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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pihu_angad

awesome update..

continue soon..

Thanks pihu dear
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
MSG FROM MEGHA : Guys msg was from megha as her reply didn't got posted

first sorry for late comment..
now come to update.
it was beautiful as usual.i just loved it..
you rock baby..
do continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.

Guys msg was from megha as her reply didn't got posted
Reply: Thanks megha dear
not an issue
Stay tune n keep commenting 😊
Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 12 A

They were about to enter the house when aisha said "Sir aaj aapne aur Annu ne jo kiya wo main hamesha yaad rakhungi aaj mujhe bahut accha laga" Sameer said "Aisha tum kehti ho naa hum dost hai aur dosto ke beech kamsekam formalities nahin hoti hai aur tumne to aur bhi bahut kuch kiya hai thankyou uske liye bahut chote ho jaayenge" Aisha smiled n enter the flat every one was present there n annu came running n hugged aisha tight n said "thankyou aisha aunty aapki vajah se mujhe 1st prize mila islye maine ckae bhi nahin kata sabse pehla piece main aapko aur papa ko khilaungi" she fed aisha n sameer and then to all annu was on cloud 9 today she asked aisha "aunty aap mujhe aur shikhauge na mujhe appse dance sikhna hai yadi main 7 days main practice karkr main 1st aa sakti hoon to yadi main daily seekhungi to app dekhna main poore school main sabse accha dance karoongi" aisha smiled n said"aur yadi tum aise hi karoge to ek din mujhse bhi accha dance karogi" annu aadi arjun riya chotu liza sameer shree every one enjoyed the party n dinner Every one went back to the home n aisha was about to leave when suddenly auuny came n handed over a gift pack to her n said "aunty ye aapke liye main gift leke aayi hoon I hope aapko pasand aayega"aisha said "par beta main aapse kuch nahin lesakti" annu said "kyu aap mujhe gift de sakti hai dance sikha sakti hai to mujhse kuch kyu nahin le sakti?" Aisha didn't want to beak annus hreat she opend it n saw a beautiful mug written "with love n effection from Anananya" aisha hugged her tight n thanked her after a while she made her way back home with tears of happiness in her eyes. She wanted to stop herself from getting close to kids n sameer but it was all vain she was totally helpless.

As soon as she entered her house avantika saw a gift pack n mug in her hand. She asked"Aisha ye kya hai kisne diya hai?" Aisha replied with a chocked voice "ye annu ne diya hai mujhe thanks kehne ke liye kyuki maine use dance sikhaya tha" Avantika looked n said "bahut payara hai thode hi time main bacche kitna ghul mil gaye hai "Aisha nodded n avantika said "Aisha mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai beta " Aisha said composing herself "haan maa bolo" Avantika said "beta main jaanti hoon tu koi aisa kaam nahin karegi jisse mujhe ya kisi aur ko takleef ho par teri takleefo ka kya wo khatam hone ka naam hi nahin leti hai main acchi tarah se jaanti hoon kitu sameer ko bahut pyar karti hai aur bachoo ko bhi par ye pyar tujhe sirf dard ke liava aur kuch nahin dega main tere zajbaat samajh sakti hoon par nahin chahti ki tujhe chot paunche is liye keh rahi hoon sameer aur bachoo se hosake to door reh jitna kareeb jaayegi alag hone main utni hi takleef hogi tujhe waise bhi gaytri ji sameer ke liye rishta talaash rahi hai kal ko wo ladki yaha aakar sameer par aur bachoo par haqq jatayegi to tu bardasht nahin kar paayegi" Aisha had tears in her eyes n she put her head in her mothers lap and said "maa itna kuch jhel liya to ye bhi sahi meri majboori dekhiye maa main to chah kar bhi nahin jaa sakti kyuki ETF chodna mumkin nahin hai mere liye kyuki aapki aur ghar ki zimmedari hai mujhpe aur yadi main kuch karke door bhi jana chahu to sir ko pata lag jaayega aur phir unke sawaalo ke jawaab dena mere liye aasan nahin hoga app pareshaan mat ho maa aapki beti itni kamzoor nahin hai aap jaake so jao " with that she moved to her room avantika saw her n with tears said "hey bhagwaan pata nahin meri bacchi ko aur kitna sehna padega pata nahn kab khatam hoga ye sab" with that she too went to sleep.

