ArHi SS(Second Chances):Back To You * Note on pg 67

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

The start is wondeful and catchy. Their past seems very mysterious and though it seems to be his mistake, I am sure its much more.

The favor he wishes to get from her is something very unpleasant because he's outright nervous in just talking about it.

Waiting for the next part.

update soon. 😊

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Nice start can't wait to read more of it

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

I really love the thought of dis story... Start was awesome...

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Shelly Singh

@punjabi0926

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Loved the start and i know it is going to be perfect, just like the rest of your writing. Cannot wait to read!

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

intresting start dear..so arshi were husband nd wife bt they r living separately since 3 yrs..wonders now why arnav came to her for which favour??
luking forward for nxt..
continue soon:)

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

new ss wow!

nice concept...

they r married and separated...

update soon...

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sudhareddy

@sudhareddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Maria loved your Idea of "Second Chances" in love, Series of romantic SS's.

Loved the concept of story "Back To You"

Loved how how described mid-summer weather and Khushi loved winter.

Khushi is independent and working women and she received a message from her husband. Arnav with whom she was separated 3 years back, to meet him urgently at the same place they used to met in the past.

Khushi felt apprehension of meeting Arnav after 3 long years and she still loves him and he still affects her.

Khushi and Arnav who are once best friends, lovers, separated their ways because of his own priorities over her.

Loved how Arnav sexually aroused by seeing Khushi...I think Khushi is the only one whom he loved and still loves.

Arnav came to ask a favour from Khushi and he wanted to do everything make her agree.

Its very Interesting story and waiting to read more.