Smitar's: Arnav & Khushi OS: Thanking Arnav Parts 1~8 (completed) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super!!! Another OS on the way :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cool is this start of arnav series this should be fun
awww poor baby
well thats all he knows how to do
because he has trouble telling of his feelings for you
so he needs to show them somehow right
well khushi am sure it shall work out dear
come on you enjoyed the dance too
dont put all the blame on the poor thing
i know right
DM too wants her devotee to fall more for her rakshas
what to do its like this only
bet that made her happy
but only for a while am sure
she is bound to wonder where he is
oh ho anj samajha kariye
she is trying not to attract some person's attention
actually make it two
one her LG and the other your creep of a hubby
wonder if he is here too
bach gayi from them both
well that is for now
though buaji is right why do boys need to come for this function
no point to it is there
are ya sure dear you shall be spared
not for too long dont forget it is still his house dear
nk why do ya wanna see girls getting mehendi being applied
he is weird that boy
if aki could do that well that would be something but he isnt like that shame
please as if ASR has ever listened to anyone
and it is his house he would argue so he can go where ever he wants
and give khushi a right heart attack
sure you are gonna to get the glass of water
saare naukar bhag gaye kya that you had to come for it yourself
usually you would be screaming for the prakash brothers
but then if he does that then he cant see the one person he wants to see naa
but why do we want her alone
kaha toh aapse kuch jaayega nahin
ufff even he is hopeless in love but wont confess
well maybe he shall and soon
dudes you guys aint ASR you cant get away with it like he can
see as if he would miss this chance to see khushi
hain how does K sound like A
yeh write down A and then she will freak out and the person with whose name it begins shall smirk at her of course as he is doing at moment
sure you want a K khushi not anything else
well will it be anything else i wonder
guess shall find out
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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anj she is good aint she
well she has to do this
how else will she get her chotte hitched
and now she cant even refuse anj can you khushi
why is it in his room anj pray explain
poor girl she dont know what she is saying
well can we really blame her
she dont wanna go to his room naa
so she is saying a lot of rubbish at the moment
yup you have to go to your rakshas
anj didnt leave you a choice
funny how no one mentioned how they could have asked one of the servants to bring it
its not like they dont have enough of those
awww she can be so cute at times like this
she still dont get it does she
soon she will if he lets her that is
sorry sweetie but it just isnt your time
so he is there and he did hear you
now you gotta face that LG for sure dear
kya kare bechari aap ki di ne inhe phasa jo diya
warna she would never have come before you not willingly wanting to aggravate her acidity naa
what was that
oh god she is so funny an cute when she said that
its the other way around dear
who is she kididng course she is scared in his company
and not for the reason why she used to be once
god save this girl now
seems ASR is in one of his am gonna torture khushi in romantic way moods
he is so bad and naughty
ahhh but dont we just love this side of him
she has no choice but to do his bidding man
oh ho so this is how he wants the thanx
well about time he actually demonstrated what he wants from her
but this is bound to scare her even more
and of course she cant let him take what he wants
but even he isnt gonna let go of her either
he is bad for her heart aint he
and i hope you dont forget whats owed to you either mate
you better not
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww khushi he isnt there
you can relax
so her mehendi came out real good
not surprising at all right
and what i thought did happen
seems the mehendi lady has done it
made her K into an A
oh teri unhe lagta hai uncha sunayi deta that
so the blooper she made
now how is she gonna hide this from other
no buaji you are seeing it right
just her luck huh
well how can she goof that up
she didnt the mehendi lady did it man
warna do you really think she would go for A that easily
keep giving her such attacks and she might just faint your di
oh ho very eager are we to go to gupta house
may we inquire as to why yeah right as if we even need to ask him that
we all know why he is so eager to go to gupta house and why he is blushing
giving the game away this easily are we arnie cool
as if he will leave before meeting her
and you just told him khushi is coming so no way shall he leave till she cometh
not gonna work too long these excuses
they are gonna catch onto to you mate
you maybe ASR to the world but these ladies know you better
well mami investigate why he is so thirsty these days
am sure you will know the answer and soon
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hmmm we sure are very eager to see her arnie my boy
and there she is trying to make sure you dont see the A in her hands
as if that will escape his notice for too long#
he will find it sooner or later dear
nahin padosi se keh rahe hain
aapke alawa wahan koi hai khushi
but then you cant blame her for being this way
this LG has tendency of being rude with her
if all of a sudden he starts saying hi in that sexy voice of his its bound to fluster her naa
ahhh anything to escape the rakshas huh
it aint that easy dear no really it aint that easy
well have to give to her she sure is trying her best to leg it from here
pink sherwani hmmm nk really mate
and why khushi rest of the women in your house have stopped helping ya
ahhh but this whole nk khushi scene was making a certain someone see green of course
well of course he is
poor arnie cant see that nk can gel with her more easily that he can
and would want her away from nk hence the lift offer
ahhh she tried to escape the lift offering
but when has ASR ever let her escape him
coffee anj really do you think he cares about that now that khushi is here
man his coffee and anything else can go to hell
now its khushi time naa
no interference allowed by anything or anyone else
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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whats with him and holding onto her this much
and her trying to get away from him all the time
as if he is gonna let go of her now
oh ho khud toh bache jaisi hakat karr rahe hain and says why she is such scared baby
toh aisi harkat karenge and she wont get scared
dude as it is you confuse her like hell
and with your ever changing behaviour you sure arent making it easier for her either
