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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina25dale

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome update!

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Posted: 11 years ago
mind blwoing update goldie..
just loved it..
sanjhanna is such a sweet girl.
she is very intelligent.
she handeled situation very carefully.
continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

mind blwoing update goldie..

just loved it..
sanjhanna is such a sweet girl.
she is very intelligent.
she handeled situation very carefully.
continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 14 A

Next day all both gaytri and Dhamsingh reached Mumbai to meet sameer n sanjana. Sameer as soon opened the door n saw gaytri n dhamsingh he came to to know that his mother is angry n she will leave no stone unturned to get him married to sanjana but sameer was also contended to see his father there as he knew that he is the person who will support him n will understand his feelings. Sameer said "Maa papa aap log yaha kaise aa gaye koi khabar bhi nahin di aapne" Gaytri said in irritated tone "Kyu hum yaha aise nahin aa sakte ab kya teri permission leni hogi hame" Sameer said "Nahin maa aise koi baat nahin hai par tum itne gusse main kyu ho?" Gaytri said "Accha tu apni manmaani kare aur main gussa bhi na kroon par ye tune accha nahin kiya hai sameer aur main iske kiye tujhe kabhi maaf nahin karrongi" with that she marched inside the room n went to fresh up. Sameer said to his father "Papa maa ko kya ho gaya hai" Dhamsingh said "waah beta chingari khud lagao aur phir poochte ho ki aag kyu lagi hai" sameer said "Papa plese paheliyo main baat mat karo batayiye ne kya hua hai?" Dhamsingh said "kal Ajay bhai saab ka call aaya tha ki sanjana is rishte se kush nahin hai usne mana kar diya hai sunte hi samamjh gayi kiye tumhari harkat hai tab meri payari biwi aur aapki payari maa aag ka gola bani hui hai aur mujhe bhi saath leke aayi hai taaki tujhe aur sanjana ko raazi kar sake" Sameer said "par papa maine kuch nahin kaha sanjana se"dhamsingh first put his hand on his head with a smile n pulled his ears n said "beta bhool gaye ki pehle main aaya tha duniya main uske baad tum bewkoof kisi aur ko banana"

Sameer smiled n said "kya karta papa maa ne koi option hi nahin choda tha main chah kar bhi sanjana ki zindagi se khilwaad nahin kar sakta tha is liye sab bata diya" Dhamsingh said "Bilkul theek kiya beta main tere saath hoon isliye saath bhi aaya hoon ki kisi ke saath kuch galat na ho waise wo hai kaun jiske chakkar main mera faulaad sa beta moom hua jaa raha hai" sameer smiles n before he could speak any thing aisha enters enters with a file which she had completed last evening n sameer has asked him to handover him as he was supoose to leave for the meeting directly. Aisha sees dhamsingh n gussed that he is sameers father she walks towards him n touch his feet n sameer says "papa ye -" dhamsingh cutting him short says"Ye aisha hi ho sakti hai jite raho beta" aisha smiles n hands over the file saying "Sir file ready hai main chalti hoon aapko meeting ke liye bhi nikalna hoga " then turning to dhamsingh says "namste uncle " and walks out of the flat. Dhamsingh smiled at this n says "Waise teri choice bahut acchi hai beta" n before sameer could say gaytri entered the room n said "Sameer mujhe sanjana se baat karni hai mujhe uske apartment main le chalo" Sameer took her to the sanjans apartment n went away as he had meeting. Gaytri entered the house n saw sanjana with gloomy face n sanjana too was startled to see gaytri there sanjana said "Aunty aap yaha?" Gaytri said "Haan main isliye aayi hoon ki ajay bhai saab ne mujhe phonre karke kaha kitum is rishte se kush nahin ho sanjana tum sameer ki dost bhi ho aur usse bahut acche se samajhti hoon to tumhe is rishte se mana kyu kar rahi ho? Amaine tumhe pehle hi sab samjha diya tha fir bhi tum""Sanjana said cutting gaytri short"haan aunty mujhse galti ho gayi maine yahi socha tha ki sameer ko shayad sirf attraction ho ya phir sympathy ho par yaha aake maine mehsos kiya ki main galat thi sameer sach main aisha se bahut pyar karta hai" Gaytri said "usne kaha aur tumne uski haan main haan mila di main jaake sameer se baat karrongi tum yaha se kahi nahin jaaogi beta atleast tab tak jab tak main ye sort out na kar loon" Sanjana said "Aunty par"" Cutting her short "koi par var nahin bahut manmaani kar lit um dono ne ab main dekti hoon sameer kaise mana karta hai" saying this she marched out of the house fuming in anger.