Next morning all started their usual activities n all were busy doing paperwork. Suddenly sanjana came and asked for sameer n seeing sameer in his cabin barged in saying "hi sameer kaise ho?" Sameer too wished her saying "hi theek hoon aur batao kaise aana hua?" Sanjana said "mera project finalize ho gaya hai next week se kaam shuru to maine socha tumhe thoda tang kiya jaaye phir baad main chance nahi milega" Smaeer smiled at her n said "waise main acche se jaanta hoon kitum kaam ho ya na ho mujhe pareshaan zaroor karogi" Sanjana said "haan karrongi what are friends for " Smaeer said"accha tumhe ek bahut acchi kabar sunau annu ne dance contest main top kiya hai use first prize mila hai kal humne celebrate kiya tha dekho" he shows her photograph of yesterdays party with team n kids n annu too holding prize. She said with a smile "sameer tumse ek baat kahu?" Sameer said "han kaho" Sanjana said "tumhare jab khud ke bacche honge na wo bahut lucky honge tum aadi aur annu se jitna pyar karte ho na that is so good n pure" Sameer said "chodo yaar bacche to bahut door ki baat hai jis ladki se main pyar karta hoon wo to mujhse shadi karne ko tayyiar hi nahin ab batao main kya karoon aur use kaise samjahoou wo mujhe bhaav hi nain deti hai" Sanjana said hitting him playfully "Sameer tum na buddhu ke buddhu rahoge koi ladki khud se aisa kehti hai kya? Aurab ye bhav dena kya hota hai main tab se ishare pe ishare kiye jaa rahi hoon aur tumhari buddhi main koi baat aasani se aati hi nahin well yadi aisa hi hai to aaj main tumhe propose karti hoon tum bhi yaad rakhoge" before sameer could understand sanjana bend down on her knees holding a rose in her hand n she shouted on the top of the voice "So Mr. Sameer dhamsingh rathore will u be mine for rest of my life "hearing this sameer stood totally numb n got embarrassed too.

SCROLL DOWN FOR PART 12 B 😊

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 12 B

Sameer was in anger n confusion too. Sameer held sanjanas wrist and dragged her out side the office of ETF. He took her to the caf nearby and said to her "Sanjana I hope jo kuch bhi tumne anader kaha u don't mean it ye sab mazaak thana please tell me" Sanjana now with a serious face said "Sameer first of all main tumhare saath itna ghatiya mazaak nahin karoongi ye sab bilkul sach hai aur main ye sab tumse pehle din hi kehna chahti thi par sab the isliye nahin kehpaayi main jaana chahti thi kitum kya chahte hoo aur jab mujhe laga ki tumhe bata dena chahiye maine tumse keh diya par please sameer isse pehle hum dost the aura age bhi rahenge tum yadi kuch kehna chahte hoo to please mujhse kehsakte hoo" Sameer said taking a deep sigh said "Look sanjana hum bachpan ke dost hai aur saath hi main tumhe bachpan se jaanta hoon u r an amazing person bahut kushnaseeb hoga wo jise tum apni zindagi main shamil karogi par isse pehle tumhara dil aur dukhe main bata doon ki main aisha se pyar karta hoon main tumhe koi jhooti umeed nahin doonga yadi main ye rishta kar bhi loon to ye dhoka hoga tumhare saath kyuki is rishte se na tum kush rahogi na main" Sanjana said "Sameer gaytri aunty ne kaha tha kit um kisi se pyar karte ho tab maine baat ko seriously nahin liya tha par aaj lagta hai maine bahut badi galti ki hai par yadi wo ladki aisha hai to mujhe samajh main nahin aata ki gaytri aunty ne aisha jaise acchi ladki ke liye mana kyu kiya hai?" Sameer teels sanjana every thing n she is hell shocked after hearing she had tears in her eyes n said "sameer tum jaante ho maine bahut waqt bahar guzara hai bahut se pyar karne walo ko dekha hai ladte hue jhagadte hue par tum jaise pyar karne walo ko main pehli baar dekh rahi hoon" sameer smiled to this n said "thanks sanjana tumne mere dil se bahut bada boojh Hata diya"

They chatted for a while n then sanjana said "sameer tumne kya socha hai? tum aunty ki ziddh ko jaante ho na wo aise nahin manegi ab kya karooge tum ?" sameer said "dekho sanjana maine yahi faisla kiya hai ki abhi kuch nahin karronga shayad abhi maa nahin samjhegi thoda samay hone do main khud baat karronga unse koshish karronga ki wo maan jaaye" Sanjana said "theek hai main khud bhi koshish karoongi aunty ko samjhane ki aur yadi meri madat chahiye ho to I am always there" with that she tried to move out but sameer noticed pain in her eyes n said " Sanjana tumhara dil dukhane ke liye mujhe maaf kardo I ma really sorry" Sanjana hiding her pain behind her smile said "You should be meri jaisi ladki ko mana karne ka anjaam to tumhe baad main bhugatna hi padega samjhe" Sameer said pulling sanjana in a hug "aaye chuhiya! thanks n love u" she replied with a painful smile "kaash karte sameer " then she suddenly exclaimed "Oh God ! maine jo raita failaya hai pehle usko to theek kare abhi tak tumhare office main bhukamp aa gaya hoga hame aise saath dekh ke" Sameer said "really chalo jaldi chalte hai" they started moving back to the ETF building. Here in office all were shocked n Aisha was toitally shattered from inside but she knew later or sooner this was bound to haapen so she tried composing herself by being aloof on her cubical n rest were in conference room discussing what just happened shree said "yaar ye sanjana ne to sir ko propose bhi kar diya wo bhi bhare office main "Riya added "mujhe aisha kie liye bahut bura lag raha hai shree pata nahin ye sab dekh kar uspe kya guzar rahi hogi?" Liza said "riya theek keh rahi hopata nahin sir ab kya karenge?" they sundeenly saw sameer n sanjana coming inside.