ASR you should know by now she wont listen to ya
so you have to do what you usually do mate
well duh she was unconscious my man
how can she protest them mate
you go girl time to show him the mirror
well he did oush her to say all this
or else she would never have said this to him
yes ASR is not gonna win you any favours from this fair maiden
you will have to be arnie here am afraid
dont make it more worse than it is mate
warna god knows how much more she shall push you
and then god know how you will retaliate against that
arrey shaadi ka ghar hai hazaron kaam hotte hain ji
well he would know too if he paid attention to all the things going on in his house
but he has better things to focus his attention on i.e. khushi
ahhh yes dear she shall be leaving you and going away
but then thata the way it is
and if arnie plays his cards right you too will join your jiji in the same house
but thats a big IF of course dear
not saying he dont love you but well its hard for him
arnie if she stays back then what about poor aki
unka kya hoga
and it isnt the same is it when she shall be married
but again if he plays it right which i have doubts about then she wont have to separate from her jiji for too long either
waise you cant really blame her for saying that
from her pov she is right naa
and its best that buaji not know what khushi does
she had to break his bubble didnt she course
oh ho kya baat hai
there is hope for him yet
yeah you better keep an eye on her too
you never know what trouble she will get into if you dont
she attracts lots of trouble i tell ya
yes chor sorry chorni toh aap hain
inka dil jo chura liya hai ji aapne
do ya really wanna know what you stole from him
he is actually gonna tell her even better
oyye hoyye so its a date then
dont forget dear after the wedding on the terrace
ahhh he is finally gonna confess
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well of course he is all ready to welcome the guptas
after all his khushi is here naa
and he has been waiting for her for all you guys know
pacing up and down in his room till he got to see her again
oh ho so khushi is sad due to her jiji leaving her
but happy about her getting this as her sasural
and not to mention lost due to what LG said to her
well that is enough to make anyone lost for sure
haiyye rabba kya lag rahi hain
inhe dekh karr toh ASR toh gaye
and his control must be slipping thin i tell ya
well not too long to go now dude
aise agar yeh ghoomti rahi toh it shall be dangerous for her
but she cant help but look so gorgeous now can she
ahhh ha cant seem to get your eyes off a certain someone huh
though she did try
nk mate you are seriosuly one of these gonna get it from ASR
dont over do it or arnie wont spare ya
halkat jawani ka toh pata nain parr agar aap baaj naa aaye toh ek piece mein nahin rahenge aap
boy is someone bitten by green eyed monster or what
well can ya reallt blame the dude
aap toh chup hi rahiye nk
he looks sexy in black
shame she will never say that to him
even though she might be thinking along those lines
ahhh she still hasnt got it
when did he say that you stole from RM
he meant from him you have stolen a lot too
awww sometimes her innocence is so cute
why do you think he is looking at you as if he will eat ya like your fav sweets dear
khushi where does she get these ideas from
well its better she think this than get to know about what he really wants to tell her about
and girl he can never do that to you ever
he may be rude and mean to ya before but not now
hmmm good he read all this in her eyes
hope this makes it easier for him to confess
he better confess now before he is left with nothing
no point in delaying this is there dude
omg she threw the flowers at him
and she still dont know what she stole from him
kya kare iss ladki ka
waise ram milayi jodi hain dono ki
and she got caught and that too by her buaji
good question buaji for which she has no answer
sorry even DM cant help you now
yes sweetie arnie not anyone else
ahhh love it how she is giving him so much explanation for nothing
bless her she is so cute when she rambles like that
well this one rendezvous am waiting for patiently too
nothing much dear
take a chill pill yaar
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well thats the perfect time naa
when all will be busy with dinner then they wont notice arhi absence
and what he wants to say will need loads of time
and their absence musnt be noticed yet
hope he will say it all
all that she has stolen from him
and what he has stolen from her too
do not mess this up please
come one we all know how eager even you have been to see him
and know what he wants to talk about
hell yes you guys have loads to talk about
and it better be all out today arhi
oh give him time dear he will tell all that you have stolen
and your denials cant come true when you hear of what you have stolen
wow he sure began it right naa
but she had to come up with that excuse too huh
she is so funny at such moments naa
well yes she is more dangerous than a mere machhar
who said he was gonna call the police
he has something else in plan for you
some other punishment dear
hmmm she is a menace for him but so are you for her
before it was for different reasons and now different we hope
waah kya baat hai
he actually said that he needs her not a doc cool
oh ho so after DM its him in your mind
and she still dont know the true reason for him being on her mind
bless her no really
so he finally saw that A
waah kya baat hai ASR lage raho boss
he is getting closer to the reason of all this
loved that claim of his
hassshhh man finally he says it
stakes a claim to her heart and love
says why it matters to him
and confessed not to mention propose her man
ahhh well you cant blame her for thinking that
you did do the same to la too how can she believe you wont do the same to her
not easy for him is it to convince her dang it
ahhh she is right in her place
come one arnie make her believe ya mate
hmmm will that help you wanting to get married now
lets see what she says to that
awww he said he wants to marry her now thats better
and she confessed too thats good right
well its a start anyway him saying sorry for all he made her go through
good he is showing how desperately he wants to marry her
wow he would propose before all if she wishes wow he sure has changed
but love does that to you i guess
wow he really really loves her what can be better then this
but yes promise not to break her heart like you did to la
or else well then be ready to lose her
he actually told her all thats i his heart wow that was beautiful
awww that was perfect moment
and no one ruined it by interrupting them thank god
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeayyy new story!
can't wait for it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting. An Arnav story. Looking forward to it.

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