch.Now she's hungry and have to have dinner.Maan smiled and asked abt that further when she said in tit bits once again while Geet left them to have hot shower and help her MIL in dinner.

PAST

Geet was shocked hearing the word pamper from his mouth and he immediately took her soft hand and dragged her from the library.He locked his office and made her sit in the car and for safety measure he put the seat belt brushing his fingers on her soft skin.She blushed furiously feeling that tingling sensation.

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PART 20

PRESENT

Today Mariah slept in her parents room only after Bhoomi's feed.These days,Bhoomi has become more cranky and stubborn to sleep between her parents holding their hands inside her tiny fist.Maan admired his angel who was making her mother life as hell holding her mangalsutra tightly.Geet would hv to stay awake till midnight so that she can take her mangalsutra from Bhoomi's fist.Maan chuckled seeing Geet pouting nth time as she failed to free her mangalsutra from Bhoomi's fist.

Geet glared at him and spoke,"He only know to laugh instead of helping me!"

In next second she felt a warm breathe fan her slender neck and looked up to get Maan had come to her side and was bending on her slender neck.He more bent on her pressing her soft body from his rock chest and pecked Bhoomi's tiny fist.Bhoomi loosened her grip and he slowly freed her mangalsutra.Bhoomi snuggled to the blanket while Geet stuffed more pillows around her.Geet turned towards him to say thanks when her hands were pinned above her head and he lowered his face towards her plump lips.

Before he kiss her she spoke,"Maan,Mariah is asleep!"

Maan dint listened to her plea and more lowered his face when he heard Mariah's anklets as she had turned that side and had turned towards them.Maan immediately stood leaving her with shocked expression when she giggled cutely seeing Mariah fast asleep.Now it was Maan's turn to pout but he saw that Mariah was shivering as she wasnt under the blanket and went to her side and spread the blanket over her and slept beside her snaking his warm arms around her soft body.Mariah snuggled to his chest and he pecked her forehead and both sighed in unison.Geet saw them both and sighed in admiration and drifted immediately.Next morning Maan got up early to get ready for work when Geet stopped him.

Geet said,"Maan,u need to have rest jaan!Dont go to office!"

Geet was a bit scared after that Antara's fiasco what would office staff would speak abt him as she has seen his office staff gossipping around abt him wrongly.Maan considered it but he had an ultimatum as he need to finish his works till his paternal leave ends to resume his lectureship.

Maan said,"Jaan,i need to finish my office works in the period of this paternal leave!"

Geet said,"But u can handle office and lectures like previously!"

Maan said,"I dont want to be apart from my family while am handling my office and lectures.Mariah needs me and Bhoomi also,i want to handover the company once again to Naintara and Kamiya.Am sure they got to know what is hardwork is and now am trusting Kamiya.She's working here smoothly and abt Naintara,she'll get there where i had thought.She too get to know the reality.I cant leave my responsibilities trying to feed the staff of KC.Am need of my family and my family needs me too.Now Sasha is also there to handle the company.If Kamiya and Naintara does mistakes then she will inform me!"

Geet nodded but she was worried abt the staff who were gossiping around abt him and Antara.Maan had breakfast and left Mariah to school and looked around her school confirming that the environment to be secured.He had set up and security on her and had warned them to be very attentive.The security were friendly with her and very much protective.Geet went towards the university while Maan drove his car towards KC.He entered his office to get the normal environment.Actually he too expected some gossip but he dint get and he was impressed so he went inside his cabin.All the staff sighed scared of someone and she was Kamiya who had took class of them when she heard the very same gossip.Maan walked inside when he heard his two step-sister's conversation.

Kamiya asked angrily,"Naina,u r forgetting that he's our brother...though step-brother but he's always took care of us!U dont remember anything but i remember when Mom's relative laid greedy eyes on Mom's money then he's the one who saved our family,and u did this betrayal to him.U sold ur own bro to that bi*** Antara?"

Maan was shocked hearing it and then he came to know why he saw a smirking Naintara that day.She was victorious in her plan that's why she was happy.He felt disgust over her step-sister and walked towards her cabin to confront her.

