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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Superrr update..

Really loved it...

Virat and Manvi mother part was really sweet.. The names the give eachother are soo sweet..

What happend to Manvi???

Virat proposed Manvi for everyone why didnt she accept it???

Feell really sad for Virat..

Pleaseee update soon..

And thanks for the PM...

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abirami

@madhuharini

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

hey Shivali... the update is so long and very very very superb...
what a selfless love Virat have for his girl!!! amazing yaar...
why Mannu is rejecting his love??? I am in doubt that did she have any health prblms??
If my guess is wrong, plzz don't mistake me dear...
And I also luv Virat and Padmini's bonding...
You portrayed Virat's character out of the world... I like this virat sooo much dear...
Also I like Virat's friends, so caring nature...
the story is awesome till this and you r presenting this so beautifully...
no doubt that u r the best writer...
plzzz update soon and I am waiting for the next one...
luv u.. take care🤗

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itsfate

@itsfate

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

awesome update

loved it

why manvi is not accepting his love

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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itsfate

@itsfate

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

awesome update

why manvi is not accepting is love

loved it

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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hindujareddy

@hindujareddy

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

nice upt
thanx for pm
cnt soon

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Shivi you have to update asap.. Can't wait to read the next part.. Why is she acting so weird?? She also loves him right? Even her mom is hiding something from him.. What's wrong? Virat is a sweetheart.. Lucky Manvi ;).. Loved it Shivi.. Superb update :D.. Waiting for the next.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care <3

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Nikita

@Duggukede

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

this is amazing

you are such a great writer

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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@.jai.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Awesome update.. ❤️d it Shorti 🤣 .. Update Soon

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

wow this was an awesome update

virat is soo cute

oh my god he confessed his love to her

but why didn't she tell anything

now no patience left 😉😉

plzzz do continue soon

thanks for the pm dear😃

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

shivi this is sooo awesome like really interesting cute adorable the way he admires her and truthfully loves her immensely and the cute family moments and then the grand confession beautifully done par wanna know her pov tooo...waiting for the next update make it soon 😃