ArHi FF : Beauty & The Beast#3~ Th 4 Link added to Index Pg 1

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

819504

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#551

katieji katieji katieji...!!!
I love you ji...!!!❤️

Take a bow my deary for giving us such a master piece...thausands and lakhs of thanks would have not been enough for me to say you...!!👏👏
I've not shared it with you be4 bt now saying...B&B is really close to my heart...the one and only ff which provoked/develop different kinds of emotions and feelings in me...!!
This ff is just not a story for me...its its what to say something beyond which i can't decipher...!!
I'm not at all good in words thats why blahber everytime...!!😛
For this update If i were there near you i would have engulfed you in a big bear hug for this splendid work...!!🤗

today you have overwehlmed me to such extent...don't know to bak bak...!!😆 thanks for giving tissue warning too as always na kehtey to bi zarorat parthi...😭 lekin khushi ke ansu the...😊

thorougly enjoyed...loved...each and every word...scene...emotion...feelings...you protrayed in this particular chapter...the most awaited moments in B&B...Aur app justice ki baat karrey...nthing would be better than this...beautifully written...!! Sarey dictionery ke adjectives bhi kaam parenge aisa likha hain apne...!!

like for arnavji Time still'd for me also for two times..."1st when kiddo's call arnavji as dad/daddy...2nd confession arshi"

loved how khush told the truth abt buddy being daddy...in short bt evrything as understandable to her's tender age kids...!!

That was just wow moments when amber and adi..reassuring frm arnavji dat he will not fight with their mama and leave them again...!!you have always protrayd Amber's charctr quite matured to her age...(waise bi her larki shayed since birth hi aise hoti hain) my heart went out for little ambi when she started silently crying...uff dream come true hogayi bacchoun ki and daddy ki bi...(just coz of you katieji..😛) group hug uff my arshi family puri hogayi...😃
and loved how kiddo's didnt leave arnavji for a sec also till they hav'nt sleep...😊
(Maangi thi ek dua jo kabool hogayi...!!
Ummeed ki kali khilke phool hogayi...!!)

Then next how arnavji proposed every word of his soul touching...!! confession of khush first time...(i loved when she said "to hell with original plans") was blissfull in open garden..with rain...beautiful romantic scenario you created katieji...ipk ka rain scene ke takkar ka...loved it...😊
their intimate hug and kiss ke barey main toh i won't say anything...😳you know it already hum besharmo ko tho maza hi ata hain aur toh aur zyada ki hi arzoo hoti hain humey...!😉
(Bahoun ke darmiyan do pyaar mil rahey hain...!!
Jane kya bole munn dole sun ke badan dhadkan bani zubaan...!!)

great work katieji...me full to flat on your pen power again...😛
thanks for the pm...loved the update to the core...!!

Now have to wait for 2weeks for next nt fair haan...confession toh karadiya abb yeh mat kehna now what...😛

wil be waiting!!<3

Ulfat Ke Mod Pe Aisa Waqt Aaya Hain...!!

Batey Dil Ki Zuban Ne Sunaya Hain...!!

Nahin Roye Jo Kanto Ki Chuban Se
Usse Phoolon Ki Khushboo Ne Rualya Hain...!!

Quote

@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#552

super romantic and heart touching update...loved it ...can't wait for them to reunite with the rest of the family...continue soon...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

jolybudy

@jolybudy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#553

First my apologies for being late by 3 gud days for not commenting on this superb update..

OMG.. this was one of your best best best chapters I have read..

The way Khushi explained to the kids.. The kids confronting her with questions.. Awesome.

The reunion of Daddy and the kids... so naturally set up..

"Wont...wont you give D-d-daddy a hug?" Arnav managed a full sentence despite the painful lump in his throat.

Realized my cheeks had started becoming wet 😃

I loved the question that was asked.. "Is Amby going to be your favourite?"

I am just overwhelmed with the first part..

Second part.. was equally gud.. Arnav-Khushi reunion in the real sense 👏

Quote

Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#554

part 46
awesome dear...
excellent...
the kids are so happy...
and so is Arnav...
they are angry on Arnav for not being with them all these years...
loved it dear...
and Khushi has accepted his proposal too...
cont soon dear...

Quote

henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#555

i loved ur version of the daddy/buddy transition. i loved when amby said we have nver met anyone named daddy :)

want arnav/khushi to cross the barrier of physical relationship too bc that will take another lot of demons to fight :)

Quote

Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#556

OMG I LOVE YOU TO THE MOON AND BACK,

You my sweet sweet sweet darling have totally done justice with the update, a standing ovation and a big pat on the back.

The update was so unexpected and thanks for the tissue warning with me being a emotional person I was crying happy tears, lol.

The update was simply amazing, superb, phenomenal and mind blowing,

I love the fact Khushi finally disclosed the truth too the kids and her version of the truth and the past with Arnav was perfect,

I loved Arnav's reaction when the kids called him dad, such a beautiful and heart touching moment.

Arnav's reaction was expected as he was left completely stunned but his promise to both the kids was just amazing,

Love the way he thanked Khushi and was feeling so over whelmed and happy,

Wow Khushi mentioned she knew about the surprise and Arnav was ready to kill Aman, lol.

Wow I just love the way Arnav proposed to Khushi, his speech was just superb, amazing, beautiful, affectionate and full of promises.

Khushi saying yes was just perfect even though she did explain that he should have guessed her answer,

The kiss was a beautiful end to the update, so passionate and heart warming.

A beautiful and perfectly written update, I absolutely loved it.

You my darling are forgiven for the last cliffhanger, I love you.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next update xx

Quote

Uzii

@Uzii

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#557

Such a nice update n emotional one

Quote

aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#558

This was amazing. You did complete justice to it. 😊
I'm so happy that kids accepted Arnav easily and smoothly after some reassurances. Khushi handled the situation pretty well and told them the story in the best possible way.
The scene where the kids call him Dad for the first time was so heart-touching. It was really good. Loved it.
Adi was so cute to ask if Arnav would love Amber more 😆
I thought it can't get better than this in a single update but you just nailed this update with Khushi surprising him with her knowledge. Arnav's proposal was heartfelt and perfect much like Khushi's response. How can Arnav even think that she needed time!! Poor guy!! He is so self-doubting when it comes to them. but I'm happy that they addressed it. Yeah damn the original plans!! The most joyous moments are often impromptu.
completely enjoyed reading it.😛

Quote

sugarbird

@sugarbird

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#559

thanks for the awesome update. a perfect chapter. atlast they have confessed. the father and children bonding was mind blowing. so matured kids.. wonderful story..