ArShi FF ~ || The Fault In Our Stars || CHAPTER 4 UP ! 6/2

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soumee

@-pearlblu-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#561

Came across dis ff recently n read all the chaps in one go, n must say...u r talented, gal!! Loved d start, d storyline in general...n d way u hav penned down the characters...they r very real...all of em...so, plz plz plz add me to ur pm list, would really really love to read more!!😃👏

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#562

Amazing update dear loved it plz update soon

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#563

Wow the update was very intense yet quite heart breaking,

The update was definitely very unexpected, I honestly thought Arnav would finally see Khushi as being innocent.

Arnav is still living in his deluded world and still thinks Khushi is characterless, it's disgusting.

Khushi actually tried to commit suicide which has that had no effect on Arnav, as he still does not trust her.

I hope Khushi never forgives him as he does not deserve someone as pure as Khushi,

The forced and rough kiss at the end was so cruel and harsh, poor Khushi.

On a slightly lighter note I love the fact Khushi decided to become stronger and she was dancing on the hospital bed that was such a cute and adorable scene.

It's a shame by the end of the update and Arnav's cruel behaviour has made Khushi realise that she has no strength to fight him.

The update was a brilliant read, amazing writing.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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darya20

@darya20

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#564

I just read ur ff in one go and loved it sooo much

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janu

@Janu75

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#565

It's all wild and angst all the way.

Khushi trying. To get normal and doing the dance and Arnav watching the same and assessing the situation ...

Shyam ,in front of Arnav has got the guts to enter and disturb khushi😡

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ipktouch

@ipktouch

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#566

superb update.,arnav was still egoist n still hav doubt on kushi n shyam..whatevr kushi told him was ryt n he as the great ASR why cudnt he go n ask n clarify the doubt with shyam..waiting for the next update..

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#567

Amazing updt waiting for next

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anzana

@Bista-anzana

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#568

Read de chapz... O godd why de hell Arnav is being so mad ? Again he stared de same... Brusting On kushi... One moment he is soo concernd for her nd on de vry nxt moment he get change.. Wot did he jz said - "Because if you died, than who will complete the damn contract we made? And, who will pay for your sins, Mrs Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada." really wanna kill him at dis moment.. Aww Anjali soo swt.. Shit shayam..again Arnav abused her... Poor kushi.. Arnav kissed her.. Kushi shud slapd him.. Well written dear.. Thnkew for PM