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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Damn it Shikha, tumne phadai chod ke full time job banna liya hai kya? Ke apne harek kahani se mere becharre dil ka ek aur tukda chudda lo gi?!another amazing OS dear, I ADORED their friendship, it was so lovingly perfect, the silence between the two spoke volumes, and i loved that little role reversal of Arnav's ears going red! Khushi's loving presence and persistance in his life was magical to witness, but just one question; why the hell did it take so long for them to realise their love and confess! Uff, no wonder you thought mine was sudden in moments! 22 years, with such a cute laad governor at her disposal how on earth did Khushi survive that long!!

Teasing aside I truly loved it dear :) x

Edited by manreet_gill - 11 years ago

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

unique theme.
Loved it v much.

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

wow, this is lovely, just the most amazing 'randomness' ever! this khushi is so awesome and still cute and arnav is so grumpy and khadoos but a total sweetheart 😛 i never know if i'm going to like the childhood arhi love stories as much because their story and their characters r kind of ingrained in my heart, but i really loved this one. u totally did them justice and it is a beautiful tribute to that episode ❤️

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Such a heart touching os<3

I loved reading it, specially Khushi's proposal

Write more!!

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ruark_22

@ruark_22

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Beautiful and heart touching!!!To tell you the truth the part that inspired you is one of my favorites.

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

awww the was cute :)
Loves it ^_^

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

This was very different from what I've read till now. I never thought that the episode could lead you to this.
It was beautiful. The little Khushi who understood that the guy may be a bit khadoos but is worth her friendship. She saw the man behind that facade of Laad Governor.
I loved it.

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ajoop

@ajoop

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved it😳😳😳😳

It was beautiful😳😳

Do write more stories similar to this please, would love to read them😳😳😳

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InspiredSoul

@InspiredSoul

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

ShikhaKhushi,

I have never read a story before on this forum that dealt with a character that is differently abled with so much sensitivity and dignity! Many people when they attempt to portray such a character, it somehow still ends up sounding condescending or pitying or sympathetic.

But your portrayal reflects a depth of understanding and maturity in your writing that has the readers focus on the beautiful love, friendship and romance instead of the difference in abilities. Because, bottom line, love outshines everything and breaks all barriers - physical and mental - and that is a lesson for all of us to follow in this world, and you conveyed it so poignantly in your story!

As a professional working with differently abled people, and also as a reader, I would like to thank you! 👏

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Brilliant story...she supported him from childhood ...she learnt the sign language to communicate with him...very touching...excellent story...thanks for the PM

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