Here in office after meeting sameer returned back to ETF office n was tense too. Arjun saw this n entered his cabin n said "Sam kya baat hai pareshaan kyu hai tu?" Sameer said "Kuch nahin yaar maa aur papa aaye hai maa bahut gusse main thi unhe pata chal gaya hai kimaine sanjana ko sab sach bata diya hai isliye wo is rishte se mana kar rahi hai aur maa milne bhi gayi hai sanjana se pata nahin kya karegi waha jake mujhe bas is baat ka darr hai ki sanjana already tooti hui hai maa ki baato se kahin use koi aur chot na paunche " Arjun said "kya kaka kaki aaye hai aur kaki sanjana se milne gayi hai ?" Sameer nodded n said "haan par papa mere saath hai bas hum sahi mauka dhoond rahe hai maa is waqt bahut gusse main hai wo abhi kuch samajhne ki haalat main nahin hai isliye humne abhi tak kuch kaha nahin hai" Arjun said "sam main aur riya bhi loshish karenge ki kaki is cheez ko samajh le aur I hope ki sab bina kisi mess ke solve ho jaaye " Arjun n sameer were chatting n suddenly chotu n shree barged in n said "Sir bandra jail ke cell no.18 main jo quadi band thaw o bhaag gaya hai" sameer said "to ye tum mujhe kyu bata rahe ho?" shree said "Sir waha ke jailor ka call aaya tha unone kaha hai ki us quaidi ko aapne hi unke paas bheja tha aur wo koi aapki pehchaan ka hai" Sameer consentrated on his words n then realized n said "Oh God wo anant hai aisha ka bhai phir bhaag gaya shree tum backup forces ko bolo ki use dhoondna shuru kare pehle hi kum musibat hai kya jo ab ye bhi aa gayi" he turned n saw aisha standing with tears in her eyes sameer said "chinta mat karo aisha kuch nahin hoga anant tum logo ka kuch nahin bigaad sakta usse pehle hi hum use pakad lenge don't worry" with that he marched out of the cabin.

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PART 14 B

Aisha was a bit stunned after hearing that anant has ran away from the custody but she knew that this was his habit so she didn't react much as there was no case today so sameer called the day off bit early he went back home n there gaytri and dhamsingh was waiting for him. He entered n n wished his parents after a while gaytri said "Sameer meri baat hui thi sanjana se tune uske saath bilkul accha nahin kiya wo teri dost hai aur tujhse kitna pyar karti hai kam se kam is cheez ka to khayaal kiya hota aaj maine uski aankho main ek udasi dekhi hai uski aaj jo haalat hai uska ziimedaar tu hai sameer" Sameer said "Haan maa maine bata diya use sab or isliye bataya ki wo meri dost hai aur bahut acchi ladki hai main uske ssath koi dhoka nahin kar sakta hoon aaj shayad wo dukhi hogi par wo khud ko sambhaal legi aur aage bad jaayegi par sochiye yadi wo aapki baat maan leti to jo dukh use aaj mehsoos ho raha hai usse kai guna zayada dukh use tab hota job wo mere zindigi ka hissa banti na use wo pyar milta na wo haqq jo ek patni ka hota hai aapko uski aaj ki halat pe dukh ho raha hai aap uske dukh ka andaza tab laga sakti hai jab wo khud ko is ghar main isliye aaya samjhegi ki wo is ghar ko ek waris de sake aur apke bte ko ek aulaad wo meri dost hai or mujhe bhi uski fikar hai isliye maine use sab sach bata diya " Gaytri said "Sameer ye kya bol rahe ho tum kya main sanjana ko isliye apni bahu banana chahti hoon ki"" Sameer cutting her short said"to fir aur kya vajah hai maa aap acchi tarah jaanti hai ki main kya chahta hoon fir aap kyu sanjana ki zindigi daau par lagana chahti hai kya vajah hai is shadi ki?" Gaytri was lost of words n she could not reply to sameers question sameer said "Maa apne bte ki kushi main aap 3 zindgiya barbaad karne chali thi main jaa raha hoon baccho ko lene " with that he marched out of the room .

