Short Story: Innocent Love...Part-1 to Part-6

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#841

Originally posted by: jeenia123

thanks a lot dear...well actually semi separation track...but she is angry...read next one...then you will know...

ok...

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Dee James

@DJames

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Posted: 11 years ago

#842

Okay...that was just fantastic You do know to really write a story and leaving us wanting more. Let me list all the things I liked 😊

The banner was very beautiful and I liked Avi's look with no beard 👍🏼

Your story is just progressing so very well. Please don't ever stop.

The emotions were so real and it touched me so much. Lovely

And lastly, when are you going to continue??? Please give a double dhamaka today too?? Please..please pretty please 😃

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niki795

@niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#843

but will unres other 2 tomorrow

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#844

@ ipkkndfollower

thanks a lot dear

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#845

@ jeenia

double nahi triple dhamaka

diaper wala nd anshi uday romance still left

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#846

Originally posted by: ipkkndfollower
Okay...that was just fantastic You do know to really write a story and leaving us wanting more. Let me list all the things I liked 😊
The banner was very beautiful and I liked Avi's look with no beard 👍🏼
Your story is just progressing so very well. Please don't ever stop.
The emotions were so real and it touched me so much. Lovely
And lastly, when are you going to continue??? Please give a double dhamaka today too?? Please..please pretty please 😃

thanks for liking the update sweetie...

banner thanks just to Meerab no one else...

As about double update...depends completely on meerab, if she stops chating for one hour, i may write..otherwise my last update for tomorrow is ready but that will be tomorrow only...

i need just one hour to type, have something in my mind...but need to type...at the same time, i can't stop chating with her..because that is one thing, i love and get very less chances due to her busy schedule...so ask her to stop chating...so that i may type...