SanDhir TS: The Realisation (Part 4 pg 17)

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rabia297

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Waitingg fo nxt part...nyc work...
Plzz update asap..
Nd yeah...get well soon !!

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Randhir win waooo

That grt nd awesome update

Update soon

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Wow this is nice

Finally she made him to talk to her or can say fight with her..lol

Randhir ne cheating ki for her..wow

But that surprise about date I think Randhir didn't listen it...may be when time will come he will realise

Precap is nice looking forward to read soon...and add me in ur pm list...

Edited by kaveriw2008 - 11 years ago

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-Cascade-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Finally u hv update. I ws waiting eagerly specially aftr reading d teaser.

D story strted wid a vry gloomy POV of Sanyukta bt aftr dat the pace of d story jst left me speechless. It ws delightful nd enticing.

U r such a gr8 writer I mst say. I admire d creativity nd innovation in ur script.Till d vry end dis update hooked me up. I guess dis story is magnetic.
OMG! Sanyukta getting desperate to hv interaction wid Randhir. It ws so interesting. Hr actions wr so cute nd adorable. U hv vry brilliantly writen dis lovely prt.
Randhir's POV ws also fantstic. D more he tries to run away frm hr d more closer she comes. He ws hell jealous.
Gosh!! Mr. I-am-perfect cheated fr his to be lady luv. I luv ur personification of Randhir.

Yoyo... I miss him so much these days in d show. So thnks fr including Yoyo paaji. Yoyo is so vry intelligent. He framed d rules of d competition so that both culd spend some tym wid Sanyukta. Bravo!!!!!

Yippeee,... Randhir won. I'm so happy fr both SanDhir.
This update ws so appealing and delightful dat I think I'm gonna read it again nd again till ur nxt update.

Ah!! D precap!!!! Why do u hv to torture us wid such alluring nd tempting precap?

Nw do update d nxt prt soon...
I'm so vry excited fr it.

Edited by KAJU10 - 11 years ago

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Neha Kashyap

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: richurachna
wow lovely update. uff so randhir searching sanyu thing madly.
precap sound "interesting very interesting"

hehehe...thanks yaar...haan pyaar insaan se kya kya karvata hai...😃

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Neha Kashyap

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: rabia297
Waitingg fo nxt part...nyc work...
Plzz update asap..
Nd yeah...get well soon !!

thanks rabia...well i had a dental problem...root canal karvana tha...and now i hate dentist...anyways thanks a lot..

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Neha Kashyap

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Mishti_k5
Randhir win waooo
That grt nd awesome update

Update soon

hamara randhir kisise haar sakta hai kya..and for sanyukta he will do anything..

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Neha Kashyap

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
Wow this is nice

Finally she made him to talk to her or can say fight with her..lol

Randhir ne cheating ki for her..wow

But that surprise about date I think Randhir didn't listen it...may be when time will come he will realise

Precap is nice looking forward to read soon...and add me in ur pm list...

no actually randhir ne bahot aage ki soch rakhi thi...he was ready to give up a samall date so that he can have her as his patner..sorry yaar...i dont pm it to anyone...i am sorry...u can check...i always change the title and mention the pg no. when i update it...i hope that helps..