Gaytri slummed on the couch with stunned expression sameers sudden outburst had made her realize her mistake n dhamsingh said "Gaytri sameer sahi keh raha hai main bhi tumse tab se yahi keh raha hoon ye rishte zabardasti nahin jode jaate" here sameer reaches the scholls day boarding n asks for aadi n annu. Peon told sameer that they had already left for home sameer thought that they had left alone so he asked "Bacche kitne baje nikle yaha se ?" peon said "saab 1 ghanta pehle koi saab aaye the unke saath bacche nikal gaye" sameer was now more angry he said "ye security hai aapke school ki koi bhi aake baccho ko leke jata hai aap unke guardians ko batane ki zarrorat bhi nahin samajhte" peon said "saab unhone kaha tha ki wo aapko jaante hai aur wo aapke saath kaam karte hai isliye hamne bachho ko jaane diya" Sameer thought that kids are bit sensible they will not go with any stranger but they were innocent too. Sameer was hell worried for them he drove like a maniac ti galaxy towers n reached the apartment of arjun. Arjun saw sameer in fear n asked "Sam kya baat hai itna pareshaan kyu hai koi problem hai kya?" sameer replied "arjun baccho ko koi school se le gaya hai ye kehke ki wo mere saath kaam karta hai maine baccho ko dhoondne ki bahut koshish ki par bacche kahin mil nahin rahe hai pata nahin kaun le gaya hai baccho ko?" Arjun n riya were totally shocked to hear this n arjun said "Sam shant ho jao bacchho ko kuch nahin hoga hum koi kasar nahin codege unhe dhoondne main main shree aur chotu check karte hai har possible place pe tum ghar jao main tumhe bata rahunga " n sameer marched out of the house .

Arjun n all started their work here gaytri n dhamsingh also came to know that aadi n annu were missing from their school. Gaytri sarted crying n said "mujhe bahut fikar ho rahi hai baccho ki pata nahin kaha honge aur kaise honge" Dhamsing onsoled her n said "gaytri shant ho jao aur bhagwaan pe bharosa rakho baccho ko kuch nahin hoga jaha bhi honge wo theek honge" here arjun tried to figure out that who was behind all this so he started the investigation accordindly. After a while arjun called sameer n said "Sam pata chal gaya hai kaun in sab ke peeche tha" Sameer said "kaun hai batao mujhe main chodunga nahin usko" A rjun said "anant ne kiya hai" Sameer in a shocked way "Kya anant ne kiya hai?" arjun said "haan usi ne kiya hai usne kuch dosto ke zariye ye kaya tha chotu ke informer ne bataya hai hum location trace karne ki koshish kar rahe hai jaise hi mil jaati hai waise hi hum attack kardenge tum chita mat karo" Aisha also came to know this she was totally numb after hearing this that anant did all this she thought how can anyone stoop so low she knew that he was a brat n cheap person but he could go to such extent she never thought of that. She in no time reached sameers house n saw all three sameer gaytri and dhamsingh hell worried for the kids she said to weeping gaytri joining her hands "Aunty ye sab meri vajah se hua hai aaj bhai ne saari hade paar kar di hai maine nahi socha tha ki wo itna gir jaayega maine nahin socha tha par aap chinta mat kariye aadi aanu ko kuch nahin hoga main iske zimmedari leti hoon main aapke pota poti waapis aayenge aapke paas wo bhi sahi salamat unki jaan main apni jan dekar bhi bachaungi mera vishwaas kariye bachho ko kuch nahin hoga " saying this she left the room leaving behing stunned sameer gaytri and dhamsingh . Arjun aisha n shree were tracking every possible way to find kids n finally after half n hour a informer from aisha gave the correct location of anant n all were ready to nab anant n rescue the kids from his harmful clutches.

P RECAP: ETF trying to rescue kids n much more 😉

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Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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