Its intensity and the way u describe the scenes are fabulous. I'm not into intense story and so this was kind of a first and i was captivated by it, and by the characters! Reading it at one go, i could see the evolution of the characters. The Arnav you had described in the first chapters and the Arnav now, well like you said he didn't change coz of love or watsoever, khushi just brought out the better side of him, which he has been able to hide for years, it is all a matter of psychology!
And Khushi, well im glad u didn't describe her as a damsel in distress! There was a scene at the start after Arnav had the Latika rumor published and Arnav came home expecting Khushi to be crying, and then Khushi was all bold and confident before him. That is the khushi i loved, so bold yet having traits of innocence!You pulled it up all well!
There is so much to say, but ill end up saying that i appreciated this piece of writing of yours. You're talented girl, keep up the good job!
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