As soon as sameer n sanjana came inside sanjana walked to the conference room n sameer back to his cabin. Sanjana saw aisha missing n said "Hi guys aisha kahan hai?" Shree said "Shayad apne cubical pe hogi" She moved there n saw her working pain was evident in her eyes. Sanjana walked up to her n said smiling "Hi aisha kya main tumse kuch baat kar sakti hoon?" Aisha trying to act normal said "haan kahiye kya baat karni hai?" Sanjana said "Yaha nahin" She took her too pantry area n said "aisha tum jaanti ho bachpan se main aur sameer bahut acche dost hai wo mujhe tang karne ka ek mauka nahin chodte the par utna hi saath diya hai mera mere har maang poori karte the hame pata hi nahin chala ki kab hum bina bole hi ek dusre ki baate smajhne laage" Aisha said "par ye sab baate aap mujhe kyu bata rahi hai hai" Sanjana said "Is liye bata rahi hoon ki main sameer se pyar karti hoon aur usse shadi karna chahti hoon aur aaj maine jab use sabke saamne propose kiya to jaanti ho usne kya kaha yahi ki wo tumse pyar karta hai aur aunty ne is rishtey ke liye inkaar kar diya aur kyu kiya ye bhi main jaanti hoon par tumse itna zaroor kahungi ki sameer ki isme koi galti nahin hai main tunse sorry kehne aayi thi kyuki anjaane main hi sahi maine tumhara dil dukha diya" aisha was completely stunned at wahat sanjana said sanjana was about to leave when aisha stopped her n said "Sanjana rukiye" Sanjana stopped n turned towards her n aisha said "sanjana dil to aapka bhi dukha hai main jaanti hoon ki aapko kaisa lag raha hoga " Sanjana said "haan bura laga hai aur dil bhi tuta hai par isse zindigi nahin rukti hai aisha shyad kuch saalo baad mujhe is cheez par hasi aayegi ki maine sameer se pyar kiya tha par tum dono ko apna pyar poora karna hoga aisha kyuki main daave se kehsakti hoon mere dost jaisa tumhe koi nahin milega " n smiles she hugs aisha n continues "All the best aisha main dua karoongi ki tumdono ka pyar kaamyaab ho" with that she marched out n saw riya standing there with teary eyes n wished her too saying "bye riya see you "

P RECAP: How will parents of sameer n sanjana react when they will come to know about this n much more 😊

So guys how was it let me know n please by ur comments as I write for u guys so ur feedback is really important to me so keep giving me ur suggestions , bashing n appreciation it will only improve my work excuse typing errors if any love u all 😊

Regards Goldie 😊

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res... unres...me first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
Awesome update...
Loved Annu a lot...she is a sweetheart...😃😃😃
Sanjana sacchhi mein bohat smajhdar hai...😃😃😃
Loved Sam's honesty...
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Di...ab na mujhe sacchi mein lag raha hai ki aap antaryami ho...😆😆😆
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
Sanjana is really a true friend
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome update
loved it
Sanjana is really a true friend
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Thanks aarohi glad u liked it
Ya indeed she is a true friend n loves sam dearly
stay tuned n keep commenting 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehajain

res... unres...me first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Awesome update...
Loved Annu a lot...she is a sweetheart...😃😃😃
Sanjana sacchhi mein bohat smajhdar hai...😃😃😃
Loved Sam's honesty...
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Di...ab na mujhe sacchi mein lag raha hai ki aap antaryami ho...😆😆😆

Thanks sneha dear glad u liked the update
n yes sanjana bahut samajhdaar hai indeed she is a true friend n great human being 😃
Hmm Anatryami nahin par I know my readers well dear 😉 ise samajhne main tumhe thoda waqt lagega or may be u will know better when u start writing 😆😆
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Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Thanks sneha dear glad u liked the update
n yes sanjana bahut samajhdaar hai indeed she is a true friend n great human being 😃
Hmm Anatryami nahin par I know my readers well dear 😉 ise samajhne main tumhe thoda waqt lagega or may be u will know better when u start writing 😆😆

Me & writing...koi combination hi nahi hai...🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow
11 12 part
awesome
beautiful update
love it
cont soon

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