Naintara said,"Dont defend him di,he's nt worth of ur defence!"

Kamiya's anger went its peak and said,"He's worth of my defence Naina becoz he deserve it.Till now i too hated him becoz he was snatching our right but now i will say if he makes me his slave then am ready to become and u dont understand abt this!"

Naintara was shocked with Kamiya's words and said angrily,"So he bewitched u too!"

Kamiya said angrily,"Shut up Naina!Dont speak abt the matter which u r nt fully aware.U have seen his attitude,ego and anger but it is from outside but from inside he has always acted as our brother.Do u remember that incident when we were bad eyed by our father's drugmates who wanted us at any cost.On that time we were still 10 yrs but Maan veerji dint let us to be victims of those lusty men and u..what u did u sold ur brother to that lusty woman!"

Naina dint believe her words and said,"Stop lying me dee!Nothing had happened becoz we are Khuranas.No one has guts to touch Khurana sisters...!"

But Kamiya cut her words and said,"That's becoz we are under the protective shadow of Maan Singh Khurana.If he takes his protective shadow from our head then everything will be destroyed!"

Naintara asked,"And who said this to u?"Kamiya said,"Mom said this to me..she has said everything to me Naina so stop hating Maan veerji for god sake!"

Naintara said sarcastically,"Oh please,dont give me lecture and dont think that i wont survive without his protective shadow...i will survive and show u and ur Maan veerji that i can live without his protective shadow!"

Kamiya was shocked hearing her decision and said,"Naina,dont do it.I cant lose u after dad!"

Naintara dint listen to her and turned to get Maan standing at door folding his hands and looking at them blankly.

Kamiya was abt to speak when he held his hand and spoke with calmness,"So u want to grow without my protective shadow.By all means,its free world,every man has that right.But let me tell u one thing,u r going outside empty handed.Am nt gonna give u single penny!"

Naintara said angrily,"That's my right which u r nt giving!I will file a case against u Mr.Maan Singh Khurana!"

Maan laughed out loud and said,"First u earn money to pay compensations to a lawyer and after that file the case against me!Now u can go!"

Naintara was shocked hearing his decision,she thought that he gonna shower his anger on her once again and make hasty decisions but he was totally confident and she glared at him and walked away.

Kamiya was scared of Naintara's decision and tried to stop her but she dint budge and she pleaded Maan too to stop him but Maan shouted angrily,"Kamiya,i dont want tolerate traitor like her in my office.If u want to go with her then go but dont expect me to take u both back!"

Kamiya was shocked with his decision but stayed back.She knew if Naintara gets into trouble then she can save her and she dialled her security to keep an eye on her.

Gonna post past tomorrow till then present se hi kaam chalaana.


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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww lovely update yar :)
Eagerly waiting fr next update :)
Edited by sona-rai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oops nt rush decision maan cjhallenge
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part and maan made a right decision for naintara waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice updte
maan ko pta chl gya h ki naina bhi antra se mili hui h
acha hua maan ne naintara o bhaga diya
ni maaneet lovey dovey scene:(
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Posted: 11 years ago


Wow lovely touchy update..te bhoomi ki nautanki and my maan teasing his geet was lovely..te two girls wants they parents attention making my maan to frown was lovely cute touchy..te way geet worried for my maan but he consoling and left to office was loveky..oh god my maan came to know tat his sister sold betray him was lovely emotional..te way kamini speakibg for my maan and how he protect them for te evil eyes was lovely. Nt challenging my maan without knowing wat is waiting for her..i love te update
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeh bewakoof ladki ka kuch nahin ho sakta
god man
she is gonna regret it
as kamya is right he is the one protecting them
or else they would have been on the roads
and this is how she repays him
well she did ask for trouble
now lets see how she will do anything without the khurana money
hmmm interesting that kamya changed some relief
awww little bhoomi is so cute
the way she wanted her parents with her
same as their other daughter mariah
that was adorable scene
seeing maneet with their babies
happy little family man
kissi ki nazar naa lage
hmmm so maan wants to spend more time with his family
of course he does

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