Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 22)

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PSharada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Congrats on the new thread.

Posting my comments for Chapter 36.

Well after reading the chapter I am left in different emotions and I mean in a good way. I felt that Arnav and Khushi were doing some progress in their relationship so far but looks like things are back to the same point, and Arnav really hasn't gotten over his insecurities. The only plus point is that he didn't draw out conclusions and heard and more importantly believed what Khushi said about the hug. I expected Arnav to miss Khushi and grow close to her which seems to have happened but it is disappointing to see that Arnav still is not sure of Khushi's feelings or for that matter his own feelings. I would have hoped that he moves a little forward in dealing with his insecurities and grows some trust on Khushi but looks like guy is still not there yet.

So finally Arnav challenged Kushi to kiss him and you leave the chapter right at that cliffhanger. Now I don't know how I can wait for the next chapter. I really hope that you update soon this time around so that we needn't be in this cliffhanger forever. I wish Khushi kisses Arnav not because he challenged her but because she wants to kiss and shower her love on her husband and Arnav takes forward their intimacy.

Khushi also has a big insecurity due to her limp and it would be really great if Arnav keeps Khushi's mind at peace regarding the same. I do hope you will address this point during the course of your storytelling. So now eagerly awaiting the next update. Please update soon

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SaRun.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Congratz on the new thread Vats!! :D

Soo due to examz I missed reading chp 36...n I jus read it n im speechless .. such an amazingly written chp!!! I hv so much mre to say bt I hv to rush bak to studies. .u better update soon..this kiss is gonna haunt me now!!!

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sanam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

love it awesome update n congrats on new thread

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snehal1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Excellent story.

Congrats on new thread.

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smilejans

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Congrats for new thread. Wait to get rope, where you left at cliff hanger

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lika63

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

comment for cant let go chap2...very nice update.still have to accustum to those wovles words.if fate chosen mate is near den dey will feel pineapple smell?i dnt knw.wat means imprinted? ps:wat is will happen of jacob imprinting renessemmee in twilight breaking dawn2?

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tanu3579

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: psarada
Congrats on the new thread.

Posting my comments for Chapter 36.

Well after reading the chapter I am left in different emotions and I mean in a good way. I felt that Arnav and Khushi were doing some progress in their relationship so far but looks like things are back to the same point, and Arnav really hasn't gotten over his insecurities. The only plus point is that he didn't draw out conclusions and heard and more importantly believed what Khushi said about the hug. I expected Arnav to miss Khushi and grow close to her which seems to have happened but it is disappointing to see that Arnav still is not sure of Khushi's feelings or for that matter his own feelings. I would have hoped that he moves a little forward in dealing with his insecurities and grows some trust on Khushi but looks like guy is still not there yet.

So finally Arnav challenged Kushi to kiss him and you leave the chapter right at that cliffhanger. Now I don't know how I can wait for the next chapter. I really hope that you update soon this time around so that we needn't be in this cliffhanger forever. I wish Khushi kisses Arnav not because he challenged her but because she wants to kiss and shower her love on her husband and Arnav takes forward their intimacy.

Khushi also has a big insecurity due to her limp and it would be really great if Arnav keeps Khushi's mind at peace regarding the same. I do hope you will address this point during the course of your storytelling. So now eagerly awaiting the next update. Please update soon

yes... i wish arnav tells her tht he is happy she has tht little limp-issue... else as per him.. there wud hv been a big line of prospects / fans fr her outside there house :) :)

Edited by tanu3579 - 11 years ago